Zoie

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  1. HereticTakao

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    • BASIC INFORMATION || to note one’s identity.
      • « FULL NAME » Ellaren Lofgren
        • ↠ [ Chosen Name: Zoie]
      • « AGE » 18
        • ↠ [ Birthday: October 28th ]
        • ↠ [ Star Sign: Scorpio ]
      • « GENDER » Non-Binary
        • ↠ [ Pronouns: they/them ]
      • « RACE » Slizzar
      • « SEXUALITY » Homosexual
      • « EYE COLOR » Gold with red limbus
    • CORE CONCEPT || to display one’s heart.
      • Zoie is agnostic, holding no ties to religion, despite growing up in a Unionist household. Yet, they increasingly find themselves drawn to the idea of Void Worship.
      • A Corruption Silven with a knack for crystaltech and prowess for slithering their way into the hearts of the good-natured.
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    • PROFICIENCY INFORMATION || to harness one’s skillset.
      • « POINTS ALLOCATION » 6 points leftover.
        • Strength: 2
          • Blades Pack
        • Constitution: 0
        • Wisdom: 2
          • Engineered Biotics Pack
          • Engineered Machina Pack
        • Dexterity: 0
        • Magic: 3
          • Displacing
          • Illusionism
          • Materialism
        • Charisma: 1
          • Empire Linguist Pack
    • ABILITY INFORMATION || to utilize one’s abilities.
      • « SILVENISM » Child of Corruption
        • ↠ [ Lord & Master ]
        • ↠ [ Lord Infiltrated ]
      • « MAGIC » Innate powers from the Void
        • ↠ [ Arcane Knockback ]
        • ↠ [ Pocket Dimension ]
        • ↠ [ Altered Self ]
        • ↠ [ Pocket Scan ]
        • ↠ [ Dream Element ]
    • LANGUAGES || to communicate one’s thoughts.
      • Common
      • Zoram
      • Empire Linguist Pack
        • Specifically fluent in Skodje, but knows some of the other languages.
    • APPEARANCE INFORMATION || to show one’s self.
      • Ellaren does not have mutations, besides their Void Silven eyes.
      • In their natural state, they are 6 feet tall, covered in shimmering white scales, and have shoulder-length tight locks of light red hair, which they describe the color being "akin to when blood enters water."
      • The main form they use is the identity Zoie, a Haat-Maraya that stands at 5’3, with a muscular body due to their extensive combat training(or so they say), and has lavender skin complimented by jet-black, lustrous locks, tied into two large braids across the top of their head.
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    • LIFE STORY || to know one’s background.
      • Birth & Childhood.
        • In Solleria, a former aristocrat from the Haat-Heshaksaa arrived with twin Silven children of the Corruption Arken. They left the Slizzar twin at the door of an estate, with a few journals they no longer needed & a piece of paper with their name.
        • Jensa Lofgren, a servant of the house, found the demon child soon after they were dropped. Pitying the discarded child, she took them in. They grew up in relative safety but were kept out of sight from the nobility that lurked on the grounds. Better to be unseen and unheard, given they hadn't learned of their Slizzar identity yet and were unable to shapeshift out of their Haat-Maraya form. Their innate magic began to manifest in unpredictable bursts as well.
      • Adolescence.
        • Upon reaching teenage years, Ella began to read the notes their father left behind. This sent them into a spiral of piecing together scattered information. They experimented with crystalline technology and learned to control their magical abilities.
        • A coup of the estate led to Ella and Jensa being captured by the patriarch's brother, and eventually serving under him.
      • Adulthood.
        • Their time serving the brother began to break Ellaren, especially as they had just turned eighteen, and their Slizzar identity became clear to them in a series of visions & unfortunate nightmares. They stuck to the form they were used to however, not ready to cut and run just yet. They took on the name Zoie, emulating their adoptive mother's name change to Gin, and directed their rage into learning how to use a shortsword.
      • Present.
        • It didn’t take long before another tragedy struck. All Zoie remembers is Gin waking them at the crack of dawn, bloodied and stabbed, with a paler complexion than normal. She told them they had to get out of Solleria, and find refuge elsewhere. When the sun was fully in the sky, he was on horseback with his mother. The two ended up in Regalia where they now reside.
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    Taking this for review.
     
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    HereticTakao dark spirited demidevil

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    @Scribbe wahoo big update
    - Did an aesthetic overhaul
    - Rewrote life story some
    - Removed sorcery from profs, used the 10 points I hadn't used and 5 points from the previous 6 point sorcery investment towards engineering. +15 points total invested, crystaltech branch. Packs: golem, control, biotics, weapons, and hooking.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Lore1

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    this is fine
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    HereticTakao dark spirited demidevil

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    @Scribbe Haat-Maraya go brrr
    So yeah, with the Maraya update I decided to convert Zoie to a Haat-Maraya, because it made more sense for their character. Updated racials to accommodate that. Removed Olvoism from their profs since Genetics got Thanos snapped. Converted to the current app format. No prof changes, leaving those 3 points (from genetics) for later use.
     
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    freak
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    HereticTakao dark spirited demidevil

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    @Scribbe
    Silben
    - Silvenified Zoie. Added Specials to Ability Section, as well as editing the life story a tad.
    - Removed Engineering Packs Golem & Control, as I could never see myself using them IRP.
     
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    this is fine, approved
     
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    HereticTakao dark spirited demidevil

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    @Scribbe Updated prof section in line with the proficiency update. Everything remains the same basically, besides me adding Engineered Chassis Pack for later down the line freak RP.
     
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    @Yurs Retconned Zoie's Arken-Sire to Wickedness, because it fits WAAAYY better than Body. That is the only change.
     
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    HereticTakao dark spirited demidevil

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    Zoie Update:
    - Tweaked Lifestory to include learning magic and other things I added in this.
    - Removed Engineering Weapons Pack and Engineering Chassis Pack.
    - Added Soulrend Wisdom + Desc of Soulrend Form
    - Added Flesh Magic & Shadow Magic
    - Replaced North Linguist Pack with Empire Linguist Pack

    As my previous reviewer is no longer staff, I need a new reviewer.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    @Caelamus with the Silven update, I had to make a few tweaks to Zoie.
    - Converted their race to Slizzar, but they usually stick to a Haat-Maraya form.
    - Changed their Arkensire from Wickedness to Corruption.
    - With the magic update, I re-did their magic profs. Now investing 3 points into magic, with the Displacing, Illusionism, and Materialism packs.
    - Removed Soulrend Wisdom, as Illusionism takes over that function.
    - Removed Unarmed & Blunt Packs, still have two invested in Strength, but only one point-buy pack being Blades.
    - Edited Lifestory to match the changes done.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved, although, does illusion take over that function? Soulrend is more actual transformation. Illusion is just magical gaslighting yourself and others into thinking you look like something.
     

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