Approved Sheet Zoie

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  1. HereticTakao

    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    “A beautiful mistake, with destructive consequences.”
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    General Theme | Battle Theme
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    • BASIC INFORMATION || to note one’s identity.
      • « FULL NAME » Ellaren Lofgren
        • ↠ [ Chosen Name: Zoie]
      • « AGE » 18
        • ↠ [ Birthday: October 28th ]
        • ↠ [ Star Sign: Scorpio ]
      • « GENDER » Non-Binary
        • ↠ [ Pronouns: They/Him ]
      • « RACE » El-Maraya
      • « SEXUALITY » Homosexual
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    • SKILL INFORMATION || to harness one’s skillset.
      • « TOTAL POINTS » 50 Core Points + 10 Hobby Points
      • « POINTS ALLOCATION »
        • Point-Buy Proficiencies
          • +15 Engineering
          • +3 Genetics
            • → Olvomism
          • +3 Roguery
          • +3 Linguistics
        • Core Proficiencies
          • +15 Two-hand Blunt Combat
          • +10 Fist Combat
      • « PHYSICAL STAT »
        • ↠ [15 Two-hand Blunt Combat + 10 Fist Combat = 25 physical stat. ]
        • ↠ [ Body Shape: Athletic. ]
        • ↠ [ Body Fat: Moderate. ]
      • « LANGUAGES »
        • Common
        • Skodje
        • Shalota
    • SPECIAL TRAITS || to utilize one’s abilities.
      • « ENGINEERING » Crystaltech Branch
        • ↠ [ Engineering Pack Two: Golem. ]
        • ↠ [ Engineering Pack Three: Control. ]
        • ↠ [ Engineering Pack Four: Biotics. ]
        • ↠ [ Engineering Pack Six: Weapons. ]
        • ↠ [ Engineering Pack Seven: Hooking. ]
      • « ROGUERY »
        • ↠ [ Toggle Passive: Rogue Gift 4. ]
      • « RACIALS »
        • ↠ [ El-Maraya Kit. ]
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    • VISUAL INFORMATION || to show one’s self.
      • « EYE COLOR » Light Purple
      • « HAIR COLOR » Burgundy
      • « HAIR STYLE » Most of their hair is brushed back, with a large portion of it split into two braids running across the top of his head.
      • « SKIN COLOR » Lavender
      • « CLOTHING » White shirt, purple pants, a shawl with stars painted on it around the waist, and black boots.
      • « HEIGHT » 4’5
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    • PERSONALITY || to know one’s nature. Option Two: The Core List.
      • « ALIGNMENT »
        • Neutral Evil
      • « PERSONALITY TYPE »
        • The Campaigner
      • « RELIGION »
        • Faithless
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    • LIFE STORY || to know one’s background.
      • Birth & Childhood.
        • In Solleria, Ellaren hatched in a damp and clustered basement. Their father was a great Crystaltech engineer, who hastily abandoned them a few months after they were born. He left them on the grounds of a nobleman’s estate, along with a few journals of notes he no longer needed, and a paper with their name written on it.
        • Jensa Lofgren, a servant of the house, found the El-Maraya soon after they were dropped. Pitying the discarded child, she took them in.
        • They grew up in relative safety but were kept out of sight from the nobility that lurked the grounds. Better to be unseen and unheard, especially with their striking appearance. Naturally, he learned how to walk silently, so he could travel around the estate easier.
        • During these formative years, he grew extremely close to Jensa, considering her to be his true mother.
      • Adolescence.
        • Upon reaching teenage years, Ella began to read the notes their father left behind. This sent them into a spiral of experimenting with crystaltech and becoming an engineer like their progenitor was.
        • When he wasn’t designing a golem or prosthetic, he’d train in combat with his mother. He took to these lessons well, and considered them vital for his survival, due to his diminutive size that didn’t seem to be changing anytime soon.
        • A coup of the estate, by the patriarch’s brother, resulted in Ellaren and Jensa being taken captive. They ended up serving the traitorous brother.
      • Adulthood.
        • Their time serving the brother began to break the young El-Maraya. They discarded their original name, in favor of Zoie, emulating their mother’s own name change to Gin. He became more violent and took warmly, a little too much so, to the cruel tasks he was assigned.
      • Present.
        • It didn’t take long before another tragedy struck. All Zoie remembers is Gin waking them at the crack of dawn, bloodied and stabbed, with a paler complexion than normal. She told them they had to get out of Solleria, and find refuge somewhere else. When the sun was fully in the sky, he was on horseback with his mother.
        • The two ended up in Regalia where they now reside.
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    Aesthetics inspired by @Qoll 's style
     
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    #1 HereticTakao, Jun 6, 2021
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  3. Scribbe

    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Lore1

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    Taking this for review.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Lore1

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    Looks good to me. Approved!
     
  5. HereticTakao

    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    @Scribbe wahoo big update
    - Did an aesthetic overhaul
    - Rewrote life story some
    - Removed sorcery from profs, used the 10 points I hadn't used and 5 points from the previous 6 point sorcery investment towards engineering. +15 points total invested, crystaltech branch. Packs: golem, control, biotics, weapons, and hooking.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Lore1

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    this is fine
    reapproved
     

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