(Sketch done by Ghirko) Basic Information ➼Full Name:Yautja Urzin ➼Age: 45 ➼Gender:Male ➼Race:Maz-Allar ➼Sexuality: Straight ➼Preferred Weapon:Longmaw Spear Skill Information ➼Total Points: 65, Fifty base, Five from select racial buff, ten from hobby ➼ Combat Points Fist Combat + 16 (11 Invested 5 from racial) Spear Combat + 10 Invested Shield Combat + 4 Invested Utility Ranged Combat + 12 Invested ➼Special Training Perception Training +5 Invested ➼Art Points Pathfinding Art +10 (From Hobby) Hunting Art +5 (From Investment) ➼Point Buy abilities Wall Climb 3 + 3 Invested Body Shape ➼ Body Fat: Average ➼ Body Type: Ripped ➼ Physical Stat: 16 Fist Combat + 10 Spear Combat + 4 Shield Combat + 10/2 Pathfinding + 12 Utility Ranged 12/2 = 25 Due to cap Languages ➼ Common (Fluent learned in later years) ➼ Zasta Spells, Special Traits or Mutations Racial Body Mend 2 Hunt Sense 1 Nature Gift 1 Power Howl 1 Allar Biology 2 Point Buy Abilities Wall Climb 3 Physical Information ➼ Eye Color: Yellow ➼ Feather Color:Brown ➼ Feather Style: Ruffled ➼ Scale Color:Brown ➼ Clothing:Predatorial Hunting garbs ➼ Height: 5’10 Personality ➼ Character alignment: Neutral ➼Yautja follows his own moral code. He lusts for an ultimate challenge that will cause him to have to go beyond his limits. His code disallows him from killing pregnant women, or children. ➼ Character Personality Type:Entrepreneur ➼Yautja is a very energetic and perceptive hunter. Having spent years of his life training in the jungles of Hadar. ➼ Religion: Great Alchezech 5/10 Yautja is rather impartial to his religion, however he believes in it nonetheless. Life Story 0-14 Yautja was born in the jungle grounds of Hadar, the allar was born into a tribal hunting clan that had formed their own code. From a young age Yautja had began to learn to hunt, the preferred weapon of all those around him specialized in unarmed combat. As he grew he would often go on hunting trips with his family, his mother, father and two sisters. 15-26 During these years Yautja continued to practice his hunting knowledge. When he turned thirty years of age, he had a coming of age trial, where he was required to enter the jungle and survive for a year alone. And when he returned if he did not have the skull of ten different hunting trophies he would not be accepted back into the clan. On his twenty first skull with a month left in his year he came across his ultimate predator. He came across a Url hunter, who out hunted him at multiple turns. Yautja became determined to kill this Url, and assert himself as the dominant hunter. On his final hunt, with only a week left, he found the Url, and began to bait them out with a trap, he got them into an open area, away from the jungles. Forcing the Url to fight him directly, however he'd littered the entirety of the open area with traps as he knew he alone would not be able to combat an Url. After extremely long combat scenes the Allar had been stabbed deep into his stomach by the Url's blade, however he'd managed to bring his talons to their neck, digging them deep and succesfuly landing a fatal blow. And then when the hunt ended he returned with twenty one skulls. After this Yautja was showered with praise by his clan and family. 27-35 In his more recent years Yautja heard tales of the holy city and the mighty fighters that resided there. He lusted for his ultimate hunt, and along with the mighty fighters that resided in regalia he also heard of the beasts that roamed there at times. He decided that he’d take his leave of his clan in order to achieve a better challenge. During his time traveling to regalia he came across a rather imposing large black Asha, though they did not seem much of a challenge, they offered Yautja advice as they caught wind of the allar's plans to go to regalia. The Asha said. "Look for a Maz-Allar named Orodor, he'll be able to help you out." And the allar decided to at least take that advice, as the Asha walked off he pondered the strange advice, but continued on nonetheless.
Hello! Only peer review, not staff. :) I suggest you expand the life story more, this seems way too short for someone this person's age. If at all possible, try to add unforgettable memories and expand this backstory by a few sentences.
Hey there @RedEyesZuAllar! Claiming this app for Aspirant review! I ask that you make the edit suggested by Faith_Bug in Purple and tag me when complete!
@Mollymock Hiya, I updated Yautja's profs for the new update and aged him down significantly, I understand ur probably swamped so take ur time!
Howdy. Just a few small updates before I can approve this: Please update the language selection according to the new Linguistics rules. Additionally, you'll need to spend points in order to learn a third language. Please remove that last one or allocate the necessary points. Please specify where these spells/abilities are coming from, as it has both racials and Point Buy. Please update backstory to include new race names. Varran and Mu-Allar are both outdated lore terms.
@Yurs Heya! Sorry for taking so long, but I updated what you told me too! Didn't make the updates in any color, though.
