Clairess Renfield

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    "Don’t you ever want to watch the world burn under your feet?"

    Basic Information

    Full Name: Clairess Renfield
    Age: 50 (Would look 18 due to immortal aging)
    Gender: Female
    Race: Zolathar Kathar
    Sanguine Bloodline: Von Kerle (Infected)
    Preferred Weapon: Bows, Greataxe, Dagger

    Skill Information:
    Total Points: 50 (50 points + 10 Hobby points)

    Combat (38 points)
    +20 Heavy Ranged Combat Skill
    +8 Light Ranged Combat Skill
    +5 Greataxe Combat Skill
    +2 Dagger Combat Skill
    +3 Linguistic Science

    Talent ( +12 Points)
    +10 Strength Training
    +2 Vocal Skill

    Hobby (10 Hobby Points)
    +5 Theatre Arts
    +5 Cooking Art

    Physical Stat: 25 (Bloodline Cap)
    Body Shape: Toned
    Body Fat: Average

    Languages:
    Common(given)
    Modern Altalar(learnt from mother)
    Daen(learnt from father)
    Kathar Altalar(linguistic science)

    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations

    Von Kerle Base Kit:
    Servile Collar I
    Servile Collar II
    Afflicted Life I
    Blood Feeding I
    Blood Eyes II
    Blood Curse I
    Vampiric Form I
    Cursed Soul I

    Von Kerle Bloodline Kit:
    Primal Horror I
    Belliard Horror I
    Super Self II
    Super Self IV
    Super Self V
    Blood Dance I
    Blood Dance II
    Blood Dance III
    Vampiric Familiar II
    Power Howl I
    Corvaic Will I

    Common Mutations:
    Kathar Binding I
    Kathar Binding II
    Arken Sense I
    Arcane Mastery I

    Kathar Ability Pool:
    Flux Shift VI
    Emotion Sense I

    Tribe Mutation:
    Void Storage I
    Flux Shift V

    Visual Information:
    Eye Color: Blood red with black eye whites
    Hair Color: Bone white hair
    Hair Style: Long and straight
    Skin Color: Grey skin
    Clothing: White dress with gold designs
    Height: 5’9

    She would gain white horns sprouting on the sides of her head, resting on her head like a crown. Her white dress would melt into black but her hair would still be bone white. She would also gain tattoos on her shoulders (aesthetic).

    Personality and Abilities:

    Choose your Character Alignment:
    |Neutral Evil| As a wise man once said. "Don't want none, don't start none." Cause trouble with the wrong person might just get you killed.

    Choose your Character Personality Type:
    |Entrepreneur| ESTP-A / ESTP-T | "Risk it all to win, or play it safe and suffer defeat." - Guy Gagne (Turbo)

    Choose your Character's Religion:
    Unionism | 0.5/10 | "Clair grew up with Unionism as a close thing to her heart, once infection took hold of her psyche, her faith was abandoned."

    Life Story:

    Birth



    Born on the first of March, 283 A.C to a Solvaan Altalar mother Angeleine Renfield and a Daen Ailor father, Porter Renfield, she was raised within an upper class family that belonged to The City of Daenshore. With her mother serving as a financial advisor for quite some people, her father was frequently away as he had worked on the sea. It was a safe life, to say the least as her mother had wished for her to soon follow her with financial work.


    From an early point in her life, Clairess had always been fond of the spirit. The idea of a higher being brought joy to her, and so whatever she had picked up within mass and teachings she had held close.


    Childhood (10-18 years)



    Growing up surrounded by extreme amounts of support, she had already felt set for life from a very young age. Being tutored at home by her own personal teacher, she had picked up on many skills that had helped her to this day. It was one day that she was roaming the streets with her mother that she had seen a man that was extremely well at archery. She took interest as soon as she saw how graceful it looked.


    It came to a day when her mother was trying to educate Clairess further on economics of the place they lived when she had finally blurted out she wished to be an archer. Which of course, her mother found quite silly but chose to humour the idea and let her make her own choices. Taking another tutor for herself, she began learning even more about archery and how an arrow could fly against the wind so gracefully.


    Adulthood (18-50 years)


    It was when the Altalar woman had turned eighteen she was already out the door. Fairing her mother goodbye, though her father was still not around to see her leave. Leaving the thriving City of Daenshore, the woman had begun to travel, all the way till she had finally at last made it to Shevaix province where she decided to finally at last practice to perfect her archery.


    Though it took her quite a few tries, Clairess at last had made it successful. Using her archery skills to hunt in the vast flat plains of the Shevaix province, she began to sell whenever she could.


    It was till one day the woman had heard a peculiar sound within her tall farm, and without thinking more of it she went to investigate. There, rummaging about was what seemed to be a feral sanguine which she had somehow provoked. Being taken down, the woman held no chance against them which soon led into the ultimate issue of infection. Luckily not dead, the woman had struggled to get back to her home where she had done her best to fix herself up.


    It wasn’t till the fever broke she knew something was wrong, but for some reason she had felt like leaving her own home would hurt her. She had isolated herself for beyond a week before a transformation was complete. Once a sweet, innocent Altalar woman she had now been taken into the Dorkarth bloodline which she sees as a gift.


    It was a feeling of power that motivated Clairess to live the best she could as this, and so she had begun to enter into the cities. Feasting on whomever's blood she could, before she got bored of such and wanted something much worse. Seeing how people behaved without a care in the world ignited something within her. She wished for destruction among them, for them all to suffer and be beneath herself.


    It wasn’t till she heard distant talk of a place called Regalia, she had taken interest in it. She had hidden away on one of the many ships that docked in Daenshore to take her there. After many tries that had her ending up in places that she didn’t even though, it was through chance she had at last made it to Regalia. Now there, she has found people more of her kind, though still wishing for them to all be beneath her. Living within the sewers of the holy city, she wishes for the world above to crumble down.
     
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    Claimed for review.​
     
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    @fantuinn Changed Auld Shielding to Auld Displacement if that's ok.
     
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    @SenpaiKookie Re-Approved. In the future, please mark your app as needing a re-review.​
     
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    okie, thank you!
     
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    @KK134 Thank you for the catch. @fantuinn I re-edited Archan lineage to Woaden lineage.
     
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    @fantuinn I changed Clairess' main weapon from Dagger into Throwing Knives, took away her 12+ Fast Blade and 8+ Unarmed and changed it to 10+ Throwing Combat Skill for combat, and adding the 10 points into 10+ Athletics under Body.
     
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    @fantuinn I updated the character because of the new Dorkarth update. I also made her 50 years old (she used to be 25 +5 free + 10 catharsis). I used the 25 prof points on 10 fast blades, added 5 to throwing combat and 10 on perception training.
     
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    @Caelamus I updated my info due to new prof update.
     
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    @Caelamus I made a mistake on application. I changed red eyes to green eyes since Doughalls cant have red eyes unless feeding.
     
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    @Caelamus I changed Mountain Skyward to Mountain Healing.
     
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    @Caelamus I changed 20 fan combat to distribute 10 combat points to the 5 throwing combat to make it 15 throwing and I distribute the other 10 to 10 stealth rogue.
     
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    @Caelamus I re-edited my application since there is no longer Throwing Combat Skill.
     
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    claimed for re-review
     
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    Heya! Everything seems to be in order. Approved.
     
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    @Woodwork I re-edited my application and switched Clairess' bloodline from Doughall to Dorkarth because I feel like she would work better with that bloodline.
     
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    @Woodwork I switched my Dextrous Rogue Skill to Burgling Rogue Skill and my Rapier skill into Greataxe skill
     
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    @Woodwork I wanted to retcon my character so she could be half Altalar and half Ailor. I changed her race and some of her storyline, but not anything else.
     
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    If there are any issues, please tag me! Thank you!
     
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    @Woodwork My character has been Dread Rebirthed so I updated her information. If there are any issues, please tag me. Thank you!
     

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