Full Name: Wilheim of Köln Age: 55 Gender: Male Race: Pure Breizh (Archan) Sexuality: Straight Preferred Weapon: Human-forged Longsword Proficiency Points - 60 | Hobby Points - 10 Blades Proficiency - 13 Society Knowledge - 6 (Ailor Culture , Unionist Culture) General Tactic Skill - 25 (Archan Tactical) Theater Arts - 10 (Hobby) Union Blessings - 16 (Archan) Body Shape Athletic 10 | Average Body Fat Spoiler: Archan Abilities Call of the Union [Passive] Blessing of the Lady Blessing of the Protector Blessing of the Avenger Blessing of the Bulwark Bastion of Faith Unbreakable Devotion Eternal Watch Languages Common (fluent) Picaron (mother tongue) Etosian Dialect (fluent, taught) Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Greying, with a tinge of brown. Hair Style: Disheveled Skin Color: Caucasian Clothing: Simple Commoner Rags Height: 5'11" How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? Wilheim would be much more jovial, openly showing camaraderie among human strangers and allies alike. How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? With prayer and faith, Wilheim would put on a stoic front despite the fear cracking at the surfaces of his face. Only in total despair would this completely break down to reveal his true fear. How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Quick to rouse to anger, Wilheim would rapidly become more irritable and to the point. How does your character view Law and Authorities? Depending on the Law and Authorities, it could vary. The Man-Empire of Regalia, Wilheim views with great regard as among the great achievements of Humanity; while the Songaskian and Elven empires he views as mockeries to his own people's great achievements. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? Poorly. He feels as though Mankind was awarded the right to rule Aloria unabated, and the existence of other races undermines this. How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? Religion is the strongest factor for Wilheim's life, and the cornerstone of all he represents. He views other faiths as heretical, but is more than willing to work and cooperate with them if it is in the greater good of Mankind. Thus he treats most Mankind as jovial companions. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? While he sees all but healing and light sorceries as heretical, he sees the value in them and accepts their use if it is used to his ends and goals. How does your character feel towards their family? He is a proud, pureblood human; as is his parents. It is only natural he sees pride not only in his immediate family, but the whole purity of Mankind. What is your character the most proud of about themselves? He has pride in his zealotry, his race, and his purity. What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? His faith, and his blind desire in the inevitable unification and purification of Man. What is your character's biggest insecurity? He holds deep-seeded disdain for the other races, many of which possess powers and abilities beyond his own's. Due to this, he questions the truth in the supremacy of his race; though he dare never show this. What is your character's biggest fear? That all he follows may be a lie; the ramblings of a man desiring for a return to an era which never existed. Life Story (Required) Born on the northernmost frontier within the islands of Kintyr, Wilheim was born not as Wilheim, but rather Tyrael of Cornouaille; a last name lacking for a lowborn such as himself. Born into a staunch Unionist, traditional Breizh family, Tyrael was raised in an isolated hamlet. His father a drunkard, Tyrael was victim to the berating of his father on dark, dreary nights and watched with disgust as his mother was dealt the same. This by itself would not sculpt Tyrael into the man he would become, but the consorts his father would frequently bring home to fuel his sinful desires. Whether they were of fair skin, dark, horned or not; it seemed to not matter. Was this the way of the Imperial Spirit? Mentally scarred through such dysfunction in his home through his childhood, Tyrael packed what little he had and sought to travel south through Kintyr and into Regalia. Jobless and unskilled, the man felt he had no choice but to join a group of lowly human mercenaries; which he would spend the better part of his life in. For the next twenty years, alongside gaining combat experience he would spend much of his wage on alt-regalian literature and self-study; extremely interested in their rich culture and seemingly chivalrous ways; depicted in the many fictions. Besides this and the extreme ignorance his brothers in arms, shaped Tyrael's views: Men were the dominant force of Aloria, and other races sought to disrupt them. This came to a head when, after many years of wasting himself fighting for coin and nothing more, his views turned his zealotry into faith; it was Divine Will that Man were meant to rule. At this, he decided to give himself a new name by the many he was accustomed to in his Alt-Regalian literature; Wilheim. Abandoning his Breizh heritage, he claimed he hailed from a fictional village of Köln; one set in one of the many stories he read. Wilheim of Köln thus set forth to the Holy City, ambitious to seek his destiny and corroborate other good, pure men and women to his views.
Your character sheet was really enjoyable to read, however in order for this sheet to be approved you need to either ditch the Hellenic language or maybe rename it to 'Etosian Dialect,' which is Massivecraft's version of Greek. Make this change and I'll mark your sheet as approved.
@Arhbi Needs re-review. I have changed stat distribution to include two Order Sorceries for Wilheim to use, and have changed backstory to include so.
Unfortunately, I'm unable to approve the changes. Please readjust your proficiency points back to how they were and consult your recent warning. When the edits have been made I'll mark your sheet as approved again.
@Arhbi Needs re-review. As of today the warning is over. I have aged Wilheim as I believe he is too young for his current position in roleplay, distributing new points into the Order sorcery. Background story has been altered for inclusion of this.
@Arhbi Needs re-review. Removed magic, relevant backstory pertaining to it and redirect the points into Society Knowledge.
@Arhbi Needs re-review. Hochmeister has began to learn command of soldiers through IC leadership and study of military theory - thus redirecting some points from Blades and Shields as he gets older and less physically capable.
@Arhbi Changed relevant skills to grander warfare through Hochmeister's time leading his militaristic Holy Order and further study of military theory as he continues his career as a commander.
@Arhbi Final edit, misunderstood the difference between Command and General - and I believe Diplomatic Case Skill is fitting for a past cult leader; as they typically are charismatic.
