Approved Sheet Vyldir Ramo'rah

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  1. PuffyPigeon

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    Basic Information:
    • Full Name: Vyllaromdir Ramo'rah
      • Shortened Name: Vyldir
      • El-Maraya Alias: Valleross Lluci’ës
    • Age: 40
      • Born: February 2nd, 268 A.C.
    • Gender: Male
    • Race: Haat-Maraya
    • Weapon of Choice: Alchemy
    • Coin Wallet: It contains 40 Regals
    • Leather Warlash [Old Town Exclusive]: It has serrated edges.
    • Alchemical Substance | Label: Cold Fright
      • Components: Base [Vocadine], Effect [Shademarsh + Iceleaf], Modifier [Pyrignis Powder]
      • Summarized Effect: Once smashed near a target, they will suffer cold flashes and are met with scary hallucinations, disorienting them and making the 6 blocks around them slippery for 10 min. Duration: 2 min
    • Alchemical Substance | Label: Mother's Kiss
      • Components: Base [Vocadine], Effect [Rubyflower + Lady’s Shine], Modifier [Fermanic Acid], Moderato [Intensoid (2x Haste)]
      • Summarized Effect: Once applied, the target's manageable wounds heal and any toxins are cured. Duration: 5 min
    • Alchemical Substance | Label: Blind Rage
      • Components: Base [Vocadine], Effect [Hagaan Blood + Ogrebait], Modifier [Pyrignis Powder], Moderato [Controid]
      • Summarized Effect: Once smashed near a target, they cannot see past 5 blocks in good lighting and not at all in poor lighting. Furthermore, they're tossed into a state of agitation and paranoia. Duration: 30 min
    Skill Information
    • 50 - 6 (Sorcery) - 3 (Linguistics) = 41 To Spend +10 (Hobby):
      • Core:
        • Melee Combat: A prior occupation still manifesting in the now.
          • 15 Fist Combat (+10 from pool, +5 from Race)
        • Sciences: An adopted expertise grasped and perfected out of ill-intent.
          • 20 Alchemy Science (+20 from pool)
      • Hobby:
        • Musical Art: Vyldir's pride and joy.
          • 3 Instrument Art (+3 from pool)
          • 15 Vocal Singing (+10 from Hobby, 5 from pool)
    Abilities & Point-Buy:
    • Racial: Haat-Maraya
    • Schooling: [3 pts Invested]
    • Performance School: Nicolodi’s Dance Academy - Vultaro
      • Backstory Rights: This character is a minor celebrity in Vulraro, known for opera.
    • Sorcery: Void Sorcerer of Darkness [6 pts Invested]
    • Aesthetic Theme: Song, Music, & Mystique
      • Aesthetic Abilities: Flux Shift 7, World Shift 1
    Languages:
    • Shalota: Mother Tongue [Cultural]
    • Kathar Altalar: An upbringing in the Dread Empire. [Cultural]
    • Dressalo: Educated during his time learning and performing in Vultaro. [Linguistics]
    • Common: Learned for sheer frequency among Alorians. [Free]
    Body:
    • Physical Stat: 15 (Combat) = 15
    • Shape: Athletic
    • Fat: Average

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    Visual Information:
    • Haat-Maraya Form:
      • Eye Color: Glowing Cherry Red w/ Orange Limbus
      • Hair Color: Cold black with bluish tinge, bluish crown (6 horns) with purple eyes.
      • Hair Style: Extremely long & well-kept
      • Skin Color: Greyish pastel blue
      • Clothing: Katharic, formal
      • Height: 6’
    • El-Maraya Form:
      • Eye Color: Lilac
      • Hair Color: Pastel Pink
      • Hair Style: Extremely long & well-kept
      • Skin Color: Pastel Yellow
      • Clothing: Flowy, light colors
      • Height: 6’
    Personality: The Core List
    • Alignment
      • Chaotic Neutral
        • Vyldir does not feel strongly one way or the other in regards to justice, morality, or truth. He does not feel obligated to uphold goodliness and puts his freedom above all. He'll take what he needs and what he wants, and believes in the mindset of empowering the strong/cunning rather than making up for the weak, but tries not to be excessively cutthroat and instead open to reason. That being said, this man occasionally indulges in the joys of sadism, especially in inflicting pain on an opponent in combat. He tends to use pain as a means to force submission.
    • Personality Type
      • Architect INTJ-T
        • This spider is more of a recluse. He's soft-spoken, and even affable most of the time, yet can and will become frustrated and even angry when presented with disorder and a foiling of plans. Vyldir tends to be highly critical of those around him, yet usually does not have the mind to make this internal monologue external. He's rationally minded and as a result sometimes tramples the sensitivities of others, not that he always minds.
    • Religion
      • Tohn Sona | Piety: (4/10)
      • Cult of Evolution | Odella, The Mother | Piety: (7/10)
        • Vyldir relies on his faith in Odella in order to manage his frequent hostile (physical or otherwise) impulses. He has found a way to weave art into his practice of this intellectual doctrine along side the alchemical sciences. However, as a Maraya, he doesn't feel entirely dethatched from his uncorrupted brethren and would be happy to install himself among them in culture and practice.
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    Life Story:

    Childhood 0 - 13
    • Arrival & Upbringing | Vyldir, from the start, is brought up a slave in the Dread Empire. Though born and sent back to a Haat-Maraya colony and household at the end of his work hours, this was his life. A servant child rushing between dreadful men and women in waiting and anticipating their wants and needs; this occupied his time in most instances. Dutiful and obedient, Vyldir cherished their thanks and shriveled at their temperaments.
    • Early on, the child exhibits a certain pitch-perfect talent which these masters seek to nurture for the entertainment of their guests. And so, Vyldir is strictly and formally trained to this end. Despite the occasionally grueling lessons, he doesn't allow this to hinder his respect and enjoyment of the performing arts.
    Adolescence 13 - 20
    • Maleficent Entertainer | The talented boy's voice proved to be golden and unique, so for this his handlers found him valuable. Vyldir's servitude was more cushy than most; the young Haat-Maraya was afforded certain luxuries and privileges which made his life outside of it seem lackluster in comparison. However, certain restrictions maintained which made the truth of his situation unavoidable and unenviable. He valued the people and principals which made up the Kaahl he served, The Court of Mortal Delights, but sought to reach for further achievement and sophistication of his art than his position would afford him.
    • Blood Opera | A good friend and part of the household hears Vyldir's frustration and takes it upon themselves to alert some higher directors of the Kaahl of it. Seemingly, this is a mistake which punishes the slave by taking his once safe occupation and shoves him into a dire caste - bloodsport entertainment. Vyldir would be damned to perform as a musical gladiator. Vexed and feeling betrayed but determined to thrive, he takes to training to be part of some manner of extreme blood opera.
    Young Adulthood 20 - 35
    • Wretched Liberty | Vyldir grows formidable yet plagued with a new insanity, becoming an eccentric vein of Abbagellon zealot. Through enough show of intense devotion and resilience over years, the now proven worthy man is granted his freedom through adoption into the Kaahl with Lady Illana as his Warlord. He's thrilled, yet now wrestles with a lethal urge and violent temperament justified through worship of an awful deity. Using his newfound resources, he devises magical means to take his musical ambition outside of the Dread Empire.
    • Chained Monster | With a teacher, Vyldir becomes practiced enough with Sorcery to mold the world and himself to an extent. Feeling safe within the guise of Valleross the El-Maraya, he leaves home and smuggles himself into Vultaro within the Regalian Empire. Here, he enrolls within Nicolodi’s Dance Academy in order to form his grasp on the composition of formal stage performance. He's renowned for his excellent voice and unique appearance in the world of show business, but is known to be difficult to work with. The Maraya finds it challenging to shake off habits and thoughts of past. Naturally, Valleross is very good at masking his violent ambitions and feelings, yet lives an incredibly repressed life in this place; friendly sparring just wouldn't do and he often went too far. From here, the underbelly of the Empire proves to provide a respite in the tenants of the Cult of Evolution.
    • Soothing the Beast | Cultists descend upon Valleross with their central beliefs which resonate with him and serve to give purpose in resolving something which even he could admit was becoming a problem. This way, he could learn to improve upon himself without abandoning everything he had been brought up on. He takes to Odella, The Mother, as his chosen patron. In doing this, he decides to extend his intelligence into a practical science instead of just art in the form of alchemy. He learns through becoming an assistant, but admittedly only sticks with it once he learns of its potentially harmful applications.
    Adulthood & Present
    • Mentorship | Music and potion-making both drive his living, yet its Valleross' performance of the opera is what he is a minor celebrity for among the Dressolini and Azzizzari. Though not planning on slowing down anytime soon, he is encouraged to foster talent in others and becomes a mentor. His career sends him all over the Empire, as for now he rests within the Holy City.
     
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    Claimed for review.
     
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    Languages
    • Your character's knowledge of Dressalo needs to be reflected in the proficiency points with at least +6 Linguistics
    Other than that, good job.
     
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    Next time please make all changes in a different color.

    Approved.

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    I've rewritten this character!
     
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    Claimed for review, expect a response in the coming days.
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    @Nesstro Large adjustments made to backstory and proficiency.
     
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    Messtro Flower Goblin Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    You're two points over the regular 60 point prof limit.
    Make the changes in PURPLE and tag me. @PuffyPigeon
     
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    PuffyPigeon The puffiest damn pigeon of them all..

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    @Nesstro Are you sure? I just checked the math. Several times just to make sure.
     
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    Messtro Flower Goblin Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    I don't know how I goofed my math, sorry about that!
    Approved then.
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    Finally updated for the newest proficiency system. The tag was Rejected, so idk if I should ping my reviewer.
     
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    Please fix this, is it 5 or 10.
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