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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Au'lullórëana (& El'yen)
    • Race: Aiel Cielothar
    • Age: 148
    • Gender: Non-binary (They/He)
    • Sexuality: Asexual
    • Eye Color: Icy Blue
    Core Concept
    • Au'lullórëana is an extreme devotee to the Cult of Order, specifically the ideals of Vol. They additionally pay respects to the Ciellonian Faith of Estel, seeing the Colossi as the All-Mother's guiding hand within Aloria.
    • Au'lullórëana is an older and more sagely Cahal who is deeply attuned to the wilderness. This connection propels them to live out and spread the teachings of Vol and act as an extreme advocate for the wilds.
    Proficiency Information
    • 15 Horticulture Art (Cielothar Racial Boost)
    • 15 Gardening (Hobby)
    • 6 Arcanology
    • 5 Construction
    • 5 Husbandry
      • Cö’ëlla Tiëssá Elven Longear
    • 5 Vocal Art
    • 4 Wooden Art
    • 3 Cooking Art
    • 2 Instrument Art
    • 2 Fabric Art
    • 17 Physical Stat
      • = 0.5 * (15 Horticulture + 15 Gardening + 4 Wooden)
    Ability Information
    • Aiel Cielothar Racials:
      • Spirit Familiar 2
        • Nimbinoldor
    • Arcanology:
      • Ward Knowledge
      • Volacorum
    • Cahal Brood Kit (2 Abilities)
      • Ëlen Brood.
    • Ëlen Cahal Kit (12 Abilities + 4 Abilities Base Cahal Kit)
    • Scor Cahal Kit (12 Abilities + 4 Abilities Base Cahal Kit)
      • Blessings of the Colossi
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Saan (Parent)
    Appearance Information
    • Au'lullórëana's head is crowned with a pair of goat's horns. Vines and flowers intertwine with their pearlescent-white hair, and the backs of the Cielothar's ears are coated in soft fur. Their teeth are unnaturally flattened, and their floral-patterned skin is cracked and coarse with a bark-like texture. Flowers and shrubbery sprout from their shoulders, and their legs are goat-like and hooved. Au'lullórëana's blood, sweat, and tears appear as bioluminescent tree sap. Their wrists are adorned with twin-tattoos of Nimbinoldor. Wherever they go, the lingering memories of nature seem to follow (Additional Mutations). In the absence of their familiar, Au'lullórëana suffers from total blindness.
    • A gnarled and wrinkled Cielothar, Au'lullórëana presents themself as one with nature. Their skin is greened from a lifetime within the deep walds, and they are never seen without their familiar counterpart. Au'lullórëana tends to wear furs throughout the year, and a patchwork satchel often hangs from their side. They stand at the average height for Cielothar.
    • Au'lullórëana's Cahalic Form takes the shape of a willowy humanoid figure constructed of vines, shrubbery, and brambles. Their head blooms with a bouquet of flowers, each with an icy eye nestled in their center.
    Life Story
    • Au'lullórëana was born to a clan of particularly Vol-devout Cahëllon deep within the walds of Daen. They were raised as a child of many, brought up by their clan as a whole. The Cielothar's formative years were spent in an ever-changing environment due to the clan's nomadic lifestyle.
    • As they grew older, they began to help with idle tasks such as weaving, cooking, and gardening. They worked alongside on of the clan's elders, who regaled them with tales of their people's history and place in the world, instilling the Ciellonian with a sense of pride in their origins. When Au'lullórëana and El'yen reached their fifteenth year, they underwent their Trial of Estel. The pair emerged with epiphanic purpose towards cultivating a healthy state of history and faith in their clan, as well as a higher calling to nurture the wilds.
    • Au'lullórëana and El'yen immersed themselves as deeply into their shared lore as possible, both Ciellonian and Cahalic, as the clan continued along their migrational path, cycling through Daen, Daendroc, and Teled Methen. They developed a growing distaste for the deep and seemingly careless scars that Eronidas, Altalar, and later, Ailor, left in their wake as they dominated the landscape, rather than cultivated.
    • The pair turned towards history and legend, fixating on the story of Valei’aïual Alë, a restorative root said to be forged by Estel through Vol's hand. Au'lullórëana and El'yen, as well as a small handful of their clan-mates, ventured out on their own for the first time ever, scouring the lands for any rumor relating to their quest. Their search goaded them eastward and eventually across the sea, their goose chase leading them to the heart of the Regalian Empire.
    Progression Information
    • Sage Level 2, Support Level 1
     
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    Changelog
    ┍━━━------------------------------------------------------—<✦>—------------------------------------------------------━━━┑
    Dec. 25, 2020: Moved Relationships to the spot above, as it'll be pretty fluid. Traded Exist Mutationism for Ritualist
    ___Lightpaint under Ritualism, as I don't see it getting any use. Will not be altering Ritualism any further.
    Dec. 29, 2020: Added Pagan Horn, Pagan Soil, Pagan March, and Pagan Kin to Pagan Marvash Mutations. Removed all
    ___Exist Lavvanya Mutations. Adjusted Visual Information Expansion to reflect these changes.
    ___Also started building
    Relationships. Specified Elven Longear's breed.
    Jan. 2, 2021: Added Alchemy to keep track of what he has on hand for the day. Traded Ward Knowledge for Arken
    _Knowledge and added an Arcanology section in Special Traits, Spells, & Mutations. It just
    _makes more thematic sense. Not touching that section again for the foreseeable future.
    Jan 14, 2021: Swapped Walling Ward with Dazzling Display in Arcane Sorcery. It’s hard enough to feed and I’m hoping
    __the extra cc will help him be more viable. No more touchy for Sorcery for the foreseeable future.
    Feb 9, 2021: Added some Pagan Mutations, adjusted Visual Information Expansion to reflect these changes. Additionally
    _traded Dazzling Display for Opulent Orchestra in Arcane Sorcery.
    Feb 22, 2021: Updated for Sorcery overhaul.

    Mar 20, 2021: Removed Ritualism.

    Apr 20, 2021: Proficiency update.

    Jun 1, 2021: Added Volacorum equipment to Inventory.

    Jun 4, 2021: Racial update. All changes in Aiel Racial Abilities.

    Jun 30, 2021: Made the change to Scorrico from Silver Skinwalker under Werebeastism. Added additional mutations under
    __Exist Lavvanya Mutations, which have been reflected in Visual Information Expansion.
    Aug 5, 2021: Updated for Cahal rewrite. Werebeastism has been changed to Cahalism, with the chosen Ëlen kit.

    Oct 2, 2021: Added Scor abilities under Cahalism.

    Oct 16, 2021: Altered the Cahalic Form slightly and added Additional Mutations.

    Mar 6, 2022: Updated to new template standard.
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    @TheBioverse All changes listed in the Changelog above. Just wanted to notify you, since there's an aesthetic ability change with the Ritualism trade.
     
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    @TheBioverse All changes in the Changelog. Requesting due to Arcanology shift.
     
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    Plains Elven is now Plains Altalar.
     
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    @TheBioverse Swapped a Sorcery Spell in the hopes of making Hard Mode™️ a bit easier. Feeding has been a struggle, and I’m hoping the crowd control bump from Dazzling Display will be enough to let my boy close the gap when alone.
     
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    I will be claiming this for Aspirant Review!
     
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    • You have 6 unspent Age Points remaining, you can either spend those or put a point listing your unspent points.
    Make any changes in Green and tag me when finished.
     
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    Just looked the points over and realized I was using 51 Aging Points. Retracted one from Medical Sciences, knocking it down to four points total.

    Here’s my spread for Aging Points in the three categories.
    Code:
    Core
         27
    Talent
         8
    Hobby
         15
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    Total
         50
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    Minor update, with all changes in this color! All updates are in the Changelog above, but I'll summarize here:

    Special Traits / Spells / Mutations
    - Traded Dazzling Display for Opulent Orchestra
    - Added some new Pagan Mutations

    Visual Information Expansion
    - Adjusted to fit the new mutations
     
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    Changed the teeth to be flattened, instead of sharpened.
     
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    Minor changes to go along with the Sorcery update! All changes are made in purple.

    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations
    - Removed old Sorcery abilities
    - Added Element Control II
     
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    Minor edits under Personality (made in green) to accommodate the new Cult of Order. I'll be adding more meat(and greens) to his belief system soon:tm:.
     
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    I’m away for the weekend, but will try to get the ritualism removed when I have the time.
     
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    All mentions of Ritualism have been removed, with changes made in green.

    Skill Information
    - 12 Aging Points from Ritualism shuffled into Horticulture, Hunting, and Gardening Arts

    Special Traits, Spells, & Mutations
    - Ritualism removed

    Life Story
    - Changed fervor manifesting into werebeast mutations, rather than ritualist abilities

    Still working on his faith update, which is looking pretty thick, funky, and fresh so far.
     
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    Realized that I hadn't updated his Body Stat with the recent changes, now amended.
     
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    Some point shuffling due to the update. Changes made in blue.

    Inventory Information
    - Removed alchemical supplies.​

    Skill Information
    - Removed Alchemy.
    - Removed Perception Training.
    - Added Construction Art.
    - Added Volacorum (Pagan Marvash Mutations).​

    Special Traits, Spells, & Mutations
    - Added Volacorum.​

    Faith expansion pending final Skinwalker decisions.
     
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    Minor adjustments to his inventory, related to Volacorum. Edits made in green.

    Inventory Information
    - Added Lapis Lazuli plated gloves
    - Added Malachite crystal​
     
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    Another small edit, just to mark his Common's improvement over time. I should have updated this section a while ago. Anyways, changes made in blue.

    Languages
    - Changed Common's fluency from Limited to Average
    - Changed Common's literacy from Illiterate to Basic Literacy​
     
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    Requesting a Re-Review, in line with the modernized racials. There is no funky color this time, because I do not like re-coloring huge blocks, but here's the changelog:

    Special Traits, Spells, & Mutations
    - The subheading Racial Abilities has been changed to Aiel Racial Abilities.
    - Out with the old, in with the new. Everything that fell under Aiel Racial Abilities has been removed and replaced with the Aiel's new racials.
    - Removed Exist Sorcery entirely, as it stemmed from a now-deleted racial.​

    Visual Information Expansion
    - Removed the descriptor of Au'lullórëana’s tattoos as glowing, since they no longer do that.
    - Added wrinkles and the appearance of old age.
    - Added silver luminescent blood, as per Magic Sight 2.​
     
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    Empath Sense 1 changed to Empath Sense 2, in line with the patch just now.
     
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    Lots of changes to be made over the next few days, as I have to take a step back and figure out where I want to go with this character's design. In the meantime, could you mark the app as Rejected?
     
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    Waiting for the Cahal update to update this application.
     
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    I've waited for a little while now, but the itch to play him is unreal. The Cahal update is taking longer than I anticipated, so I've ported him over to the current Scorrico kit for the time being. There will likely be greater changes when that lore is released, but I've done what I could to keep alterations minimal for this micro-patch. Changes in green:

    Overall
    - Removed all mentions of Silver Skinwalkers, replacing them with just the generic "Werebeasts"​

    Skill Information
    - Took the opportunity to do some minor point shuffling. Took all of the points out of Medical Sciences and poured them into hobbies, as well as Ward Knowledge.​

    Body Shape
    - Adjusted to accommodate point shifts.​

    Visual Information Expansion
    - Both eyes and hair are no longer metallic. Removed the pupil-less eyes.
    Special Traits, Spells, & Mutations
    - Removed Silver Skinwalker kit.
    - Added Base Werebeast kit and Scorrico-Ursarr fusions.
    - Added Exist Lavvanya Mutations to keep his eyes and hair roughly the same.
    - Added Ward Knowledge to Arcanology.​

    Life Story
    - 99.9% the same. He's been abducted by a pack of Scorrico and turned, rather than Skinwalkers. Planning on smoothing out all of the details once the Cahal come out.​
     
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    Update coming soon, per Cahal release.
     
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    On a trip until Friday, but I thought I'd get a head start in updating this application. Will likely make sporadic updates, but I'll ping when all changes are final.

    DONE
    - Added Ëlen Soul-Line kit.
    - Added Cahalic Form

    TODO
    - Planning on slight Life Story alterations, as well as a religious re-orientation towards the Order Colossi exclusively.
     
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    To be reviewed!
     
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    Not sure if I need to put this up for Re-Review, but Au'lulloreana has been temporarily gifted the Scor Soulline for the remainder of the event.
     
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