Rejected Sheet |xabi Playero|

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  1. Kibaa

    Kibaa Regalian Senator

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    BASIC INFORMATION:

    ✥Legal Name: Xabi de Solacia
    ✧Former Name: Xabi Playero
    Age & Height: 32 years old | 5 feet, 7 inches
    ✥Sex: Male
    ✥Race: Warmland Ailor | Half Daendroque - Half Tolonne
    ✥Eye Color: Dark brown
    Visual Information:
    ✥ Hair: Long black hair tied into twin buns atop either side of his head, or alternatively in neat braids.
    ✥ Skin Color: A paler tint of a Solacian tan.
    ✥ Clothing: Black colored robes. Dark leather pads, leather boots.

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    CORE CONCEPT:
    ✥Beliefs: Although he does not believe in Unionism, Xabi maintains himself paltrily versed on the fundamentals of this religion to masquerade his ☠ void worshipper presence in Regalia. || ✧Void Worship - 10/10 || ✧Unionism - 1/10

    ✥Identity: Xabi is fanatically obsessed with the paranormal reality behind Exist and Void lore, as well as with what little is known about the Seraph civilization. As a result, he will sometimes slip, placing this obsession before his responsibilities, necessities, and family goals. Oftentimes, this obsession has resulted in dangerous trips and unhealthy binges. Xabi is moreover notorious within the Crown Isle for his bold political commentary, strong Pro-Daen sentiments, and numerous felonies, including escaped arrests.

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    PROFICIENCY
    Total Points: 50 Age Points - 10 Hobby Points - 1 unused age point
    CORE

    DAGGER COMBAT (4) (+4 from Age)
    WRITING ARTS (15) (+10 from Hobby Points, +5 from Seizing Innovation)
    POINT-BUY
    LINGUISTICS (15) (+15 from Age)
    ROGUERY (27) (+27 from Age)

    ☍ Rogue Gift 3
    ☍ Rogue Gift 4
    ☍ Rogue Gift 5
    ☍ Wall Climb 3
    ☍ Honed Skill 3
    ☍ Burglary Pack
    ☍ Forgery Mastery - Government, Guard, and Art

    ARCANOLOGY (3) (+3 from Age)
    ☍ Inquest Knowledge

    Body Shape

    ✥Physical Stat: 9 [4 base + 5 from Seizing Destiny]
    ✥Body Shape: Toned Body Shape
    ✥Body Fat: Low

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    ABILITIES AND TALENTS
    RACIAL ABILITIES
    ☍ Seizing Destiny
    ☍ Seizing Innovation
    ☍ Dark Empathy
    ☍ People of Many Tongues
    Progression Talents
    Sage Talent - Level 1 || Rogue Talent - Level 2
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    LANGUAGES
    Common (Default)
    Daendroquin (Linguistics purchase) [3]
    Tolonnesa (Native tongue)
    Katharic (Linguistics purchase) [3]
    Girobaldan (People of Many Tongues)

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    Altalar (Linguistics purchase) [3]
    Allorn (Linguistics purchase) [3]
    Suvial (Linguistics purchase) [3]

    Ancient Altalar (Linguistics Unlock)
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    LIFE STORY:
      • Xabi Playero was born in the Sun Isles to an upper-middle class family of Daendroquin immigrants.
      • He was brought up within Solacia for the most part. During his upbringing, Xabi and his brother Isidoro had to work at the family's dredging sites. They spent their free time visiting and receiving their Girobaldan and Hallonqian cousins.
      • Xabi eventually set out to study in Regalia, where he studied language and history at the Imperial Academy of History.
      • During his advanced years, Xabi fell deep into his obsession with Seraphic history and other aracane subjects. He spent many years far and away, conducting expeditions, experiments, all in search of answers. Throughout this period in life, Xabi developed many connections within the underworlds of Aloria.
      • Later in life, Xabi and most of his direct relatives moved to Regalia with the hopes of making an impact of Daen politics. As strong advocates of pro-Daen politics, Xabi and his brother developed infamy and notoriety, which later led to the death of Isidoro. Xabi's views and political commentary have made him wanted by the State numerous times. He has escaped persecution this far.

    LIFE STORY:

    hey say the sun shines brightest in Solacia, rivaling even the gallant rays of the distant land of Farah’deen. It is in this tropical paradise where Xabi Playero was brought into Aloria. Born to a hard-working family of Daen immigrants, Xabi and his brother Isidoro were raised under strict conditions. The two were homeschooled for the better part of their upbringings, and were taught the fundamentals of hard work and physical labor while working for their family’s dredging operations in the profitable waters of Solacia. Despite the decent treatment and care provided by his parents, however, Xabi’s philosophical worldview was largely shaped by the experience of having been forced to dredge alongside his parents' slaves, something his father forced him to do in order to.. "become a better man."


    Regrettably for his parents, Xabi went on to develop into the perfect resemblance of what can be stereotyped as a rebellious teenager. Unlike his more affectionate brother, who spent most of his time cherishing family and traditional values, Xabi devoted his curiosity to the abstract and philosophy, often spending days or weeks away from home in pursuit of his own personal interests. He additionally took up the concepts of architecture and design as a hobby. If it weren’t for the fact that he actually cared about his brother, some would say Xabi would have likely left his home a long time ago. While not at all a delinquent, Xabi’s interests inevitably led him into the Solacian underworld, where he found his place among other low-lives and slaves. It was in this criminal society that Xabi truly found the freedom he had coveted for so long as a child, able to practice his hobbies freely. During this time, Xabi struggled to sustain himself by designing blueprints for minor construction projects.

    Xabi’s time in the underworld did not score him any points with his family, but it allowed the rogue to freely pursue his interests and hobbies. Xabi spent a large portion of this point in time moving in and out of Solacia, sometimes disappearing for months for what Xabi dubbed as “research”. Little is known about Xabi’s adolescence and young adult days. During this arcane binge, Xabi developed a close relationship to underwordly elements. Ever obsessed with the historical mystery of the Seraph Civilization, Xabi conducted many expeditions and experiments deep in the uncharted lands of Daendroc. Throughout this costly quest, he studied strenuously with the Altalar of Daendroc, adding their tongue to his linguistic lexicon in addition to Kathar-Altalar.

    Expectedly, Xabi later abandoned Solacia in search of knowledge. His interests led him to the Crown Isle, using his profits from criminal activity in Solacia to fund his research as well as enrollment into the Imperial Academy of History, where he studied namely Allorn and Seraphic history. During this time, Xabi bounced about from the Imperial Academy and the Regalian Informational Society in San Girobalda. Although he never graduated from the Academy of History due to a lack of care for grades, Xabi highly reveres what he was able to learn from the much more sophisticated community of scholars found in Regalia. Later in life, Xabi reunited himself with Isidoro in Regalia, where the two developed semi-successful political careers. Their political endeavors ultimately resulted with the untimely demise of Isidoro Playero by way of murder, leading Xabi down a dark quest for vengeance.

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  2. booette

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    Hello! I'll be claiming this for aspirant review. Expect a response shortly!
     
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    Approved.
     
  4. Kibaa

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    Thank you! Could you help me out on the Body Physical Stat though? I don't know how to calculate it! :((
     
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    Boom! All fixed. Thank you once more for the review.
     
  7. Kibaa

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    Added visual reference :D
     
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    Proficiencies have been revamped so as to reflect the latest proficiency update.
     
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    Re-approved.
     
  10. Kibaa

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    Edits: Changed up some of the aesthetics and conducted proofreading on the lifestory. Added very minor details to relationship. Cleaned up some grammatical and formatting errors. The 'Approved' prefix automatically disappeared, so, marking for re-review.
     
  11. Kibaa

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    New reviewer needed, tagging @Arhbi
     
  12. Azas

    Azas lofi sihai Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @Kibaa I'll be picking up this application for review. Please make the following edit and tag me once complete:
    • Physical stat would be 10 from the dagger prof
     
  13. Kibaa

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    Edit has been made!
     
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    Proficiencies have been revamped in accordance to the overhaul. Ready for re-review! @Azas
     
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    Approved
     
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  16. Kibaa

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    This character has been updated to the latest template
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for staff review, expect a reply shortly!
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore2

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    Very easy to review app! A few things that you may want to update after approval:
    • Letters after symbols in the thread title will always be lowercase. I have no idea why this is, but it's a weird quirk of the forums. So the | will cause the X to be lowercase. I had a lot of trouble with that as well, and the only solution is to remove it.
    • Phys Stat always rounds up. You should have 12 rather than 11.5
    Otherwise this is good!

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