Spoiler: Music <> Edward Carwell <> -Basic Information- Full Name: Edward Carwell Age: 42 Gender: Male Race: Ailor Eye Color: Brown -Core Concept- -Inventory Information- Arming Sword - A simple steel arming sword, nothing out of the ordinary. Shardbow - A Qadir shardbow, used in long range combat against demons and the like. Rondel Dagger - An old Rondel Dagger given to Edward by his father, the tip is still sharp. Unionist Eye Necklace - A necklace in the shape of a Unionist Eye, once belonging to his mother. Rope - Twelve feet of medium strength rope for whenever it is needed. Holy Water - A vial of holy water used in the curing of Sanguine, used often in his field of work. Carwell Signet Ring - A ring with the sigil of his house, used to seal letters of importance and to mark him as the patriarch of his ruined family. -Skill Information- Total Points: 47 +20 Command Skill (+20 from points) +5 General Tactic Skill (+5 from points) +10 Fast Blade Combat Skill (+10 from points) +4 Magical Knowledge, Sanguinology (+4 from points) +5 Light Bow Combat Skill (+5 from points) +3 Medical Sciences (+3 from points) Body Shape Physical Stat: 10 Fast Blades + 5 Light Bow = 15 Body Shape: Athletic Body Fat: Average Languages Common (Taught by family) Anglian (Local Language) Special Traits/Spells/Mutations: -Visual Information- Eye Color: Light Brown Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Swept Back Skin Color: Pale Clothing: Practical and protective. Height: 5'11 Visual Information Expansion: One of Edward's most distinguishing features is a dent in his skull. He received it on the battlefield when a rock from a sling left him bedridden for three weeks. The dent is on the right side of his head and is around the size of half a golf ball. Edward's most common outfit is wool and leather garb, simple and effective. He rarely exchanges this outfit for much else as he has worn it for the majority of his life. When he must for special occasions however he usually wears earth colored garments of cotton, with some mild jewelry or a cape. -Personality and Abilities- Choose your Character Alignment True Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type ISTJ-A Choose your Character's Religion Unionism (9/10) -Life Story- Age 0-10: Born in the Angle Veer, Edward was the second son born to Lord Aumon Carwell. He suffered through a miserable childhood rather early in life, despite being a part of the nobility. His birth nearly killed his lady mother, whom was never the same afterwards. Edward was an exceptionally short and weak boy growing up, which was all the worse in a family that valued physical prowess quite highly. By all accounts Edward was a boring boy, spending most of his time in prayer rather then play. Age 10-18: In his adolescence Edward was groomed for leadership, just as his brothers were. He learned how to command men in the Regalian school of Marshalry, which he graduated from with flying colors. Edward was considered a good commander, but cared little for it. His true desire was to deal with the sanguine whom he discovered dwelt in much of the run down regions of the Crown City. All the same Edward joined the army to appease his family. Age 18-42: When the Chrysant war began Edward was quickly shipped out among the first waves. He hated the hot climate, and the Allar that occupied it. In his second battle he engaged a Cro-Allar in single combat, and was promptly destroyed in second. He had the end of a spear swung at his head by the giant, nearly turning his brains into mush and leaving him with a small dent in his head that he still has. He spent three weeks in bed, and was sent back to the front as soon as he could walk again. Edward saw out the entire conflict, and promptly left the army upon it's ending. Following this Edward sought to deal with the Sanguine he despised. He felt that the Crimson Inquisition was the best avenue to accomplish this, despite the fact that he was not quite as fanatic as some of it's other members. He served the order ably for well over a decade, facing a number of dark enemies in his time. Age 42-Now: Eventually the Crimson Inquisition fell apart for a while, and Edward decided to return to service in the military. He lead men during the Lo Rebellion and then retired quietly within the Angle Veer countryside. When House Carwell crumbled to pieces it took Edward by surprise, he was horrified to learn that his once proud family were now just average commoners. He took the first ship he could to Regalia, and called upon all his surviving family to join him there to help not only restore the family name, but deal with the demons that have infested the Crown City.
@Last_Link here we go: The only concern I have is Edward being both a Darkwald and a Marshalry graduate. Darkwalds must enter Virgadulvas Castle at at 14, and remain there for 10 years. It also seems very strange that a Darkwald would enter the Marshalry if both can be done (which I do not know the answer for rn, but it is questionable.) I also don't like the idea of just resigning from the Darkwald Order. Being a Knight is a lifestyle choice and commitment, and he would've flunked out if he showed any signs of indecisiveness. I would personally remove the Darkwald aspects, since it doesn't seem to fit the character based on the rest of the app. He's a commander-styled man, not a knight who lives by a strict code of honor. Either remove Darkwald, or remove Marshalry. Rectify this inconsistency and tag me when you're done.
Tenpenny Armies weren't created until after the Chrysant War. Make that minor adjustment and you'll be good to go.
