⤛ Live by the spirit of the Wolf ⤜ ⤛Basic Information⤜Full Name: Wilhelm Friedrich Wulfmacht Age: 38 Birthday ⤜ January 18th, 271 Gender: Male Race: Statesman Ailor Culture: New Regalian Racial Abilities: Shrewd Insight Omniaware Destined Body 2 Preferred Weapon: Puretek ⤛Skill Information⤜ 50 Points + 10 Hobby + 5 Racial Skills Puretek Combat +4 Perception Training +10 (5 Racial Boost) Theater +10 (10 Hobby) Leatherwork Art +5 Pathfinding Art +15 Husbandry +15 Linguistics +6 ⤜ Öbern (3 invested) ⤜ Hinterwälder (3 invested) ⤜ Wirtem ( Calem + Öbern + Hinterwälder ) ⤛Body Stats⤜ ⤜Physical Stat: 13 ( Theatre 5 + Pathfinding 8 ) ⤜Body Shape: Ripped ⤜Body Fat: Average ⤛Languages⤜ ⤜ Common | Taught by Father in youth ⤜ Calem | Father & Mother Tongue ⤜ Öbern | Learned while traveling his homelands ⤜ Hinterwälder | Learned while traveling his homelands ⤜ Wirtem | Learned in academy through personal study ⤛Progression Information⤜ General Level 3 ⤛Visual Information⤜ ⤜Eye Color: Pale Blue ⤜Hair Color: Toffee Blonde ⤜Hair Style: Slicked back smoothly, often very particularly ⤜Skin Color: A paler white, easily tanned in warmer seasons ⤜Clothing: Often wearing a large overcoat, furs, or well gathered fine formal wear ⤜Height: 6'5 ⤜Personality | Core List ⤜Character Alignment: Spoiler: Lawful Evil The lawful evil alignment was the methodical, intentional, and frequently successful devotion to a cruel organized system. Lawful evil characters methodically took what they want in life within the limits of their personally held beliefs. ⤜Character Personality: Spoiler: Commander A Commander (ENTJ) is someone with the Extraverted, Intuitive, Thinking, and Judging personality traits. They are decisive people who love momentum and accomplishment. They gather information to construct their creative visions but rarely hesitate for long before acting on them. Commanders are natural-born leaders. People with this personality type embody the gifts of charisma and confidence, and project authority in a way that draws crowds together behind a common goal. However, Commanders are also characterized by an often ruthless level of rationality, using their drive, determination and sharp minds to achieve whatever end they’ve set for themselves. Perhaps it is best that they make up only three percent of the population, lest they overwhelm the more timid and sensitive personality types that make up much of the rest of the world – but we have Commanders to thank for many of the businesses and institutions we take for granted every day. ⤜Religion: Spoiler: Unionism 3/10 Despite Wilhelm's allegiances to old tradition he has doubts about the capabilities of church institutions, which weaken his resolve to it. Recent events have lead him to further relinquish his trust in the faith ⤛Life Story⤜Wilhelm was born in the mid-northern regions of Waldmark. He was born of his Father, Friedrich Wulfmacht and his mother Victoria. His Father, an accomplished military man as the many generations of the Wulfmacht tree were, gave him a bountiful life. Their family's long military tradition had risen them above the average commoner into a life of wealth. He grew up on his father's land, in his adolescence, He wrestled a snake away from a wounded falcon which remained by his side ever since. This wealth additionally, gave Wilhelm the opportunity for a relaxed life but his aim was in the steps of his ancestors and his father sent him off to the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy at the ripe age of Sixteen. His father, who encouraged his schooling using much of their wealth to continue to send him to the most prestigious schools in the entire empire. Dead-set on making his father proud. He spent his entire adult life in the academia, learning the skills necessary to become the heir to his father's throne. Gathering as much information as he could, to sharpen himself and prove his life as a man of significant integrity. His father also saw to it that Wilhelm was strictly taught to hide his emotions, his outward behaviors, under the guise of acting. His father found it most appropriate his son would be able to act in any manner of emotions to properly secure the interests of the family. It was at the Academy where he dove into his studies, becoming enthralled with the art of knowledge. Despite his love of the academia and the battlefield, Wilhelm would spend his summers at home, in Waldmark. His father would teach him the eternal bond between a Wulfmacht and his steed. He took to riding in the countryside often, hunting wild game in the forest and reading under the trees on his father's land. During one of his hunting trips in the later summers of his career in the Academy he had dismounted his horse to inspect a trapped rabbit when a wild bear approached him from the woods. He was unable to scare off the creature which lunged at him, helpless as he had only read about battle, he fled. His horse was devoured by the creature, and Wilhelm sought to properly sharpen himself within real combat. As a freshly graduated young man, Wilhelm set off to serve the Empire. He fought in the Regalian military for some years. There he was taught the truth of the battlefield and how to handle himself with a blade. While abroad, he wrote many letters to his love back home. His writing skill was poor, and in return letters, his wife tried to help him with his edict. He acquired a minor ability to drum up letters from it. When he felt he had completed his duty, he set to return home. There he took up his wife a bore several children, he raised his children in the same fashion his father raised him creating proud New Regalians. He now sets his ambitions higher, traveling to the Imperial capital to make a name for himself after his father.
@kdeeks Here is my review: Basic Information - No issuesSkill Information - No issuesVisual Information - No issuesPersonality - No issuesLife Story - No issues Approved!
@Lizmun Character application updated, proficiency rework implemented, and minor backstory rework in regards to new proficiencies! Thank you!
@Lizmun Hello! Need a re-review Readjusted some of Wilhlem's schools and combat proficiencies! Adding more to puretek, and subtracting some to allow for him to learn all New Regalian languages. Additionally adding some minor Steamtech which has become an integral part of his relationship to some of his children!
Please make the following edits and tag me when complete. There are a few issues with your current skills. With the proficiencies they have currently, they are a master swordsman, engineer, range combat/puretek user, diplomat, statesman, economist, natural sciences doctor, commander, marshal and noble patriarch. These are far too many things for one character to have spent time learning and falls into a jack-of-all-trades type of character. -Please remove all engineering proficiencies from the character. -Please re-evaluate the number of schools they've attended and which ones suit the character. With a minimum age of 14 for attending these schools, the character would have spent 18 years bouncing between different schools, as well as needing time to serve in the military as is present in the backstory. - Please list what category these schools fall into. IE. Command School, Diplomatic School. -Amend the backstory to match with the changes made. This is incorrect. Please change this to match their current proficiencies.
Readjusted the points around again, nullified several skills & schools in favor of just having points set aside for IC learning & experiences. Schools placed into respective categories, backstory amended to suit new point spread! Fixed that Physical stat problem, I literally never remember having fist combat lol, no clue how they slipped in! @BiBiBirdie
Please make these following edits that I requested in my last post and tag me when complete. If these edits aren't made, this app will be rejected. - Please remove all engineering proficiencies from the character and mentions of it from the backstory. - Please re-evaluate the number of schools they've attended and which ones suit the character. Remove one category.
Edits made, I do have twenty points now open, would it be permissible for me to place points elsewhere? @BiBiBirdie
Approved. Feel free to put this application up for re-review if you want to use your free points. However, I won't be allowing any engineering or alchemy proficiencies on this particular character for the moment.
@BiBiBirdie Hello! Happy Sunday, looking for a re-review having now spent my additional twenty points. Added several mundane fighting tactics as well as some minor hobby art.
