╔══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╗ ╚══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╝ Ser Aleksei Peirgarten Knight of the Viridian Order “Ehre ist die Seele” Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Aleksei Peirgarten. Age: 23 years old. Gender: Male. Race: Leutz-Vixe Ailor, Drahl Lineage. Preferred Weapon: Zweihander and Kite Shield. Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 5 Base Points + 23 Age Points = 28 Points. 20 Sword Combat (Age Points) 10 Strength Training (Talent Points) 10 Husbandry Art (5 Hobby Points, 5 Racial Boost, Whitebred Elladorian) 8 Shielding Combat (Age Points) 5 Perception Training (Drahl Boost) 5 Hunting Art (5 Hobby Points) Body Shape 20 Sword Combat + 10 Strength Training + 8 Shielding Combat = 38, capped at 30. Physical Stat: 30. Body Shape: Muscular. Body Fat: Average. Languages Common (Learned in childhood.) Leutz-Vixe Dialect (Learned as mothertongue.) ╔══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╗ ╚══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╝ Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Emerald green. Hair Color: Beaten gold. Hair Style: Middle-part. Skin Color: Ailor white. Clothing: Noblemans garbs. Height: 6 feet, 2 inches. Personality and Abilities (Required) Character Alignment Lawful Good: A lawful good character typically acts with compassion and always with honor and a sense of duty. He acts as a good person is expected or required to act. He combines a commitment to oppose evil with the discipline to fight relentlessly. He tells the truth, keeps his word, helps those in need, and speaks out against injustice. Personality Type ISFJ The Defender: Very dedicated and warm protectors, always ready to defend their loved ones. While people with this personality type are generally introverted and tend to be quiet, they are keen observers and are focused on other people. Because they are so perceptive, they are good at remembering details about other people. Religion Unionist Faith: 4/10 Piety. While Aleksei is loyal to his faith, he is no zealot, nor does he go out of his way to dedicate time for religion. ╔══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╗ ╚══════════════════【♖】══════════════════╝ Life Story (Required) Birth and Childhood: Born in Lorenthaus of the Leutz-Vixe region, Aleksei Peirgarten was the first son and second child of Amelina Peirgarten, the Countess of Lorhauser. Enjoying the leisure of a wealthy lifestyle at a young age, Aleksei was raised in comfort and afforded anything he desired. He displayed signs of dyslexia when learning to read, and the Countess taught her son every letter by herself until he came over his difficulty. Alongside his scholarly studies he was also taught basics of swordplay up until the age of ten, when he was enrolled into Kurtenwald Castle to become a Viridian. Teenager to Young Adult: Settling in Kurtenwald Castle, Aleksei would spend his next ten years learning masterful combat in the style of Viridian swordsmanship, horse riding and fighing on horse-back, as well as the intricate uses of shields and the many ways they can be utilized in combat. Alongside combat knowledge, Aleksei was also lectured in understanding, acknowledging and living the Code of Ehrenhof, which quelled the desire for ambition in him, and shaped him over the years into a man who merely seeks to uphold his knightly honor. Recent Times and Current: Having sacrificed his entire adolescence into his studies in Kurtenwald Castle, and spent a couple of years serving as a Squire under an experienced and famed Paladin, Aleksei was finally elevated to the rank of Man-at-Arms through a graduation ceremony, knighted by the Regalian Emperor directly. Given permission to leave Kurtenwald, Aleksei sought out his family once again, to rekindle his relationships and to experience everything he missed out on, with the ultimate desire to one day become a noteworthy, honorable, and truly examplary Knight.
Spoiler: Inventory Information (Optional) Inventory Information (Optional) Blacksteel Zweihander greatsword with a gilded steel hilt, 213cm in length. Ornate curved dagger with a gilded steel hilt, 45cm in length. Viridian Order traditional tall shield, depicting the Viridian tower emblem in green and white. Pouch of regals, always carrying an amount ranging between 50 to 200 regals. A golden pocket-watch, the Peirgarten Vannhestia carved into it's opener. Spoiler: Basic Information (Expansion) Basic Information (Expansion) Aleksei Peirgarten is currently residing in Regalia, because his family, the House Peirgarten, reside there as well. He is not a recent arrival in Regalia, but he has only been around for roughly a year. In Regalia, Aleksei serves as a Viridian Man-At-Arms, carrying out his duties as a Knight, and lives in complete luxury due to his families easily afforded riches. Aleksei Peirgarten was born in Lorenthaus, as the first-born son of the Countess-Electress of Lorenthaus. He was born after his twin, Adelaise Peirgarten, holding onto her foot. Aleksei has five siblings, and plays a relatively relevant role in his extended family line. Aleksei Peirgarten's secondary ambitions mainly consist of living an easy life, free of burdens, and to be able to make an examplary Knight of himself, and have tales told of his honorable acts. He wishes to prove himself to the world, and to be recognized as a model warrior. Spoiler: Visual Information (Expansion) Visual Information (Expansion) Facially, Aleksei is dashingly handsome. He has a head of golden hair, luscious locks cascading across the two sides of his face in a middle-part. His eyes are a brilliant emerald, and have a piercing stare. Aleksei has a very defined, prominent jawline, and a slightly hooked nose. Aleksei has a charming smile, and he can be described as genetically flawless, almost to the point of perfection. Physically, Aleksei is heavily built. Having spent many years in training in Kurtenwald Castle, which involved building ones physical strength to peak condition, Aleksei emerged from his teachings with a very muscular and powerful body. Aleksei's pecs, abs, biceps, trapezoids and other muscles are all very built and defined, giving him a strong and admirable physical shape. Spoiler: Personality Information (Expansion) Personality Information (Expansion) Describe any number of Character Quirks your character has, strange behavior that they exhibit in certain situations. For example, a character rubbing a beard when nervous is a quirk, or a character biting their lips when doing math is a quirk, or a character shuffling their feet when talking to someone is a quirk. Quirks are not mandatory and may be left out if the writer doesn’t want to include them or can’t think of any. Describe your character’s skills; abilities they’ve developed, but not necessarily put at the forefront of their lives. For example, if your character is a good cook, but not a chef, or if they are a good horse rider but not necessarily a competition racer, you would mention them here. Feel free to mention multiple skills but try to keep your character from becoming over skilled. Likes Describe three different activities, things or items that your character loves to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character happy and in a good mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they love these things and then also explain how it makes them feel. Dislikes Describe three different activities, things or items that your character hates to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character annoyed or angry and in a general bad mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they hate these things and explain also how it makes them feel. Spoiler: Relationships (Optional) Relationships (Optional) No. I will not put these here. I refuse. You will never know.
@Yigit here we go I'd suggest changing the longsword material away from blacksteel. While it is possible to have one, it's both a) really heavy and b) requires specialized tools to sharpen. Given he is a noble it won't be much of an issue, but I wanted to mention that blacksteel is no longer the same metal as it used to be. Your choice however, just no it will be harder to wield. A few nitpicks on the life story to deal with the viridian lore In the second section, it seems to imply Aleksei was deploying on missions during training. Pages stay within the Castle until they are promoted to Squires, after which their mentors choose whether they should venture out or not. Clarify that in the 5th bullet Going backwards, but I'd you to remove the prodigy suggestion in the 4th bullet. While Viridians tend to be perceived better than others, it seems that the life story paints Aleksei as a flawless fighter, which is a bit of a mary sue rp trope. Try to tone down the hyperbole in that regard. the last bit has to due with graduation. Only the Primae or Emperor can knight Squires to become fully fledged knights. Ser Oscar could put forth his recommendation, but he would be unable to knight him. I'm also not completely sure how common Paladins will be, NPCs included. For now Oscar can be one, but that may change after the lore for the special perm is released later. Tag me once you've made these changes, and you'll be ready to do the Emperor's work.
