Played Character Svitra

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  1. AWildRhia

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    Svitra

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Svitra 'Sabine'
    • Race: Slizzar
    • Age: 42
    • Gender / Pronouns: She/Her They/Them
    • Occult: Phantom Archon, Dragon Mage
    Core Concept
    • Once a chaotic adventurer despising every aspect of government, gods, and religion - Svitra has since calmed down and humbled herself. Rather, she currently seeks a better life for Slizzar as a whole, and will do anything to help her kin, and protect her family.
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    Combat Style
    Chembomber

    Proficiencies

    • Strength: 0
    • Constitution: 0
    • Magic: 3 - Dragon/God Magic
      • Magic Trip Pack
      • Magic Feather Pack
      • Magic Warp Pack
    • Intelligence: 5 - Jadetech Technician Branch | Steamtech Technician Branch
      • Tech Exchange Pack
      • Tech Resist Pack
      • Tech Charge Pack
      • Oceanic Pack
      • Safeguard Pack | Magical Variant
    • Wisdom: 4
      • Chem Bolts Pack
      • Technique Parry Pack
      • Chem Revive Pack
      • Chem Bang Pack
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Faith: 2 - Draconism Cleric
      • Sacred Gear Pack
      • Sacred Judgement Pack
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    Languages
    • Common
    • Zoram
    • Calem
    • Altalar
    • Agasi
    • Nātl
    • Katharic
    • Pidato
    • Wai-lan
    • Sofaal
    • Gallwech
    Appearance Information
    • Svitra in her natural form is 5'5" with an average body build. Her hair consists of bright pink tendrils ranging to a dark purple, usually tied up in some sort of ponytail. Her eyes are purple with black sclera.
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    Life Story
    • Svitra was born in Calemberg to two mothers. Alongside a twin, she has a multitude of siblings from both sides. But only grew up with one.
    • She spent the majority of her childhood isolated - living a bit away from the nearby village, and spending much of her time experimenting, or with her twin.
    • During her later adulthood, she was left alone for a few years and entirely honed in on her craft. Surrounding herself with tech and familiars alike.
    • Eventually she grew lonely, and made her way to Regalia to spend time with her family - a majority of which had moved there.
    • During her time in Regalia, she got married to a Kathar, and has had a great deal of strange encounters. Leaving it for a few years, she traveled to Dexai, Sassrakkand, and the Dread Empire - and much more. Finally returning thereafter with her wife.
    • Though dreams don't last for long, and in the midst of chasing her own, Sabine converted to being an Archon. Gaining a whole new look on life, and soon following it through to becoming a Priestess of Nox.
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    #1 AWildRhia, Apr 20, 2020
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  2. booette

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    Hello! I have claimed this for review. Expect it shortly!
     
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    Interesting. I don't think I've ever seen players choose to pick up proficiencies in-character. Approved!
     
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  4. AWildRhia

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    Updated due to prof update - However reviewer Isn't staff anymore so no color changes were made.

    Speaking of! Bump. Needs a new reviewer.
     
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    Picking up for staff review.
     
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    @Katiesc Not sure if I need a re-review for this or not, but, I'm playing it safe!
    Added the fact that she's a sole in accordance with the racial update.
    Added 3 points in linguistics for Kathar Elven. Yet to actually be taught ic so the points were added ahead of time for when it is.
    Bumped up her Nessrassian faith by 1 due to ic interactions.
    Also added a little tidbit to her life story that I've been saying ic a lot and forgot to actually write in.
    All edits marked in this color!
     
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    Re-wrote basically the entire lifestory from the ground up. And requesting a new reviewer!
     
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    Taking this app for review!
     
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    @KrakenLord01 Sup. Changed it according to proficiency update. All edits marked in this color!
     
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    @KrakenLord01 Finally used up all of her points. Added more metallurgy, some clockwork, got rid of her socialite status and medical points, aged her up two years.
     
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    @KrakenLord01 ok so I know you approved me like 2 days ago but engineering update so hahaaaaaa,,,,,,
    removed all traces of metallurgy and clockwork, compiled it into engineering.
    chose steamtech as the branch.
     
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    @KrakenLord01 after a bit of thinking, she's been turned into a cratos! proficiency points and personality shuffled around a bit to accommodate this.
     
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    @Acosmism sup! Forgot to update it since pathfinding got removed. Finally got around to it - also added her racial boost and progression stuff. And updated to the new system ofc. As per usual, everything edited is marked in color. Most of it got to stay the same!
     
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    hehoo updated w/ prof update :)
     
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    APPROVED!!
     
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    HEY @Yurs I SWTICHED AROUND SOME POINTS. and one of the magic packs. thanks xoxo
     
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    @Caelamus purposefully didn't take/suppressed/whatever the wisdom pack gave her. now a vampire, smile.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    @Caelamus Hey! Don't know if this needs a re-review, but. Swapped around some of her abilities :)
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    Approved. And yes, it does.
     
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    @Caelamus Shifted points and abilities around, most notably added demonology. Also added some respect for Inthalis in her core concept.
     
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    @Caelamus got her cured so I could vibe with the technician update. moved ALL of her points around so it actually looks, a lot more like an engineering-focused character should. god I love mad scientist vibes. let me be singed let me be singed let me be singed
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    I don't know about that one if I'm gonna be honest with you given they did some things recently attached to vampirism. Becoming a technician kind of means you have to had retcon'd that. I wanted it for Aerbueari but also kind of recognized that I should probably make a new character instead of trying to shoehorn this onto my character who has had meaningful rp as a Cahal. So.

    Maybe that's something for you to consider too. Why shoehorn this onto this character and retcon that rp and not just make like a Feka or Asha or something. I'm pretty playing a bunny girl support engineer sounds like something you'd probably do.
     
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    no uh
    doesn't it say that while they're a vampire/whatever it just gets turned to artificer instead of technician? then pops back to technician once they're cured

    bit of an edit to clarify something real quick. She was always intended to be an Engineer/Technician/Whatever else. Vampirism was a fun mini thing. So she absolutely learned all of this like, years ago icly
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    I'll approve it, but it's still very funky to me.
     
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