___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ THEME ___________________________________________ "The clouds. They are so far away. I wonder, what will it take to reach them?" ___________________________________________ CHARACTER INFORMATION Full Name: Yoel Trefan Creyden Race: Godborn Ailor Age: 23 Gender: Male Eye Color: Intensely glowing pink CORE CONCEPT Yoel maintains a complicated relationship with religion. While attitudes towards his heritage are more benevolent than what most others of the world's godchildren have to deal with, he has toiled through most of his life under the knowledge that he is faintly more than the echo of someone whose greatness he will never surpass. As a result, he harbors a tangled shade of contempt for the divinity of the Mightbringer in particular, clinging to the lessons of Standard Unionism, with Elen as his patron, in an effort to escape his shadow as well he can. A mage of divine descent of a rather bitter heart which he hides beneath laid-back and moral airs, faring through the City Of Light under ambitions of comforts and accomplishments alike. PROFICIENCIES 0 Strength 1 Constitution Ironheart Pack 4 Wisdom Dimenthist Wisdom Pack Affliction Wisdom Pack Mineral Wisdom Pack Tracking Pack | Arctech 0 Dexterity 8 Exist Magic Displacing Pack Casting Pack | Greater Casting Mimicry Pack Breaking Pack Enchanting Pack | Greater Enchanting Alteration Pack Disruption Pack | Greater Disruption Materialism Pack 1 Charisma Stupid Luck Pack ABILITIES Ailor Racial Kit (6 Specials) Godborn Kit, Caan The Mightbringer (1 Specials) Exist Magic (11 Abilities, 24 Specials) Airwallking, Sparkwalking, Surfwalking, Arcane Mastery, Rune Smithing, Pocket Sight, Scan Sight, Emote Infuse, Life Wall, Health Call, Time Cleanse, Light Element, Dark Element, Chain Break, Prison Break, Memory Break, Arcane Sight, Self Control, Sanctum Vessel, Heat Immune, Cold Immune, Lightning Immune, Armor Cleanse, Dressage Cleanse) LANGUAGES Common (Free) APPEARANCE Yoel’s one and outstanding aberration lie in his eyes, that unnatural cohesion of gold and red that marks all Silven wrought of the Void. Yoel is a rather broad-shouldered young Ailor male of sharp, conventionally attractive features. The tone and complexion of his skin is fair, and his hair is wrought of wild red curls. His eyes, an unbearable radiant pink, are always shielded by his custom-made spectacles; enchanted by himself to better contain his divine sight. LIFE STORY Yoel is born in the chill of early spring to his mother, a rich and putrid merchant's daughter of Wysland, who bore the babe after a tryst with a man of remarkable renown and nature. The boy is brought up in Wysland through what is a tumultuous childhood, growing rebellious in the face of a prejudiced and blaming grandfather, thusly becoming known in their neighborhood within the coal capital as a street rascal. He is not unloved by his mother, yet an inevitable awakening of magic talent serves only to complicate things between them among all other aspects. Yoel finally passes the threshold from nuisance to danger at the beginning of his adolescence as his magic becomes increasingly erratic and difficult to control, a risk that bursts into consequence when he accidentally injures a state official in the street. Fortune sides with the godling when he is saved from punishment by a traveling band of arcanists, who smuggle him out of the city and take him under their wing. Yet he is forced to leave everything behind, and he cannot help but hurt over it. The half-god's exile, however, proves to be for the better, as luck indeed stays on his side. His new caretakers are perfectly equipped to hone the arbitrary powers housed within the youth, teaching him to temper them while opening his eyes to the vaster realm of the Empire. But it is done with rather superficial motivations; the source of their generosity being woven in admiration for his heritage, and precious little else. After years abroad of learning, Yoel parts from his mentors; hardened, matured, and perhaps wiser - albeit with a slew of things to prove. And what better place to establish oneself, if not the city where all things come together?
@ChapterDeath hey long time no see decided to go for the new constitution packs, and axed charisma and dexterity accordingly dunno if this warrants a re review
13/14 Points invested, just toss that last point into some category. You don't need to buy a pack if you don't want to. Otherwise approved. @Banard
@ChapterDeath finally decided on an iron direction to take this character in concept, proficiencies and story changed accordingly
@ChapterDeath made the fella into a godborn and changed his magic alignment to exist pretty much every part of the app brushed up on