Rejected Sheet Walther Klein

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  1. MrNoot1

    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    Walther Klein

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    Basic Information
    • Name: Walther Klein
    • Alias[es}: Kalther
    • Age: 53 [Appears 23]
    • Date of Birth: July 19th, 255 AC
    • Gender: Male
    • Race: Bolven Ailor & Von Kërle Brood
    • Culture: New-Regalian
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Preferred Weapon: Greatsword
    Skill Information
    (45 points)
    [10 Points for Learning]
    • Melee Combat
    • +20 Greatsword Combat (+20 Points)
    • +12 Fist Combat (+12 Points)
    • Nature Art
    • +15 Hunting Art (+10 Hobby Points & +5 Racial Boost)
    • Rouge Skill
    • +5 Stealth Rouge (+5 Talent Points)
    • Special Training
    • +10 Strength Training (+5 Points & +5 Talent Points)
    • Arcanology
    • +3 Arcanology Knowledge (+3 Points)
    • Ward Knowledge - Vampire Ward
    Body Shape:
    • 32 Combat + 5 Strength Training + 10 Lineage = 35 Body Stat (MAX)
    • Type: Muscular
    • Fat: Low Body Fat
    Languages:
    • Common [Free Language]
    • Alt-Regalian [Native Tongue]
    Racial Abilities & Mutations:
    • Ailor Abilities
    • Hardy Constitution
    • Versatile Instint
    • Hidden Stature
    • Von Kërle Common Abilities
    • Blood Collaring
    • Immortal Aging
    • Belliard Monster
    • Drachenwald Cur
    • Karmark Feeding
    • Karmark Body
    • Karmark Power
    • Von Kërle Mutations
    • Karmark Shroud
    • Karmark Song
    • Karmark Sight
    • Karmark Bones
    • Karmark Step
    Visual Information

    • Eye Color: Black & Red
    • Hair Color: Auburn
    • Hair Style: Long & Well-Kept
    • Skin Color: Dirty-Pale
    • Clothing: Anything
    • Height: 5’11” or 7’4”
    Walther's Karmark From is an interesting one. His once large beard turned into a small patch of spikes down upon his chin and even along the sides of his chin. His skin is turned into a pure snow white color, as his head grew horns that extended backwards. His body shape transforms into a mix between Athletic and Toned, having a build that allows him to be more mobile, and flexible when it comes to combat. He is able to grow another pair of arms, but they only serve the small purpose of helping him with carrying his hunts.

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    • Alignment
      • Chaotic Neutral
    • Personality Type
      • The Mastermind [INJT] - INTJs are true introverts. This personality type tends to be quiet, reserved and comfortable in their own company. INTJs are usually self-sufficient and prefer to work alone than in a group. Socializing significantly drains the energy of this personality type, causing them to need to recharge. Do not weight down an INTJ with small talk! They are more interested in big ideas and theories. When observing the world, INTJs regularly question why things happen the way they do. Uncertainty is the enemy of the INTJ. They excel at developing plans and strategies for every eventuality.
    • Religion
      • The Ideals of Anu, The Prideful Scorn (Void Worship) [10/10]

    Life Story

    • Walther Klein was born to two unnamed Von Kërle on July 19th, 255 AC within the City of Calemburg.
    • When he was 4 years old, he was pushed around by the local children as they saw him as a freak and monster. After some time, he decided to keep at home and read some old theatre books about the soldiers of the military, who fought with every fiber of their beings to defend what they believe in.
    • The Brood kept his reading to himself, as his father decided to take him out when he was 10 to learn how to hunt. Mostly with some minor animals like rabbits and fish. However, this hunting has interested him as he’d continue his dream to be a true Warrior and Soldier.
    • At the age of 14, Walther said his goodbyes to his mother and father before being sent off to a fellow Brood's home, who decided to take Walther in as an apprentice. The fellow Brood made sure that Walther was mentally able to do whatever it took to succeed in their quest.
    • Walther’s training was rough, always fighting as he’d work himself forward during his time in the Brood's home. However, instead of using a Longsword, like how his parents wanted, Walther took the ideals of using a greatsword, to cut his enemies down.
    • At the age of 18, Walther had begun to spar with other Broods, who were training to become the next line of Vampiric Warriors. Once before, he managed to nearly kill a fellow student. However, they recovered soon after.
    • Walther turned to the age of 22, finally finishing his training. In which, he had begun his travels from Regalia to his home, the City of Calemburg. He arrived back in Calemburg when he was 24, in which he discovered that his parents were killed due to them being discovered as Sanguine.
    • The young Warrior searched his family’s home, discovering a book that held the family tree. In which, Walther discovered his heritage as apart of the Frisfjell Clan, and his side of the family have always been Sanguine. Walther decided to accept himself as a Von Kërle, accepting the blessings.
    • With the accepting his his blessings, Walther removed himself from New Reaglian society, by burning down his old home. And with his new lifehood, he had begun his own training to learn how to hunt larger prey. Rabbits and fish became bears and wolves, in which slowly turned into hunting Ailor and Nelfin.
    • Walther, now a powerful Von Kërle, decided to discover the other side of his family, the Frisfjell Clan, to see if he could have them join him. However, it was a struggle to find them. His travels allowed him to understand his family more and more as well as learning to follow the Void Religion that his parents followed before and after Walther was born.
    • When the young man was 35, Walther managed to turn a wealthy commoner family into Sanguine after hunting and watching them from afar. However, this caused Walther to return into hiding within the forests, to be hunted by a few Darkwald Knights, who decided to hunt for him.
    • The Brood took the Darkwalds as a sign of a challenge, in which, he accepted it by hunting the hunters, killing them one by one. They slowly stopped following him as he went deeper. Over time, he hunted families who were hidden within the forest around Calemburg.
    • Now finally, at the age of 53, Walther managed to return to Calemburg in secret to continue his search for his family. In which, he sent a letter to a distant cousin in Regalia. After some back and forth with a few letters, Walther has decided to head back to Regalia to join his cousin with spreading his power in the Holy City.
     
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    Hello @MrNoot1 I will be your reviewer.

    Overall, the application looks sound, however, because they are a brood with very obvious traits, the red eyes and such, they wouldn't have been able to become a Bloodcast Knight due to looking completely like a vampire. So either that aspect will have to change or they will have to no longer be a brood. The option is yours.

    Make the appropriate edit in a color of your choice and tag myself once completed.
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    Thank you! I do like the formatting. And I did the edits to the Life Story in RED.
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    Dope! Also, you may have forgotten to give the Approved tag.. Either that, or my computer isn't loading it in.
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    Added the new Karmark Form and added all the new mutations with the Bloodline. Re-Review is Required.
     
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    Remains Approved
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    @Wumpatron Oh, Dragon Lord Paladin of Irole, I wish for your request to Re-Review my app, due to the newest Prof Update!
     
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    You're only using 40 points so you have 10 to learn if you want to do that or invest 5, I'll make you as approved for now and you can just give me a retag whenever you choose to use those points.

    @MrNoot1
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    I now have 10 points on the side instead of 5.
     

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