That's fine, but you still need to include it! My input of detailing your Life-Story still applies, because it is too short and blunt. Have some fun with it! Along with, I would still like for you to organize your points how I recommended. It makes them a bit easier to read. Explain the Proficiency in recent times in the Life-Story section so I can understand why Silver would have these abilities. Your religion is also still regular Dragon Worship. Since they are completely devoted, it would not make sense for Silver to have magical abilities such as Sorcery. Please mark it down as an Isldar Variant, or edit among your points.