▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ╔═══════《✧》═══════╗ Basic Information ╚═══════《✧》═══════╝Name: Aisha Oamara Talifar Ihsan Other names: Aisha Calvara Race: Qadir Culture: Alqurra’ Age: 30 Eye Color: Sandy ╔═══════《✧》═══════╗ Concept ╚═══════《✧》═══════╝ ✯ A firm believer in the ideals of Esrah Alwattah. Aisha believes her people to be the ones to create a higher being. ✯ Very avoidant of the occult and afflicted due to an attack on her family. It is uncertain whether that is due to fear or anger. ✯ Someone who aspires to create connections, family, and wealth for herself no matter the means necessary. ╔═══════《✧》═══════╗ Appearance ╚═══════《✧》═══════╝ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ Standing at about 5'5, she has rich tanned skin and a soul-skin sleeve of golden Azraqtech and mandala-like looking designs and stars, moons, and suns from her hands all the way up near her shoulders. She has an athletic frame and hair that's short, black, and usually tucked behind her ears. Her clothes often cover her body in cobalt robes or dresses. If they don't cover her, they're often something that she wears while engineering and purposefully shows her arms as they have a sentimental meaning to her. ╔═══════《✧》═══════╗ Proficiencies ╚═══════《✧》═══════╝ STRENGTH: 2 ✧ Athletic Point Buy | Warden Pack, Comrade PackCONSTITUTION: 2 ✧ Crafting Point Buy | Metallurgy Pack ✧ Training Point Buy | Physique PackWISDOM: 7 ✧ Technician Point Buy | Mindblock Pack, Mercy Pack, Mech-Suit Pack, Recall Pack, Protech Pack, Mechwalker Pack, Automation Pack [Free], Memblock [Free] ✧ Artificer Point Buy | Barricade Pack ✧ Patents | Common Patent, Medical Patent, Foam-mix Patent, Hair-chem Patent, Servo-golem Patent, Biotic Patent, Addiotic Patent, Momentum Patent, Mechpet Patent, Hacking Patent, Mindslave Patent, Lifegiver Patent, Lifecreator Patent, Appliance PatentDEXTERITY: 1 ✧ Roguery Point Buy | Parkour PackMAGIC: 0 CHARISMA: 2 ✧ State Point Buy | Agitator Pack ✧ Language Point Buy | Empire Linguist PackFAITH: 0 ✧ Invocation Point Buy | Tech Invocation Pack [Free] LANGUAGES: Common [Free] Faraddi [Birth] Daendroquin [Empire] Pet: Mech Cat - A mechanical pet built by Aisha to mimic a house cat. She jokingly calls it her familiar as it retrieves things for her around her home. ╔═══════《✧》═══════╗ Backstory ╚═══════《✧》═══════╝ ✯ Aisha was born under a star filled sky to her parents Aziz and Daniya, Aisha's name meaning a living queen of the moon and stars. She has one older brother named Rafael that was her favorite person in the world. The family lived in Al-Alus in a beautiful home with an observatory on top. Her parents are known for their design of an orrery that grew to be a popular addition to many homes where they lived. Their obsession with the stars coming from their beliefs of building their god and extending their understanding beyond the skies they live under. ✯ As a young girl, Aisha didn't have many interests that a typical girl wouldn't have. She was learning how to make her own small clockwork creations and getting into trouble, somewhat. It wasn't until she met her cousins that she had any goals or aspirations, or at least what she perceived as such. Her goal being to become rich and powerful. ✯ When Aisha was 19, she moved to Regalia with her cousins and her brother. The four of them living together with her oldest cousin acting as the head of the family. They worked to push the families name and jewelry business to the public in order to foster her cousins' goal of reaching nobility and presenting Qadir culture in a higher light. This, of course, did not work. ✯ After a few years living out rather mundane lives in Regalia and working in two clinics, and being trained in some forms of combat, Aisha received a letter about her father being attacked by a mage. The details of which weren't really made clear to her, but she travels back home to see him and care for him. After his eventual passing, Aisha brought her mother back to Regalia with her to care for her as well until she also eventually came to pass. Now Aisha is living alone in the city and searching for her new purpose.
Hello! There are a few changes that need to be made: Your TECHNICIAN point buy locks you out of taking FIREARMS proficiencies. Please remove one or the other and reallocate. Limitations for what Technicians may invest in is listed at the top of the Technician page. Please expand on your core concept in 1-3 full sentences. You're allowed to take up 2 times your Technician / Artificer point buy investments in their respective specials, but it's not mandatory. Please make these changes in TEAL. Tag me once this is done!
Done. I also chose to use that amount of specials for the time being as I felt it fit the character at this time. I will probably add more specials once I've felt comfortable working with the character more. Thank you!
@Sasspai No worries on the specials then! Two more things: Climate pack is an Athletics Point Buy, which is under Strength. Please replace or shift points to accommodate. If you're keen on the Amontaar Wisdom Pack, please incorporate going to Amontaar to learn and train among the Amontaar feathers in your backstory. Once these changes are made, tag me again!
Athletic Point buy isn't listed on the Technician page as not allowed. I removed both points anyways. Changes are in teal.
@Sasspai Perhaps what I was saying was misunderstood. You're perfectly capable of having the Climate pack! It (and it's point allocated) needed to be moved from Constitution to Strength, since Athletics is a Strength point buy. You just had it listed in the wrong space! I'll wait for confirmation that this is the final iteration before approving. :)
Ah. That makes more sense. Thank you for pointing that out. Unless there is anything else needed this should be the final revision for me!
