Basic Information Full Name: Azraheim Tophlyn Age: 55 Gender: Male Race: Kathar (Shenathar, Wyrden Brood) Preferred Weapon: Fists Skill Information Total Points: 50 + 10 Hobby + 10 Talent + 5 Racial Core: 20 Alchemy Sciences 20 Fist Combat 6 Linguistics Knowledge Talent: 10 Perception Training (+10 Talent Points Hobby: 15 Dancing Arts (+10 Hobby Points, +5 Racial Boost) 4 Writing Art Body Shape 20 Body Stat Athletic Low Body Fat Languages Common (Learned in Childhood) Kathar Elven (Learned in Childhood) Genevaud (Linguistic Knowledge) Daendroquin (Linguistics Knowledge) Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Racials Fire Dance Passion Dance Vampire - Wyrden Bloodline - Inactive Abilities Visual Information Eye Color: Dark Red Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Short and unkempt Skin Color: Ash Grey Clothing: Comfortable loose fitting tunic and brown trousers Height: 6'5 Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Neutral, as he wouldn't care about the laws and do what his higher ups tell him rather than what some ailor guards do. Choose your Character Personality Type Virtuoso, as I feel he fits this personality type perfectly. He often finds himself pushing to become better, challenging his skills, his strength, and uses Jason's Dream Emporium as a place where he can learn and do more. Choose your Character's Religion 2. He almost has no regard for any deities of any kind, and finds that throughout his travels he doesn't want to rely on believing them. After exposure of others and even accepting others' faiths for a while, he feels it's best to go off alone, though it often leaves him with an inquisitive mind. Life Story Azraheim was born in Daendroc, Daen, to two Kathar vampires who were also void worshippers. As they were not born Crimson Witches, they still felt it was 'purposeful' to have their own cult. Being born into an extended family, he didn't enjoy their customs or traditions, though there was a lot he didn't know or understand at the time. He took what he could muster, and traveled at a young age to discover his passions, learn more about the world, and never to see his family again. He came across that of a medic hut in Ériu-Innis a few years later. They took him in and taught him what he knows today, though from mainly Alchemy from just spare books, testing and learning. Everything he knows about alchemy now has been through trial and error, curiosity getting the better of him as he spent his time trying to fit into his "new" family. No matter how much he tried to understand medical sciences, he couldn't grasp on it. But, just like as much as he enjoyed it, such things had to end. Azraheim was contented with his life there until he found himself being mistreated for his race, as while enjoying this life. Finding himself caught up in scraps on occasion, he learned how to fight purely from experience rather than a teacher, his road to leaving Hadaria was far from an easy one. Always someone attempting to put him down, he found his patience tested and quite annoyed over it. He was blackmailed to get pushed out of Corontium, heading to Hadaria to escape. He trusted someone with information regarding his eyes and felt he was a threat. Because of this betrayal, he has an overall dislike towards almost all females, save those for his own kind. Finding himself caught up in scraps on occasion, he learned how to fight purely from experience rather than a teacher, his road to leaving Hadaria was far from an easy one. Always someone attempting to put him down, he found his patience tested and quite annoyed over it. For a time he stayed in Hadaria, distancing himself from people and devoting himself to his skills for years. That was until he heard of Regalia. The main reason he found himself wanting to move was to seek a place that would accept him and his abilities, and it seemed Hadaria didn't have any of his kind and a Brood Kathar such as himself was always free game for being treated as different. He found himself wanting to be apart of something, where he couldn't have to worry about his race. Though.. Regalia has brought him some own hardships. Remaining a pure pacifist at times, he's made friends, where one has taught them Genevaud because it peaked his interest. He's done his best to keep himself invested in his job, trying to renew his way of life to work towards a happier self. Things seemed to be going just fine, until he was infected by someone he trusted, retreating into the sewers to start his new life.
Hello, peer review, not staff. Please label what type of brood they are. As in, bloodline brood whether it's Alais, Von Kerle, etc. You have +10 Hobby Points to spend if you want.
Here's my review!: @HorizonCythulu Corontium is a HUGE landmass, I'd recommend selecting somewhere more particular, a more select area of the continent. Currently, you've made no mention towards either Genevaud in your life story, why does Azraheim know this language? Where did he learn? Please make additional note of Azraheim's learning in Fist Combat, as it currently lacks any mention, but you've invested 20 points into it. Please fix this. You also note that Azraheim practises medicine but has 0 investment in this proficiency, please specify this to Alchemy, or invest some points into Medicine. When was Azraheim infected with Vampirism?
@Antimreoir Narrowed down Corontium to specifically Ériu-Innis. Elaborated how he learned Gevevaud. Voided his ability to learn medical sciencies. Explained how he was infected with vampirism. Do tell me if there's anything I need to fix.
