(Side note: I've decided to rewrite my application for Bram Eversnow. The sheet format I used for him is currently outdated, and he as also changed so much that I thought it was fitting to rewrite him. So here goes.) (Also, I am retarded at making spoilers work. So, sorry about putting the reviewer through this.) ~Basic Information (Required)~ Full Name: Bram Eversnow Age: 45 years old Gender: Male Race: Altalar Main Ambition: More knowledge Special Permission: N/A Spoiler: Basic Information Expansion Bram currently resides in Long Wind Road, Regalia. Bram’s been here for around seven years now, and isn’t planning on going anywhere else for the sole reason of his friends living in the area too. He is mostly occupied by either drinking in the tavern, roaming the sewers aimlessly, healing wounded people or simply enjoying time with his friends. Bram was born in a small town in Fendarfall, born to Anduin and Sophia Eversnow. He had an older brother by the name of Stijn Eversnow. The family was very small, and only consisted of four members. Furthermore, he has a nephew by the name of Tom Eversnow, and an uncle named Dennis Eversnow. A very dark ambition of Bram is to finally be able to end his life. Being suicidal, it’s a thing always in the back of his head, and he is willing to hopefully make it reality sometime in the future. ~Visual Information (Required)~ Eye Color: (single color specified) Oak brown Hair Color: (single color specified) Black (Bram had a Alt-Regalian ancestor, therefor he is both Altalar and has his black hair) Hair Style: (Simple name description) Messy, adventurous styled hair Skin Color: (Simple color description) Slightly tanned, though still leaning to a disctinct white color Clothing: (Simple style description) Dark blue shirt, with grey parts of cloth on his shoulder, along with gray pants and brown boots. Height: (Size in either feet and inches or cm) 6’4 feet Weight: (Weight in either pounds or kilos) 165 pounds Body Build: (Simple shape term) Very slightly muscled, but mostly slender. Weapon of Choice: (If mage, what is the type and subschool of magic, and ability level?) Mage level in Healing Light and Barrier Light, able to use Supreme Magic Spoiler: Visual Information Expansion Bram’s oak brown eyes, which are slightly smaller than ordinary elf eyes, usually have a happy spark in them. His mouth is mostly in a smirk, and the corners of his mouth are more than often lifted slightly. His ears are pretty large and pointy, like an Elf’s ears should be. He doesn’t have a particulary large forehead, and his chin isn’t really too sharp, leaving him with a well rounded face.While he doesn’t have any freckles, distinctive scars can be seen around his left ear and at the side of his neck. His hair color is pitch black, and the style is almost always a messy bunch of hair, as if someone ruffled it a second ago. Bram is around 6’4 feet tall, and around 165 pounds. His skin is a slightly tanned color, and Bram has a thin body structure, with a few muscles here and there, though definetaly not too much. His legs are most likely the strongest part of his body, so he won’t be too easy to knock down despite his strength, or lack of it. His torso and arms are a bit weaker than his legs. Bram has very little fat, same goes for any body hair. The Altalar also has a small scar on each wrist, as well as a larger one diogonally spread across his back. Bram can mostly be seen with a dark blue mixed with black colored jacket, with two bracers at the wrists. He has attatched some grey cloth onto his shoulders for variety. Though only visible in very few spots, he also wears a red colored shirt underneath his jacket. Going further down, a brown colored brown belt is holding up his grey, clothen pants. At last, Bram wears two brown leather boots, which arenn’t too heavy. A ring is worn on his ringfinger, indicating his marriage, but furthermore he carries no accessoiries. A small pocket knife is always in his, well, pocket. His right one, for clarification. Bram’s voice, at first, can be seen as a very jesting-like voice, almost sarcastic in some way. He speaks rather fast, with a tendency to stutter in awkward situations. Bram tends to cut words of, examples being: ‘e, instead of he, Al’ight, instead of alright, so on so forth. He has a heavy Scottish accent. He is capable of speaking Elvish and Common language. ~Personality and Abilities (Required)~ ~Personality Traits~ . Anger issues. Usually, he can keep it in check, but whenever he sees a person who he hates, or generally dislikes, The elf can get pretty mad. It ranges from a few insults to using every muscle in his body to generally abuse the person in question, after which he calms down. It leaves people and friends of him in awe, usually making their relation with him a lot worse after they have seen the havoc he can create, even though the anger only lasts for a bit. Recent events only made these issues more violent and also more frequent. · Forgetful. Bram usually has a lot of things on his mind, mostly due to him learning almost every day. When he meets a new person, he’ll have trouble remembering their names for the first few weeks. It can lead to people getting mad about he forget their name, and wandering off.This can be a minor mistake, like forgetting a house number, but also something big, like paying so many regals too much, making it another easily abusable trait. . Impulsive. Bram is a very impulsive person. Seeing someone in pain will make him rush over, despite the dangers that are lurking around. It can lead for him to get into messy and dangerous situations, often putting the lives of other people at risk because of his impulsive and unthoughtfull actions. His brain often shuts down and goes into auto-pilot with the decisions he makes, though often, when with other people, they are able to correct him. · Honest. Though his dad lied a lot to him, his mother taught him that being honest is more important than anything. This has stayed with him until this very day, in remembrance of his mothers honesty. This makes him a horrible liar, and if he manages to lie anyway, its a horrible one. This can, however, lead into situations where Bram can be seen as ''Too honest". His ex-wife practically cheating on him only made him realize more how important honesty is, and how lieing can severly damage other individuals’s lives. · Sympathetic. Another trait his mother had, Bram really is a sympathetic person. He cares more about others than himself. This can easily be abused by others as well, and as a result, he is careful with being sympathetic, but it will still leave him as a caring person to the people in need. He simply cannot cope seeing others in pain, and he will move to their rescue if he can, even if he was the one to cause the damage onto them in the first place, and though his anger issues result in him harming others from time to time, he will try to make it up to them for he doesn’t want to see them hurt. . Optimistic. At least most of the time, Bram is a very optimistic person. Even when people are in serious doubt, Bram will simply speak the words ‘It’s going to be okay”, because he is so optimistic about it. He tries to see everything in a positive way rather than a negative way, desipite his suicidal thoughts and severe depression. He hopes that he can make other people happy by staying optimistic and cheerful, so that they don’t have to be sad. ~Strengths~ · Kind hearted. Bram is the kind of person to look over someone’s flaws, and to make sure they are at comfort with him. It makes sure that people get a good image of him, and generally helps in making contact with new people, seeing as shyness gets into the way of doing so. He thinks every person has a good side in them, and he wants to bring this good side to their attention as much as he can. Though when Bram dislikes you, its gonna be a tough time to earn back his kind-heartedness, and it will be accompanied by his anger issues. Those issues make it even more tough for him to trust a person who abused his mindset. . Quick learner. Bram is able to pick up and learn new things fairly quickly. Combined with his lust for new knowledge, anything new he might encounter will immediatly catch his attention, and he will focuss onto it so he can learn it. This can go for tricks with Light Magic, to perhaps even crafting an instrument of some sorts. . Strong willed. Bram’s power of determination and will is off the charts, and if he starts something, it’s going to take a lot of force to make him stop. He won’t go out of the way for a mental challenge too easy, and more than often his sheer willpower will guide him through even the toughest of situations. However, despite his will, his suicidal thoughts still outbeat them from time to time. ~Weaknesses~ . Anger Issues. His anger issues have a wide variety. From insults to smacking people into the nearest wall, he can get quite aggressive when under the influence of hatred. Though they don't happen regularly, because he wants to keep his image as a good person, when they finally do happen, he won't stop until he has either emotionally or physically destroyed his opposition, and few people will be able to bring reasoning in Bram when in his rampage. . Weak. He doesn’t practice a way of combat, and due to his little muscle capacity he is quite a weak, almost fragile person. Though his rampages make him look imposing and strong, in reality he has little force that he can use. Instead, he relies on hitting people in the right spot, and even then it’s hard for him to actually hurt someone physically. . Depressed. Bram is currently suffering from depressive issues. Due to rough times both in the past and currently, he has grown to this depression more, leaving him rather sad and emotional when the subject is discussed or when he's alone. . Semi-Alcoholic. Though he intends on not showing his interest in alcohol, Bram turned out into a semi alcoholic due to his depression. Whilst trying to drink his sorrows away, he grew to have a need of alcohol. It slowly faded as time passed, though when he does get into drinking an ale, he’ll gulp down a few more for sure. His strong will makes him reject as much alcohol as he can, but sometimes he can’t take the urge to drink anymore. Spoiler: Personality and Abilities Expansion The only quirk Bram has is the tendency to stutter when he gets shy, gets in an awkward or sad position, or when someone starts flirting with him. Bram is a well praised cook by his friends, and he enjoys cooking as well. He often tries new recipes, and sometimes even thinks of his own. While rusty, the Altalar has an almost stunningly natural ability to play the flute. The instrument is the one he enjoys playing the most, and if he ever gets the chance, he’ll do so to relax. ~Likes~ · Nature. Being raised on a farm has made him very attached to nature. Bram also enjoys taking long walks in the park allowing him to be surrounded by nature, he loves everything accositated with nature all from Fauna to various plants and herbs. The nature around him tends to sooth and calm him down. It allows him to clear his head, and to think more straight. . Good food. Bram enjoys having some good food for him to eat, no matter who cooked it and no matter with what ingredients, though he doesn’t eat too much. If he finds someone who can cook quite well, he’ll tend to befriend them. . Honesty. And even more so, honest people. Bram tends to enjoy seeing people tell the truth, no matter how harsh it is. It gives him a good feeling when the truth is told, and it makes him want to be honest himself. ~Dislikes~ . Cheaters. Not only a dislike, but now more a hatred to cheaters. Bram would go out of his way to hurt someone who cheated on a friend of his, simply because no one deserves to be cheated on. It’s hard for him to stay befriended to a cheater, and even his (ex)-wife cheated on him, which is most likely the cause of this dislike. . Nobles. He doesn’t have a dislike to all nobles, but most of them got their names on his bad side. While he is smart enough not to hurt a noble, he’ll often make a sarcastic remark to them, just to piss them off. He mostly dislikes them for their discrimination, and their feeling of ‘being something higher’. In his eyes, everyone is equal. . Silevons. Only one Silevon being an exception to this, Bram grew a burning hatred towards anyone that wears the surname ‘Silevon’. His ex wife ran off to a Silevon fairly quickly after she divorced him, making him stare in disgust at any of the Isldars. If it wasn’t for his kindness, he probably would’ve tried to kill one, if not more of the family members. Spoiler: Relationships Kona Litherin - Eversnow (@Mayaran). Kona is Bram’s wife, and they live their happy little life in his not so little home. Philifia Frost (@VintageMystic ) Bram’s ex-wife, who he, somehow, is still friends with. Bliss Willow (@KeysMan87) A dear friend of his, someone he absolutely trusts with anything and everything. Medivh Arcanum (NPC) His mentor in Light Magic, and a dear friend to this day. Darion (@MasterMetaphor) Another dear friend of his, who he trusts just as much as Bliss. Whitlock Carswell (@Anseran) A recent addition to his friend list, but already has grown slightly attatched to him. Amber Darkwood (@Degumonkey) His ex-girlfriend, still a friend of his since she didn’t cheat on him of some sorts Mae (@xSketchedCrystal) A nice girl, with the soul of one of his oldest friends, who he presumed dead. ~Life Story (Required)~ 259 AC: Birth of Bram Eversnow Anduin kills Sophia Eversnow, tries to convince Bram it was a suicide. Anduin tries to murder both Bram and his Brother, but fails. Anduin gets killed. Bram moves in with his uncle, living there untill he turns 18. He starts learning Light Magic at the age of fourteen, under the watch of Medivh. Moves to Regalia at the age of 18, meeting new people. Meets Amber Darkwood, starts to hang out with her more and they fall in love, becoming a couple. Amber dissapears, leaving Bram in tears. Bram meets Philifia Frost, who he marries. Bram gets sent to the Spire to get re-educated. Bram and Philifia divorce, turning him suicidal and depressed. Bram meets Kona Litherin, who he also marries. Spoiler: Full Life Chronicles ~Childhood~ Bram’s story starts in a small farming village in Fendarfall, born to Andiun and Sophia Eversnow, and the brother of the six year older Stijn Eversnow. He appeared to be quite a happy kid at most times, but he was quite difficult to understand. Usually, with farmers, the kids are there to work on the farms, but Bram didn’t. He, instead, was there to go with his father when he was going to deliver resources to a nearby city. The elf was a fan of climbing into trees, and staying there untill someone went to go looking for him. He sought joy in art, as well. And while his version of 'art' was to draw on the walls of his home, he enjoyed it nontheless. Though his parents didn't like how he did it, they motivated him. He didn't have too many friends to play with, but he had his brother and his nephew, and that was enough for him. He regularly visited his uncle as well (And eventually moved in with him). His uncle told him stories about Bram, and he adored his uncle for it. His life started getting interesting at the age of ten, when Bram’s dad killed Sophia. Though Anduin told Bram and his brother that it was a suicide, and they moved on with their lives for another two years, until his father attempted to murder his brother. The reason for Anduin doing so, was because he thought the children were of another man, which was the reason why he killed Sophia. He thought she had cheated on him, and Bram and his brother were his children, and not of him and Sophia. So, he tried to kill his brother. And he would’ve gotten away with it if his brother didn’t dodge the attack and ran outside to get help. In the meantime Anduin turned to Bram. Bram did the same as his brother and ran out, Anduin following them. They reached the house of the neighbors, but Anduin had catched up with them, and slices at Bram’s back. The slice did hit, leaving a scar on his back, but Anduin tripped in the process. The neighbors let the two in, took out a sword and ran back to stop Anduin from his murdering process. It, sadly, resulted in the end of his life and at the age of twelve, Bram had lost both his parents. He moved in with his uncle, who lived in the same village, but wasn’t a farmer or a hunter. He took his time enjoying his life, and didn’t work at all. Bram went into this, and decided to enjoy his life for what it was as well. He didn’t speak to the outside world too much, and since he wasn’t going out to deliver resources anymore, it would make him even more closed to the world, making him shyer and shyer as the months went by. He did, however, enjoy his time with his uncle. His uncle played the flute, and Bram would always listen to the lovely tunes he produced, and eventually tried to do the same himself. At the age of fourteen, Bram started to dabble in the arts of Light Magic. He was taught by Medivh, an around fourty year old light mage at the time. Bram was a fast learner, and Light Magic was a fun thing for him to learn, apart from Medivh being generally unpleased with him, though after a while, it changed. It was under Medivh's watch that Bram became a Castor, which he still is to this day. As he became better at the magic, he became determined to be the best Light Mage Alloria had seen. Medivh, at first, was hesitant to let him go to Regalia, but decided to let him go eventually. Not before going with him though. ~Adolescence~ At the age of sixteen, Bram’s brother moved out of his uncles house to live in the big city called Regalia. Bram had heard stories about the city, but decided to live with his uncle for a bit longer before moving out to Regalia as well. And two years later, he did. He thanked his uncle for the great times they had, and left, moving over to Regalia. Now, at the age of twenty and in a whole new city, Bram felt frightened at first. Suddenly, he saw all these new people and these giant buildings. Quite literally, he ran trying to find his brother, but instead, he found the tavern. He tried to stay hidden in the shadows, but was quickly noticed, and with stuttering, started his first conversation with a girl called Bliss. They talked for a bit and, as they did, he became slightly more confident. The time passed by and Bliss left the tavern, and Bram remained there, meeting yet another person, someone who called himself ‘Scout’. They talked and, after a bit, mentioned Bram to come with him. Hesitantly, he did, and he laid eyes on the first person he’d have a relationship with: Amber Darkwood. She gave him a hat, talked for a bit, and then, she had to go. Quite happy he made contact, he rented a room in the tavern and fell asleep, tired from his trip. ~Adulthood~ He and Amber met up occasionally, and eventually became a couple. They lasted for a while, and Bram met a lot of new people because of her. Until one day, without any knowledge, she left. Confused, scared, and sad, he went looking for her, with no results. Now entering a dark time, he tried to rob himself of his life. He would’ve succeeded if it wasn’t for Medivh passing by and stopping him. Medivh, quite literally slapped him in the face and told him to ‘move on from whatever made you do this’. He partially moved on, though still had her in the back of his head. A few years passed, Amber still not having returned, Bram decided to head towards the Rothenhoff Winter Festival, where he met a few more close friends, and, most important of all, Philifia Frost. They, like with Amber, decided to meet each other every day, and eventually they rented a house together, becoming best of friend. Only once has Bram come in trouble, and that was for illegal magic usage. For that, he has been sent to the Spire for re-education, coming out with a mage collar engraved on his neck. However, things started to go bad in his relation. Bram assumed Philifia for cheating, and the other way around too. Eventually, Philifia divorced him, and she ran off to Daniel Silevon a few days after. Bram was filled with grief, and fell right back into deperssion for a month straight, and had tried to take his life at least twice. But his life changed again. He met another girl, Kona Litherin, who he started loving. They spent time together and they ended up becoming a couple, and even marrying. In the meantime, Bram started roaming the sewers more, where he also met Whitlock, and managed to become befriended to both him and Don’Yoku. And that’s where we hit the present time. He is married to Kona Eversnow, and spends most of his time in the sewers, still practicing his Light Magic to improve himself, whilst still battling with deep depression and suicidal thoughts.
Peer Review no salt intended Hello again I will be doing a peer review for you today, I hope this helps you. To be honest I am having a hard time finding any Errors. I need more KAFFEE @Suzzie top kek AHHHH, just go ahead and bump him up to Mage in his Light magic so you can use the Light Magic Ultimate ability "Zenyatta Mode". That's all I could see, nice application.
Remove untrusting. That's somewhat of a copout weakness, as it's not going to be played on much in-game. Replace it with another mental weakness. Tag me when you're done
Sorry, small thing. I noticed you said he can use something called "Supreme Magics". Dunno what that is, might be a typo. Approved!
Just gonna put the extra relations in a comment from now on, makes it a lot easier to keep track of. Katthe Djiilla @McLeafies : "Quite honestly, we weren'even that close of friends until the whole Deathling Rape Fest came along. Though, I oughta say, I'm glad we did get to become closer. She's lovely to mess around with, though Kat's just a really good person in my eyes. She's a special someone, I can tell you that. Very, very special. Let's see where time'll bring us, shall we?" "And I'll happily take my time with it." Madeleine Amalao @Raeris : "Ye oughta make some childhoof friends, and she's a perfect example of someone to trust. She may be a little.. Odd. And outgoing on numerous things, I couldn't wish for anyone else." Sylvia Astria @PosidonX7: "Little bit of an odd friend. We were crewmates, then friends, then she hated me, then friends again, then she hated me AGAIN, and now we're on good terms. Good person nonetheless." Amelie H Bellrose @SlyChung: "Well, Amelie.. I don't know if she considers me a friend or not. She argues with me all tha'time, and I argue back. I see her as a pal, though. While she has her temper and her flaws, it's what makes her who she is."
The Cripple-Tale is already in process. ;) She would be there. If she wAS AROUND. You already raped me.
More relations ohboy. Saelethil Araven[@OptimalFriskies] : "Sael. He's someone I consider my best friend. He has a job as full-time badass, and he's happy to show that to me in more ways than one. But, really. He's like a big brother to me. Sael's a good guy." Crimson Draeham [@Raeris] you asked for it : "Now you see, Crimson is more than a friend. But, it's hard to maintain that relation if she's around only twice per month, before dissapearing to whatever place she goes. People assume she's seeing other people. Time can tell, I guess. Apart from that, lovely lass. Except for the time that she literally jumped on me." Raelynne Lothwen [@Vintagemystic] : "Yer gonna have a hard time to find a happier lass that Rae. She's just. Spreading her happiness one person at the time, and it's working. Vivid, lively. Wonder why she's even down here. BUT, I won't judge. She's a good aquintance" Aedhlynn Rhuiviel [@Rhuyne] : ".. Ye erh. Want my honest opinion? Yeah? Trust me, I'd give it to ya. Not yet, though. Aedhlynn, well. She's special, to me. I'd be lying if I saw her as 'just a friend'. Addie's a wonderfull person. To me, at least. She helped me out a few times, appreciate her for it. But she's helped with more than she knows." Shen Zhi [@ScaledSupremecy] :"He's a tad timid at first, but he's lovely company, despite his snarly comments from time to time. He's a good person, deep inside. Despite what he did, I see him as a friend. A good friend"
