◦❅ Basic Information ❅◦ ❄ Full Name: Aubrey Joan Silevon (Formerly Breon Silevon) ❄ Nickname: Bree ❄ Age: 61 (Born 9th of March, 246 AC) ❄ Gender: Female. ❄ Race: Isldar, Neutral Zeal under the Imperial Regalian Dragon. ❄ Sexuality: Yes. ◦❅ Skill Information ❅◦❄ 60 Proficiency Points +15 Perception Training +10 Visual Arts +6 Stealth Rogue Skill +6 Soul-Dragon Ritualism Skill +5 Musical Arts +5 Linguistic Knowledge +5 Fast Blade Combat Skill +8 Magical Knowledge Sanguinology Artifactism ❄ Body Stats ◦ Physical Stat of 5 ◦ Toned body shape ◦ Low body fat ❄ Languages ◦ Common, (First language, learnt by growing up in Regalia) ◦ Sulvaley Elven, (Second language, taught by parents) ◦ Skodje, (Third language, points spent) ◦ Wyrm Tongue, (Only when spoken by, or speaking to Dragons and Wyverns) ◦ Mavana, (Ritualistic Dragon Language) ◦❅ Visual Information ❅◦ ❄ Eye Color: Ice Blue. ❄ Hair Color: Snow white, however frequently colored. ❄ Hair Style: Thin, silky and straight, reaching the small of her back. ❄ Skin Color: Porcelain white. ❄ Clothing: Countless dresses, some more luxuriant, most simpler designs. Often blue to suit her complexion and tastes though she is known to wear pink and red too, occasionally. ❄ Height: 6’0. ◦❅ Personality ❅◦ ❄ Alignment ◦ Chaotic Neutral. ◦ Selfish by nature, with an exceptional arrogance when it comes to rules. Protecting herself, her interests, and the people she depends on stands above any laws for Aubrey, causing quite the headache for her more moral relatives and friends. ❄ Personality ◦ The Adventurer, ISFP. ◦ Aubrey's nature can be described very short as curious, passionate yet independent to the point of being selfish, causing the Isldar to be quite unpredictable. While she can be a sparkling personality that brings a colorful impression on people, she is in reality someone that enjoys spending time reflecting and explore on her own. ❄ Religion ◦ Unionism 6/10 ◦ Isldarin Dragon Worship 8/10 ◦ Growing up with both Unionism and dragon worship has stayed with Aubrey even as an adult, albeit offering more attention to it in later days as she started following the Imperial Dragon. ◦❅ Life Story ❅◦ ◦❅ Birth - Childhood ❅◦ Aubrey Joan Lupenzi (Then Breon Silevon) was born on the 9th of March 246 AC; the result of a affair between Larasviel and Daniel Silevon. Larasviel at the time was in fact married to Johann Silevon, and thus Aubrey was declared by Larasviel to be a child of their union. Not even 3 weeks into the life of the newborn, her unaware “father” died in the line of mercenary service. Due in large part to her mother’s guilt, she saw her mother only briefly in her upbringing, instead largely cared for by an assortment of uncles, aunt and her older sibling Darius. The family of Isldar still slung to their ancestral faith behind closed doors, and Aubrey was no different, showing awe and love for stories of dragons and the icy lands of Ellador that her family hailed from. In her mother's absence Aubrey would instead spend a whole lot of time with different noble children, thanks to Lara's connections amongst the peerage. As Aubrey grew older she learnt from them and their families just why her rightful faith was locked behind doors in the confines of her home. The faith didn't come up often in conversation, and never from the girl herself, but when it did it was treated more like a curse word than a religion. It wasn't welcome in Regalia and it planted a self hatred and insecurity in the girl that would only grow with time. ◦❅Adolescence ❅◦ During her early adolescence, Aubrey was resigned to the same fate as other members of her family; grooming towards military work and adopting some form of martial art. To her dismay, she found little joy or interest in these skills that were forced upon her, and showed little aptitude as a result, a far cry from her family’s usually quality of work. Rather than participate in this battle training that offered by her family, Aubrey would instead pass the time secretly by joining noble friends’ classes, taking part in the study of more civil skills, such as the arts, dancing, and writing. Not only did she find she had natural talent in these, but also that she enjoyed these far better than the ‘natural’ job of her relatives. As she aged her noble friends progressively disappeared from her life, one by one, mostly thanks to her race and therefore social status. After a ‘friend’ had attempted to clip her ears by force with a kitchen knife at the tender age of 15, she began to lash out at her family, ultimately blaming them for bringing her into the world an Isldar. After some years, all of these friends of her childhood had departed or embraced their destiny as members of the peerage, and she had essentially removed or lost anybody that had been close to her. Out of loneliness and lack of else to do, the girl's natural curiosity brought her to the library to entertain herself and put her mind to work with. Her scattered mind strayed from art, music, but slowly started to be drawn more to the unnatural, the arcane arts. What started out as a tiny spark of curiosity however became an obsession, and the girl seemed to devour knowledge anything related to aberrants, arcane and cursed alike. Her curiosity on the subject soon lured her to the underbelly of Regalia, into the slums and sewers to seek out people more knowledgeable on the subjects that had caught her obsession. Being the child of a militaristic family entangled in law enforcement she knew how to keep out of the guardsmen's radar for a long time, just long enough to be taken as a rogue apprentice by a vampire promising her more knowledge in exchange for an apprentice. After a few years however, Aubrey's mother found out what she was up to, and immediately snatched her away from the situation. The woman remembered what the underworld had done that her own brother in the past, and in the end decided to remove Aubrey from Regalia in a desperate attempt to remedy the path that the child was going down. Without a word to any family or remaining friends, they were gone. ◦❅ Adulthood ❅◦ Aubrey and Larasviel dedicated themselves to travelling across the full breadth of Ellador, intent on discouraging the young girl from the illegal path she had started by playing on her interests. The supernatural. Her mother taught her more surrounding the Isldar purpose regarding soul rivers and essences, giving the girl something to hold onto with her heritage that she didn’t view as entirely bad. At a point in their travels, Aubrey had chanced upon a Velheim man by the name of Magnus. They wed, and eventually conceived their first and only child: Ivar. Whatever happiness was there for a time was only short-lived, as her husband would become more and more abusive and violent as time passed on. She had not the will to leave. When Aubrey’s son was not much more than half a year old, he was struck by illness. As a result, most nights were spent with the child wailing through the night, consoled near wholly by his mother. One night Magnus had been stirred awake by the baby, and still not sober, he’d went into a blind, tired rage. For the first time, however, Aubrey was not the target and recipient of Magnus’ rage, but instead her beloved son. In a desperate attempt to protect both herself and her son, Aubrey grabbed a knife to keep the man at bay. It was then, with her child in one arm, knife in another that she realized that if she stayed, neither she or Ivar would survive Magnus. He would, maybe not today but certainly some day, kill them, accidentally or not. With new-found determination amidst her desperation, Aubrey brought the kitchen knife as she escaping the room to set Ivar to safety, returning, still armed. With what little battle skill she picked up from her family, working with Magnus' drunken state, she got the upper hand. Thus, in the end, Aubrey killed the man whom she had once loved. After the incident, Aubrey would move on to live in Nordskag for the following decade alongside her son, and at times, her mother. Aubrey continued to learn about the arcane and dragons, however under more controlled circumstances than she had as a teen. Aubrey eventually returned to her old home, Regalia, under the new name of Aubrey. The Isldar even found her way back to her Dragon-worship faith with the help of the resident Isldar community in the Holy City. As time passed, she slowly but eventually eased her self-hatred instead into an acceptance, and even pride, in who and what she was born as. She gradually grew closer to one of her coworkers, Lazarus d’Soleil, until they eventually began an illegitimate affair together; due to the man’s already existent marriage. Lazarus managed to divorce his wife after a while, marrying Aubrey under his childhood name, Lupenzi. For a decade, the peacefulness of a family life was just enough for the Isldar, but not perpetually. Two children later, and many years, the Isldar had yet again grown restless and scared of the inevitable end to her long term commitment to the ailor, pushing her husband away until it ended in divorce.
Add one negative personality trait The way you wrote the first weak really makes it sound like a racial weakness, which is a copout. Remove and replace with something else. Combine Naive and impressionable into one weakness, add another to replace that. Tag me when you're done
Sorry about the delay, I was busy all weekend and just finally had a chance to review; After reading through it twice, I cannot find anything that needs change. The traits are all understandable and mesh well together, the strengths and weaknesses are well balanced, the physical description allows me to visualize her. Overall, well done; Approved.
Requesting review of the app since I rewrote it completely to the "new" template, as well as rewrote large parts of her.
The only issue I have is very minor. There is an inconsistency between her personality, and how you have written her clothing under visual information. That she wears blue to honor her heritage, but then go around to say that she despises her Isldar roots in personality. Please correct it. Mark your edits in red and tag me when you've made the appropriate changes. @JoyShake
@Bagley_ Requesting re-review after age + lifestory + magic update. Hasn't touched much other than Skill information, last name and lifestory. Edits in blue.
Bump. Forgot to add her magician spells? Mighty annoyed with myself. Only that has been edited, edits are visible in Purple. -pterodactyl scream-
Big re-review needed! Removed mentions of magic throughout app Reshuffled Proficiency points Adapted to new personality template Rewrote parts of Life Story to fit Bree without magic (Marked changed sections in Blue) @JarrettdaCarrot
@PapidaCarrot Updated Proficiencies, as well as name (divorce, RIP) and personality section. Changes are all in Purple.
