Zacaharias Von Rodenberg

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  1. Ludicro

    Ludicro Indecisive - Wait, no make it ironic

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    Zacaharias von Rodenberg



    Zacaharias von Rodenberg

    Age: 22

    Gender: Male

    Race: Calderliga Alior

    Sexuality: Straight



    Skill Information

    Total Points: 27

    +15 Culinary Arts(+5 from Proficiency Points, +10 from Hobby Points)

    +10 Perception Training(+10 from Proficiency Points)

    +8 Stealth Rogue Skill (+8 from Proficiency Points)

    +4 Unarmed Combat Skill (+4 from Proficiency Points)





    Body Shape

    Physical Stat: 4

    Body Type: Average Body Type

    Body Fat: Average Body Fat



    Languages

    Common (learned in childhood)

    Calderliga Dialect (learned from parents)



    Visual Information

    Eye Color: Brown

    Hair Color: Blonde

    Hair Style: Short and Scraggly

    Skin Color: Tan

    Clothing: Semi-tight fitting shirt with a white undershirt under and simple trousers.

    Height: 6'0

    • Zacaharias is 6'0 with an average build. He has muscle from working when he was growing up but nothing exceptional. He has a natural tan from just spending time outside. He has a tattoo of two dice on the upper part of his left arm and below that, another tattoo of a tree with the roots growing down to wrap around his wrist. On the inside of his right forearm, he has a tattoo of scales tipping to the right.
    • Majority of the time he wears a dark blue shirt with a white undershirt. His left arm is exposed. He wears simple brown trousers and boots.

    Personality and Abilities

    Option Two: The Core List

    Alignment

    Neutral Good

    Personality Type

    The Campaigner

    Religion

    Unionist - 5


    Life Story
    Childhood

    Zacaharias was born to Archill and Alicia von Rodenburg who was a local farmer and a seamstress outside Keislanderwald. He grew up in a peasant family where food was always on the table but they rarely had anything elaborate. His older brother Leopold followed in his father's footsteps and began to work the farm with their father. Zacaharias, however, decided the best place for him would be in a different industry.
    Teenage Years


    Zacaharias decided that he was going to work in the food industry. He started off as a server for a local tavern, taking meals to those passing through but he also did some work behind the bar. As he got older he stopped serving and started to do other tasks for the tavern. He worked as a bouncer for a while there whenever someone else was handling the bar. He got stronger from doing this and he learned how to keep his wits about him and that he needed to keep an eye on those coming in and out as often as possible. After a couple years of working as a bouncer, he started to spend more and more time behind the bar. He would mostly cook but as he was older, he also started to learn how to make his own alcohol.
    Young Adult


    After much of his young life was spent apprenticing in the tavern in his home town, Zacaharias decided that he could do more with his life. He took the money he had been saving from years working at the tavern and decided to try and open his own tavern. He succeeded in opening it in a long closed down tavern not too far. However, he didn't have much experience with managing a whole business by himself so he had to learn quickly or his business would flop, which it did. After a couple years Zacaharias had to close down his tavern. He had some costumers but not a steady enough flow to keep it open. He decided to use what money he had made to get passage to Regalia where he would hopefully find a job to put the skills he had to use.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Hello! I will be claiming this for staff review!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Ludicro Indecisive - Wait, no make it ironic

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    Bumping for Re-review
     
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    MantaRey repairing the gens Staff Member Lore2

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    @Ludicro Sorry for the delay, this was lost in the several pages of updated apps. Claimed for review.

    • Your current total Proficiency Points amounts to 31, which is incorrect. The correct total would be his age, 21, +5 bonus, equaling 26. Racial/Culture Proficiency Boosts no longer exist. Please make your edits in accordance.
    Make your edits in a different color and tag me when you've completed them.
     
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    Ludicro Indecisive - Wait, no make it ironic

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    @MantaRey Tagging for re-review to update proficiency
     
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    MantaRey repairing the gens Staff Member Lore2

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    @Ludicro
    • You currently have +4 in Unarmed, which will add up in your Body Stat calc. Even though it doesn't raise the body build, I would include it just so you don't lose sight of it.
    • Since you have left the Likes/Dislikes left out in the open, I'll go ahead and remark on them. I believe the Likes are a little vague and could definitely be a bit more unique to the character, especially the last point.
      • Additionally, consider putting this section under a Spoiler so it's left optional to read over.
    Make your edits in a different color and I'll check over them once they're done.
     
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    Ludicro Indecisive - Wait, no make it ironic

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    @MantaRey I made the changes, marked in red. I went ahead and removed the likes and dislikes. Didn't feel it was needed.
     
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