Rejected Sheet Xailya Beahandros: Shelved

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  1. BeaneyBaby

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    卄丨ㄒ ㄒ卄乇 尺ㄖ卂ᗪ フ卂匚Ҝ
    乃ㄖㄖ爪 乃ㄖㄖ爪

    Basic Information (Required)

    • Full Name: Xailya Beahandros
    • Age: 47
    • Gender: They/them
    • Race: Sihndar (Tribe of Ma’ella) (Asha Ancestory)
    • Sexuality: Wouldn't you like to know weather boy.
    • Preferred Weapon: Khoptar (Kopesh)
    Skill Information (Required)

    Total Points: 50 + 10 Hobby

    • Sword Combat: +10 (Life)

    • Dancing Art: +10 (Hobby)

    • Vocal Singing: +5 (Life)

    • Husbandry Art: +10 (Life)

    • Instrument Art: +5 (Life)

    • Sailing Art: +10 (Life)

    • Theatre Art: +10 (Life)
    Body Shape

    10 + 10 + 10 = 30 x .5 =15 || 10 x 1 = 10 + 15 = 25

    • Physical Stat: 15 (25 if not capped)
    • Body Shape: Ripped
    • Body Fat: Low

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    Languages

    • Sihndar Dialect
    • Common
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations


    Racial Abilites:

    • Residues of Cataclysm
    • Embrace of the Spider Queen
    • Dryder Form
    • Embrace of Training
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    • Loring of Ovolh

    Visual Information (Required)


    • Eye Color: One Green, one blue
    • Hair Color: White
    • Hair Style: Some braids within flowing down hair
    • Skin Color: Purple
    • Clothing: For the most part she wears pants with tall boots. A long coat with frilly ends and an eyepatch to pull together the pirate aesthetic look.
    • Height: 6’0”


    Personality (Required with Choice)


    Option Two: The Core List

    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Chaotic good
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • ESFP-A [Entertainer]
    • Pirate
    • “Peace Was Never An Option”
    • The Warrior
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Spider Queen 4/10

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    Life Story (Required)

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    Xailya was born in a clan in Drowda. Their mother died during childbirth and her father had already left them before they were even born. Soon after they were a few months old they were adopted by two Sihndar, Neia and Ayda Beahandros. During their time with the two, growing older and gaining knowledge everyday. They learned how to dance, sing, and play an instrument. Once they were old enough, at 10 years old, they were sent to the School of Esa-Ajo for the next two years of their life.

    10-15

    For the next two years of studying and learning at the school. When they made it through their studies, they were sent into the forest of Drowda, with a group of at least 15 people. Their task was to navigate the forest, moving across it with caution. Along with the other trials to be done, they passed them. For the next few years, Xailya continued their own training, visiting often their cousin Jayden.

    15-25

    As Xailya grew older, they found herself drawn to the aspects of sailing and owning a ship, having gotten inspired by a captain and his ship, after going on a sail ride around their homeland. After working hard on many ships, they finally gained one. The ship’s sails showing off their family crest, which they also had tattooed on their shoulder.

    25-49

    Having achieved their goal in getting a ship, they dubbed the ship’s name The Prideful Lion. They set sail with a crew of Sihndar at their side. They went on many adventures, filled with many tasks to help people and to fight off anything that tried to interfere, adding each story to her memory everytime something eventful happens. They encountered many people, sometimes befriending them and keeping in touch with them through letters. Sooner or later, they set sail towards Regalia, leaning that their cousin had journeyed there and settled down upon that land.



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    #1 BeaneyBaby, Jan 23, 2021
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    claimed for review!
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore2

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    This should be a bit more descriptive than 'Pirate Aesthetic.'

    Please choose a personality from this site rather than making up your own personality type, please!

    This feels incredibly vague and I'd like it if you included more details in what had occurred during this period of life! Did she encounter anyone? What made her sail to Regalia? What was the voyage like?

    Please mark all edits in VIOLET once finished, and tag me.
     
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    @festiveCorvid , edits were made in red :)
    And also, she went to Regalia since she found out her cousin recently went there.
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore2

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    Alright, my bad. Can you put in the backstory when/why they learned this, as while it is not impossible for Sihndar to learn it, but its still viewed as an occult ability and disliked/scrutinized by the Sihndar. That'll be all I need.
     
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    BeaneyBaby BeaneyBaby Supremium

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    If you don't mind me asking, where can I find this information on the page? Because a lot of other Sihndar have ritualism.
    And I plopped it into the life story.
    Edit: I was told they dislike sorcery. Not ritualism.
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore2

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    In many parts of the world people do not know the distinction between Sorcery and Ritualism. To many, magic is magic, although ritualism would be less disliked because it does not use void or exist essences, but still disliked because of the lack of distinction. Essentially, dumb medieval peasants don't know the difference, nor care to learn. It isn't on the page, however.
     
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    Hello, I play a Sihndar and I am reviewed by mollymock and no where did it state that a Sihndar ever disliked ritualism. Even magic is accepted if in the tribe of the ellatrix which they are in. As well as what this Sihndar is in. If information like this is true it should be stated on the page next to sorcery and I would request you ask molly to do such since they are the main staff with the sihndar and their page. Though as of now she is correct and this ritualism isn't wrong also due to it being an ability being given via worship. They would not have any hatred or anything close. Or else any time they used dryder form they would be scrutinized by their own people with the same ability. That was my cup of tea so sorry if it sounds rude. Just trying to be blunt and straight to the point.
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore2

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    I think you are misinterpreting the nature of the edits I'm requesting. I am not asking for a deletion, but rather, just a time and place of when they learned their ritualism, for the sake of clarity and for a more fleshed out backstory.

    As for what you say regarding the wiki, it is already present on the ritualism page.

    "Traditionally, Ritualism is not seen as Magic by those who are familiar with it, indeed, Ritualists are not aberrants by default. That being said, many state-religious figures and mundane people do not know the difference between Ritualism and actual Magic, often keeping anyone practicing it at arm's length as a Mystic."

    If you have any other questions or concerns, please put them into the Discord Ticketbot.
     
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    I'll just remove the flippin ritualism and put it into something else.
     
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