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Played Character ❀ Amelina Peirgarten - Pink Countess ❀

This character is actively played.
seoulmate

seoulmate

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Your Application looks great! Just fantastically written. I hope you get her approved very soon!
 
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seoulmate said:
Although not outward and not done any more, her family treated her and her sisters like slaves when she was younger.
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I believe she was referring to her family at one point treating her and her sisters like slaves. She is not saying her resentment is not done anymore, but the treatment from her family isn't done anymore.

I love this app and can't wait to RP with Amelina some more! Beautifully written.
 
EmpressEvie said:
I believe she was referring to her family at one point treating her and her sisters like slaves. She is not saying her resentment is not done anymore, but the treatment from her family isn't done anymore.

I love this app and can't wait to RP with Amelina some more! Beautifully written.
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Oh! Oops! Right, I can see that now. Not sure how I might have missed that-- Ahah! I'm much too tired for this right now.
 
My Review:
  • Where was she born? Given how she is Ithanian-cultured, the way her family treated her given their generally matriarchal and female-based society is odd.
  • What was her family's status? You mention an estate in Regalia but it sounds like you mean out in the countryside, which I think is most rural with the estates there occupied by major Regalian noble families.
  • How did the dead Alexandre who was going to Jorrhildr somehow come back as a Deathling despite the fact that "Only characters with a valid grave either in the church, or the graveyard, can rise as a Deathling. Characters that died outside Regalia also cannot rise, but the base line is that any character that died at the hands of the authorities as a criminal cannot rise."
Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @seoulmate
 
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The_Shadow_King3 said:
My Review:
  • Where was she born? Given how she is Ithanian-cultured, the way her family treated her given their generally matriarchal and female-based society is odd.
  • What was her family's status? You mention an estate in Regalia but it sounds like you mean out in the countryside, which I think is most rural with the estates there occupied by major Regalian noble families.
  • How did the dead Alexandre who was going to Jorrhildr somehow come back as a Deathling despite the fact that "Only characters with a valid grave either in the church, or the graveyard, can rise as a Deathling. Characters that died outside Regalia also cannot rise, but the base line is that any character that died at the hands of the authorities as a criminal cannot rise."
Please tag me once the edits have been done in green @seoulmate
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I believe all of the edits have been done! The families sheet is undergoing a massive rewrite, so I can link that whenever it is finished if you would like! I also believe I lost the 'Review in Progress' tag, but since I'm tagging you I assume that is okay?

@The_Shadow_King3
 
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seoulmate said:
I believe all of the edits have been done! The families sheet is undergoing a massive rewrite, so I can link that whenever it is finished if you would like! I also believe I lost the 'Review in Progress' tag, but since I'm tagging you I assume that is okay?

@The_Shadow_King3
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Approved.
 
I've updated this to fit the new format and make changes as she is no longer a Celyreos.
Figured I would tag it as "Needs Reviewer" as I want to make sure it is all good to go!
@HydraLana
 
seoulmate said:
Updated for the proficiency system!
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My Review:
  • I ask you reexamine your Cultural Points to ensure everything is allocated properly and the way you want it.
  • Please add a Languages section where it is appropriate in the Character Application format.
  • Please delete the Talents section as it is no longer part of the template.
Tag me once this has been done in green @seoulmate
 
From what I can tell, no issues, Re-Approved.
 
@seoulmate Hey app looks great, just need two things from you. Please specify which branch of Artificer your character is taking in parentheses next to the applicable packs. Please specify in parentheses next to your Magic investment either Void or Exist, to note the planar alignment of your characters Magic. @tag me when edits are made
 

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