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  1. MrNoot1

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    Claudane Guentyr

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    Basic Information

    • Full Name: Claudane Guentyr.
    • Age: Twenty Four.
    • Date of Birth: December 4th, 285 AC.
    • Gender: Male.
    • Race: Hinterland Ailor.
    • Sexuality: Hetrosexual.
    • Preferred Weapon: Music (also a Warpick).
    • Eyecolor: Violet

    Skill Information
    (50 points)
    +9 Points for Learning

    • Melee Combat
    • +11 One-handed Blunt Combat (+11 Points).
    • Special Training
    • +5 Perception Training (+5 Points).
    • Musical Art
    • +15 Vocal Art (+10 Hobby Points & +5 Points).
    • +10 Instrument Art (+5 Points & +5 Racial Boost).
    • Nature Art
    • +15 Sailing Art (+15 Points).

    Body Shape:

    • 11 Combat + 7.5 Sailing Art + 5 Seizing Innovation = 23.5 Body Stat.
    • Type: Athletic.
    • Fat: Low Body Fat.

    Languages:

    • Common (Free Language).
    • Breizh (Parental Language).

    Racial Abilities & Archbloodism:

    • Racial Abilities (Link)
    • Ailor Familiar - Black Feather
    • Dark Empathy
    • Seizing Destiny
    • Seizing Innovation
    • People of many Tongues
    • Archbloodism (Dragon Loyal) (Link)
    • Primal Self Repair
    • Rhaakhr's Will
    • Rhaakhr's Wall
    • Rhaakhr's Wind

    Appearance Information

    • Claudane stands at around 5'8", giving a more athletic-ripped build due to the exercise that he gets from being out at sea. He dresses in a fancy naval coat with average loose pants, along with leather boots to keep himself dry out at sea. His hair is a mix of black and very light blonde, but is more towards black while also being let loose but about medium length compared to most male hairstyles.

    Life Story

    Birth and Childhood

    • Claudane Guentyr was born to Stephane and Jessardenne Guentyr on December 4th, 285 AC in the city of Kintyr.
    • Claudane would soon be followed by a sister after a few years of his own birth. He and his sister, Susanne, held a slight rivalry as siblings, but still loved eachother.
    • The boy was raised upon Breizh Unionism, melding his mind into becoming a devout Unionist in life. However, for the most part, he would spend his childhood on the shores of Kintyr, enjoying the ocean breeze and the waters that rested around.
    • While at one of the many Breizh festivals, the little boy heard one of the many choirs that sang during such festivals. This inspiried the boy to believe in more than just simply living, but doing more with his own life.
    Adolescence and Young Adulthood
    • He began to study the art of vocal music, even learning a bit of the lute at the age of 14. However, his skills with the lute couldn’t be compared to the time he spent learning vocal music.
    • At the age of 16, he would go to visit his sister, who had became a Wards of Fae Squire. This stirred some tension with the two, as his sister was shining out more between the two due to her Knightly decision.
    • This struck the boy to become more than just a bard, but to involve himself with something even greater.
    • His parents, who were supportive with his choice, helped him join the Imperial Regalian Naval Academy at age 18, where he spent the next three years learning the art of sailing and naval leadership.
    Adulthood and Present
    • Claudane’s studies kept him busy until the rightful age of 21, in which he would use his new found skills to join the navy.
    • His time within the navy was eventful, as he would assist within the Dread War as a sailor for the Regalian Navy.
    • On the trip returning home after the war, he would fall overboard during a horrible storm. He had hit his head upon the side of the boat, in which he was barely saved by the quick work of his fellow sailors. However, his life changed as he’d slowly recover from the near-death experience.
    • For whatever reason, his vision was violet and Claudane had returned as an Archblood.
    • His new found affliction made him curious on the unknowns of the world, while remembering all the magic within his homeland. He had begun to learn more about the unknown, about his cursed affliction. He learnt more about Archbloods for the next two years out at sea.
    • Now, after so long, he had decided to travel to the city of Regalia to join the rest of his family in the Crown Isle, unknowing what adventures awaited him there.
    Progression Information
    • Warrior Level 2, Admiral Level 1
     
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    Approved! Looks good, Noot
     
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    With the new template update, I have edited it to get it situated to the new setup, as well as moving 5 of the 6 points from Arcanology into Sailing Art
     
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    Don't this requires a re-review, but he is now a Dragon Loyal Archblood, just to update abilities.
     
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    its all good, ty for informing me
     
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    Updated the Ailor Abilities and I have changed his +11 Sword Combat to +11 One-handed Blunt Combat to add something a bit more interesting for when he fights
     
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