Approved Sheet Volesus Aurelius Stormblade

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    Basic Information

    Name: Volesus Aurelius Stormblade

    Nicknames: Stormblade, Volley

    Titles: Drixon, Soldier of the Second Army, Field Officer, Captain of the Mac Conall House Guard, Field Commander

    Age: 22 Years Old

    Birthday: April 7th, 287 AC

    Gender:
    Male

    Race: Imperial Ailor ; Brannon Lineage

    Sexuality:
    Heterosexual

    Preferred Weapon: Calvary Saber and Kite Shield, Déculvert

    Racial Boost: Shielding Combat

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    Inventory Information

    In Volesus's Room

    Simple Leather and Chainmail Armor, this armor consists of iron chainmail covering the entire torso, biceps, and thighs while leather pieces covered the aforementioned areas and was worn over the chainmail, adding another layer of protection.

    Layered Kite Shield, a weapon and means of protection utilized by the wielder on horseback, it consisted of three layers and from the inner layer, it started from cured leather stretched and was layered by a good quality of wood before finally being topped by the last layer of iron.

    Iron-Head Calvary Lance, a weapon forged by an experienced blacksmith and used for a long period of time, it looks extremely sleek and well maintained as it seems the wielder sharpens the spearhead and cares of the shaft.

    Iron-Head Pilums, a bundle of weapons forged by an experienced blacksmith and used for a long period of time, it looks extremely sleek and well maintained as it seems the wielder sharpens the spearheads and cares of the shaft daily.

    Items on hand

    Iron Calvary Saber, a weapon forged by an experienced blacksmith and used for a long period of time, it looks extremely sleek and well maintained as it seems the wielder oils and sharpens it daily.

    Steel Gladius, a weapon forged and originally kept as a backup weapon of Aldüir Ashane Stormblade but was given to Volesus Aurelius Stormblade due to his missed sense of familiarity with his family's preferred weaponry. On the hilt was an engraving of the Unionist Eye with inscriptions that ran down the length of the Gladius's blade.


    Weapons Permit, a parchment signed by Winifred Marth who acted as the Temporary Armaments Executive. The details include legal open carry of a Saber and a Gladius.

    Iron Pugio, a side-arm that is usually for desperate means, to either end your opponent or if you have no way out, to end yourself. This dagger has no guard, it simply is a blade with a handle with nothing stopping your fingers or hand from sliding up and cutting yourself.

    Pouch of twenty regals ; one ten-piece, one five-piece, five one-pieces.

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    Skill Information

    Total
    50 Age Points + 10 Hobby Points

    Allocation (Has 0 Age Points Unused)

    Core Group

    Sword Combat: +12 Age Points
    The preferred weapon of a calm and strategic warrior, they control a certain 'zone' around their person. For such a weapon is to be utilize to attack those who come close without restrictions of a long ranged weapon but also to keep them far without the cons of a short ranged weapon.


    Spear Combat: +5 Age Points
    The preferred weapon of an enduring and strong warrior, holding out until the strikes of tens land upon you before attacking once. They wield the weapon that keeps their enemies at edge and at a distance, controlling the pace and tempo of the fight as they reign victorious without a scratch.


    Heavy Ranged Combat: +4 Age Points
    The preferred weapon of a vicious and calculating warrior, every stroke and movement are to kill and end their targets in one blow - if not, incapacitate them to some degree. The velocity and state of the weapon are dependent on its materials and wielder but are primarily reliant on the pure strength of the wielder.


    Shielding Combat: +16 (11 Age Points + 5 Racial Boost)
    The preferred weapon of a sturdy and knightly warrior, utilizing this addition to a combat style to protect and support many people. Wielding such a thing means to protect someone, whether used for offensive or defensive means.


    Hobby Group

    Husbandry Art: +10 Hobby Points
    A hobby that is trained and utilized from all walks of life, every person has usually interact with pets of others or pets of their own. Not every person are at the level of professional animal caretakers but they usually know some information that enables them to care for fauna.


    Special Group

    Sorcery: +6 Age Points
    The study of occult abilities and utilizing said abilities for their own interest, whether it be for lawful or criminal purposes. These abilities are not always recorded and span from many different powers from the void, exist, or even primal sources. Every deviation may result in different effects.


    Linguistics: +6 Age Points
    The study of foreign or unknown languages that are not spoken naturally and fluently. Limitations are only present to those without the resources or lack of interest of their wanted subject as many others have the capabilities to utilize two or even three languages fluently that are not native to them.


    Schooling: +6 Age Points
    The study of combat and warfare through the Schools of Drixon and Marshalry, this experience enables them a deep connection with their mount and efficient use with artillery.


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    Body Shape

    Body Stat: 35 (10 Sword Combat + 5 Spear Combat + 4 Heavy Ranged Combat + 16 Shield Combat = 35) ; Max Body Stat is 35

    Body Shape: Ripped Body Shape

    Body Fat: Low Body Fat

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    Languages

    d'Ithanie (Taught by Parents)

    Common (Taught by Parents)

    Alt-Regalisch (Taught by New Regalians)

    Dressalo (Taught by Dressolini's)

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    Special Traits / Abilities

    Calvary Mount [Husbandry]

    Volesus's mount is a Heerstepper, a large, robust, and black equid. In the face of a rain of arrows or grand structures and soldiers, this beast remains fearless as it obeys the commands of Volesus. He has named it Dämmerung with the recommendation of some New Regalians that witnessed both his and Dämmerung's prowess in battle.

    Domesticated Pets [Husbandry]

    Volesus took in a Calemberger Dobs during his time at the School of Drixon in Calemburg as recommended by the Drixons who were his teachers, alongside many other students and it has accompanied him ever since but the state of the Calemberger Dobs, to which Volesus named 'Hazel', has deteriorated due to its old age. He usually brings her along on nature walks and to stretch her body but minimally lets her actively move around.

    Volesus also took in a Dragged Crow as a valuable partner, utilizing its unique characteristic cry and uses it as a means of communication between himself and others, he has named it 'Whistle' as he found it amusing to call it such.

    Brannon Lineage

    Great Force I [Racial Ability]
    The power comes from within - as in your legs, not your arms. Learn how to lift without breaking your back and you will save yourself and others - without dying a pointless death.

    Gate Smash I [Racial Ability]
    Although the hinges and wood itself is quite good, nothing beats a door than a simple kick from a beast of a man - though, said kick may blow the door back towards the wall and possibly break the wall as well.

    Bunker Down I
    [Racial Ability]
    Shield and walls, not much of a difference except for the person behind them, although the shield is more effective than a wall, who wants to use a wall when they can use a shield.

    Fulgur [Sorcery]

    Elemental Control VI [Aesthetic Sorcery Ability]
    With a simple touch of the hand, sparks of electricity appeared on their clothes, as if the world revolved around them and they were thunderclouds themselves and with a simple step off a platform, the electricity supported them, helping them as they floated to the earth.

    Element Brand III [Enchant Sorcery Ability]

    Tightness of the grip seemed to have input magical power into their weapons, as if something flowed from their veins and into their armaments as sparkles of electricity revealed itself amongst the metal that situated in the wielder's hand.

    Skirmishing [Schooling]

    Volesus is a graduate of the School of Drixon, attending the school during the years of 301 AC - 303 AC and graduating at the beginning of 303 AC. He is also a graduate of the School of Marshalry, specifically the Discipline of Artillery Command during the years of 304 AC - 307 AC and graduated at the beginning of 307 AC.

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    Visual Information

    Eye Color: Ice Blue

    Hair Color: Chestnut Brown

    Hair Style: Short

    Skin Color: Brown Tan

    Clothing: An outfit consisting of light pink pants with a black undershirt which was covered by a sleeveless shirt that was sewed with gold threads that followed along the Imperial cultural clothing. Volesus wore black boots that reached to his shins and purple gloves with a sash wrapped around his waist.

    Height: 6 Foot 2 Inches

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    Personality

    Character Alignment
    Volesus is considered Lawful Neutral as the authority of the Emperor and the Spirit proceeds most things. His upbringing as an Unionist and a soldier also adds onto that sentiment.

    Character Personality
    Volesus's personality is a Commander, one who plans ahead and does not charge headfirst, although it may work at times, taking another path is also available.

    Religion
    Volesus is a follower of Unionism, however he does not follow a specific church but two, mainly the Evintarian and Vultarian. He acknowledges the mundane strength of Evintarians and recognizes the anti-depiction of the Emperor and Spirit, he does the same with the Vultarians as he himself has the power of sorcery, believing in not rejecting the prospect of additional powers to serve the Emperor and Spirit. Volesus also puts the Imperial Dragon on the same level since Cedromar was the Emperor before Alexander's second reign and was the primary subject in the Ascension of Unionism event.

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    Life Story

    April 7th, 277 AC - May 4th, 303 AC

    Born on the seventh of April, 287 AC was Volesus Aurelius Stormblade, first-born of Felix and Lucilla Stormblade of House Stormblade. From a young age, he was raised as an Unionist despite the already busy and hardworking parents of his, his father, Felix Stormblade, was the hands and minds of forging and exporting equipment while Volesus's mother, Lucilla Stormblade, was the eyes and ears of House Stormblade, locating and obtaining sources of metals for Felix.

    During his childhood and monotonous days of watching his father forge components was the sight of his mother watching nearby, rubbing her stomach as she stared lovingly at Volesus and her husband. A month later had their family welcomed another member to which they had named, Domitius Stormblade, the second-born of their little family. During this time, Volesus took an interest in learning how the equipment that had been built by his father worked and was taught on the intricacies, workings, and effects of the equipment, which were specifically siege equipment that Volesus quickly picked up on.

    Many years had passed as Volesus continued his monotonous life of learning the workings of siege equipment under the watch of his father, on the side, he had practiced the techniques and training of the sword, shield, and spear, under the guidance of other knights who had come out of House Ferrum Tempestas.

    At the end of 300 AC, Volesus made a decision with the assistance of his parents to become a soldier, specifically working towards the School of Drixon to showcase his desire to become a horseman which was mainly a desire of want rather than needs. But through determination and grit, he graduated and became a Drixon with his mount, Dämmerung, a Heerstepper and Hazel, a Calemberger Dobs by his side at the beginning of 303 AC, just at the start of spring.

    Immediately, he was tested, being sent alongside many Drixons, new and old as they raced to Rivellia, literally traveling across the archipelago as they rode to reinforce the Regalian Army. They began initiating in guerilla tactics and blitzkrieg as they wiped regiment after regiment but at the cost of losing nearly ten percent of their Drixons during the thick of it, but in return for speed, they lost out in defense. Retreating, losing, reinforcing, winning - this cycle repeated as Volesus alongside Drixons and other troops took advantage of what opportunities were given by the Crown Alliance until they regained Regalia from the Songaskian Masaya.
    With the mobilization of new troops after regaining Regalia, Volesus joined up with the refreshed Third Army as they were transported to Malifant, intent on landing on the shores of Aslaqqa and onward towards Watif Esballah Castle under the cover of smoke from the Fourth Army, disabling and crippling supply lines that were supporting the Songaskian Masaya's war efforts. Merely a few months after they landed, Volesus alongside the Third Army marched onto Watif Esballah Castle as they began their siege, succeeding and holding out a Malifant siege with their intent on regaining their castle before failing with the assist of the Fifth Army and skill of the Third Army Commander. Months later had the decision regarding the armies come out, Volesus's own troop, the Third Army had combined with the Fifth Army to be the brand new Second Army under the command of Crown Prince Cedromar Kade until a vital battle in Saruhanna resulted in the capture of the Second Army Commander, Crown Prince Cedromar Kade and finally ending the Hadravian and utimately, the First Songaskian War with the exchange of prisoners.
    Volesus took a small mental evaluation of his actions and resided himself with a curate and then a reverend of his state, the young sixteen year-old participated in his first war and had a confirmed twenty-seven kills - out of the four months of warfare from Regalia and Malifant. He was showered in praises and words of Unionism as he was told it was the correct conduct, to protect those of Unionism and to kill heretics who opposed them before his faith became shaken, shaken to the point of where he began to doubt whether Unionism was really the answer and response to everything. Very quickly, he adapted, adjusting his state of mind as he, along with many other Drixons were called upon war once more, preparing themselves and their Heerstepper for battle. They arrived in Torse, readying themselves in Curag Fields as they witnessed.. catastrophe and near annihilation of their fellow man-at-arms, Volesus relied on his arm and Dämmerung, skillfully moving Dämmerung as he sent pilums towards giant apes - Frosthorns. Eventually through what he and many others could not understand, they won, with many and significant losses as they retreated in silence and although attempts on raising morale was issued, it didn't affect much.
    After this was the breaking point of the young Imperial and war veteran, with the lack of wars, he took a lower position as he cleaned artillery, working in silence as he took in the lack of noise as a meditative environment, he familiarized himself with the newly developed artillery such as the Bombard Mortar and the Ring Cannon. During this period his army had not moved an inch, under the lead of temporary commanders, they sharpened their weapons and readied their troops for the time as news of the Anahera Dictatorship came to them but still, they did not move. During this period however, he witnessed a soldier of the Second Army performing sorcery but instead of reporting him, he simply asked of the possiblities of the sorcery to which he spent a few days to even see a change, a small spark of electricity appeared on his saber. During that, the Second Army knew that the order of a representative of the Imperial Family was paramount to the military, they moved not an inch until they were ordered to, until the time of Emperor Alexander I, declaring Andrieu Anahera a traitor of the state.

    By the end of 303 AC, Volesus, with an invested interest in artillery and siege weapons applied to attend the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy, specifically the branch that specialized in artillery in the Vultaro Hegemony's city of Lampeporta.

    January 12th, 304 AC - Present Date

    Volesus arrived on the outskirts of Lampeporta before continuing onwards towards the city and settled in a relaxing inn before starting his lessons in artillery and siege for the next three years. Just a few months into the school had Volesus learned quickly, his lifetime knowledge on basic and intricate siege equipment had already brought him on-par with second-year students, only falling short due to the lack of practical experience. During this time, he bought and cared of a Dragged Crow that he had named 'Whistle', a loud and big messenger bird but quite effective as he regularly communicated with his family and fellow Drixons, speaking of their experiences and past year since they graduated.

    Near the beginning month of 304 AC, Volesus completed orientation as only one week ago, he had been sent back to the Regalian Archipelago alongside a few regiments as the Bone Horror Crisis began showing. He assisted the cleanup of the Anahera Dictatorship which was completed amidst a week with the assistance of many tens of thousands of soldiers clearing Anahera influence. After this however, he took the time to temporarily enter the reserves of the Imperial Army as he applied to the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy to learn more of artillery and siege weapons, more than the intricacies and parts than he would know from his father. During this period, the majority of the forces not on the archipelago was pulled back to assist the forces against the Bone Horrors. More than half a year had passed since the start of the new year as Volesus took the lead as the top cadet of his class, his prior and theoretical experience pulled him far ahead of most of his fellow cadets until news pulled him and all his other peers out of the studious and diligent mindset, an undead had taken control of the Holy City of Regalia. Under the encouragement and words of their mentors, nearly all returned to their studies, their mind still on the topic of Freya Lo, the 'Dark Queen', sharpening their resolve and skills under the pressure of someone controlling their prized city.
    Merely days after he found out he was the top cadet, news of a new war spread, the news of re-entering a war on the golden sands after only one year and a half after the last one, he immediately volunteered with his mental state improving day by day, relying on the scriptures of Unionism and the fact that those he killed were enemies. His choice was noted and he was sent alongside a small regiment of students, nearly every person in that regiments were students but a minority were mentors, experts of handing artillery and siege weaponry as they taught them on the way there. Arriving onto the familiar shore and sight of the desert, Volesus took a deep breath as he stuck near his regiment, readying the artillery as he learned, moving slowly as they were protected, the subject of artillery being of utmost importance to the Regalian military. Some time after they first arrived, they settled the Bombard Mortar's up under the lead of their mentors and began loading the mortars with the start of the battle, sending shell after shell as they visibly saw the explosion of rubble, breakdown of walls, and screams of Songaskia's surrenduring with missing limbs and blood running down their face and clothes. Volesus learned to put on an indifferent look and paid it no mind as he mentally told himself 'an order is absolute, emotion is useless' as every battle he attended and personally participated in, he believed that indifference was a means to an end, he sounded out the screams and begging as he loaded another shell.
    With the end of the Second Songaskian War, Volesus, amongst many others thought they were able to rest before news spread once more of another war erupting but this time, east of the Empire as their weapons were packed and transported onto ships, all of them making their way to reinforce troops who would be there already. After they reached Lampeporta, the mentors inspected their students, picking out those who needed to stay and those who wanted to rest, Volesus was not one of them but there were quite a few who wanted to remain and move onto the battlefield. With their supplies and personnel replenished, they quickly set out, wrapping around the south points of the Empire as they arrived onto Daen. As Volesus exited the ship alongside his peers, he was singled out by some soldiers who were Drixons that served with Volesus during the First Songaskian War and as they caught up, realised that he came straight from the Second Songaskian War the same as them and attempted to poach him to ride with them once more. Eventually, with the fact that he was in the reserves and a student of the Marshal Academy, some commanding officers along with his mentors decided for him to join with the Drixons, to be part of the vanguard to learn how to lead troops even if he was shadowing the commander of the Drixons. Many months later did fatigue show onto Volesus's face, many of his fellow Drixons fell, with many other veteran soldiers being put to rest while he in turn with others avenged their allies with many confirmed kills under their belt.
    Volesus never expected good news to come, with all the bad news that he's always used to, and he was right, the news of the Anglian Mist Crisis broke some of the soldiers, both new and old as others consoled those who needed it, Volesus didn't. He played the bystander, readying himself for battle as if it was any other day and awaited orders, worrying did him no good as he prepared himself for the future. With the peace treaty between the Altalars and Regalians, he focused himself and his people onto practicing to achieve perfection, to prevent that slight chance of death and increase their odds, during this practice however, he was spotted and promoted as a Field Officer, leading his comrades as their superior officer. 'For showcasing leading capabilities and maintaining morale' was their reason and he, among others believed it, what they also knew was that they lacked officers, leading personnel who could initiate in-battle commands. Before being promoted however, he had graduated from the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy, with the correct accolades and significant practical experience under his name as he marched onto battle for his fourth war, the Dread War. Being stationed with the von Rahm army had their abilities shown, with the open field and light equipment, they did hit and run tactics, cutting tens of Kathars at a time until they were switched out for another Drixon squad, catching their breath until they replaced the other Drixon squad. Some weeks later, he was gathered, amongst other Drixons and cavalry related troops in a grand regiment comprising of hundreds if not close to a thousand soldiers for the final battle south of Merkar’sarh, when their army initiated, they were quickly deployed, moving in a wave tactic had they succeeded with the heavy cavalry taking the lead. During those few skirmishes however, several hundreds of cavalrymen fell, their lives ending at that moment from the anti-cavalry countermeasures and Kathar pikemen, the regiment he was part of hurriedly retreated calmly as if their friends had not fallen in that instance. Eventually, the battle ended, their infantry lines pushed them as their cavalry took down line upon line of Kathars in vengeance and cleaning what they could before they were transported home.
    Volesus took a break, a long break from warfare as he returned home to his family, Basta-Irvelle, ignoring the situation that exploded months later, his faith being shaken after constant warring and where faith used to be was now loyalty and service. The holy war called upon the region of Drixagh did not interest him, despite his household's religion being of Unionism and his kin being primarily Villiers-Eclaire knights. Volesus took this period as a recuperating time, hunting to provide for himself, not interacting with his family with the exception being his parents, and caring of his fauna partners.

    Volesus continued on his study amongst other subjects for the next two years until he stood as a graduate of the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy, his practical experience was more than most as his mental strength was on the high side, definitely more steady than the regular soldier. His capabilities grew from a cavalryman of the School of Drixon, an artilleryman of Lampeporta, and then a field officer of the Imperial Army. Nearing the end of year 308 AC, rumors of entering another external war came to him with the news from a former subordinate, he readied his old armor as he inspected it with a melancholic gaze to which he soon broke out of. Volesus efficiently and quickly armed himself in his armor, casting a worn cloak over his clothes as he readied his weapons, settling the saddle onto Dämmerung and petted Hazel, readying himself on the journey to the holy city of Regalia to join the war efforts once more.

    With the confirmed news of the Empire joining in the war between Hadar and Sendras, the Marshal Cabinet gathered troops and prepared for a trip down south. He decided on enlisting himself with Reimar Typhonus, the Grand Marshal and familiar commander from the time of the Dread War as they sailed to the island of Bhosszaal and readied his kite shield and saber, though despite being unable to ride on Dämmerung, he was able to fight proficiently in a shield wall and favorable skirmishes - but, a small proclamation was issued, a lookout for artillerymen to which Volesus asked his superior officer and then departed, arriving in the crowd of artillerymen as they manned the artilleries of House Howlester, and were told of their superior officer, the Imperial Marshal, William Howlester. After the period of securing and stabilizing Bhosszaal, he left the group of artillerymen gathered for that battle and scattered to Reimar Typhonus's troop once more. Volesus fought with hardiness and grit as he maintained simple shieldwall tactics, utilizing slow approaches with the unfamiliar environment for the months of warring until they were pulled back, out of Hadar and back into Regalia. Despite the public acknowledging the victory in the south, he knew it was merely the Sendrassians retreating and preventing further casualties to which he would never count as a complete victory. With this however, he grew tired of staying in the silent grounds in Basta-Irvelle and stayed in Regalia, sending a letter to his parents before receiving news of his kin in the city, to which he was surprised but joined them in the end, especially with the news of demobilization from the new Lord Chancellor, Arch-Duchess Madelyn de Azcoissia.

    Only recently had he been released from service due to the presumed end of the war and stayed in Regalia for a new life, a life of exploration and wonder to see what may occur in this 'new chapter'. Soon, after settling into the holy city, he was accepted into a noble house guard and worked his way up to be the captain, offering his specialty as a Drixon and became a Field Commander under Alistair Mac Conall.
     
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  2. DedJok

    DedJok skilled in ways beyond your feeble understanding Staff Member Lore1

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    @Yui_Drax Hello! Claimed for review, expect a response in due time.
     
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    DedJok skilled in ways beyond your feeble understanding Staff Member Lore1

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    @Yui_Drax Unlucky timing on this, you'll have to redo your points due to the new proficiency update.
    THAT BEING SAID, everything else looks to check out. I might ask that some details about the prominence of the character in their backstory be dropped down a peg or two, as anything too out of the ordinary would fall under a backstory perm.
    Mark changes made in Green, and tag me once you're all set!
     
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  4. Yui_Drax

    Yui_Drax Loong Worshiper and Sihai Enthusiast

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    Basic Information
    - Removed all Titles due to lack of relevance in his now changed life story
    - Changed the Preferred Weapons to just some normal weapons rather than those wielded by the roman legions
    - Changed Racial Boost from Siege Command to Husbandry Art

    Inventory Information
    - Removed the roman weapons and changed it accordingly to normal weapons that Volesus would wield
    - Also changed the name of the roman dagger to just a normal dagger

    Skill Information
    - Kept the Core Group the same
    - Removed all previous proficiencies in the Talent Group and added Strength Training with ten Age Points being invested
    - Kept what remains of the Age Points in the reserve for future roleplay and updated with the new proficiency system

    Body Shape
    - Recalculated the Body Stat accordingly with the addition of Strength Training
    - Changed the Body Shape due to the abilities given from Strength Training and wanted it to be somewhat logical
    - Changed the Body Fat accordingly due to Body Shape being Strongman

    Special Traits / Abilities
    - Added the mandatory abilities from having the sufficient points in Strength Training and also flavor text for them, kinda simple
    - Changed the progression mount for Volesus and added the 'Heerstepper' due to him being an Imperial

    Life Story
    - Changed the entire last portion of his life story to get rid of any mention of the 'Victrix Legio Fulminata' due to the removal of Frontline Command and just made it simple with the connection to Ashen's Villiers Knight

    Alrighty, that is all, thanks for looking at this! Edits in Blue! @Ded Jok
     
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    Basic Information
    - Made him into a Stormblade with Ashen's permission
    - Added the appropriate Nicknames that I thought he'd be called the most
    - Added the appropriate Titles due to life story
    - Lowered his Age to comply to the family tree of House Ferrum Tempestas (Stormblade)
    - Changed his Preferred Weapon to comply with lore with his new Schooling

    Skill Information
    - Removed three Age Points from Sword Combat and re-invested two into Spear Combat, bringing both to seven Age Points each
    - Took five Unused Age Points from the reserves and and the earlier free Age Point from Sword Combat and invested into Schooling

    Body Shape

    - Re-calculated the proficiencies that added to Body Stat
    - Changed Body Shape and Body Fat to comply with the lore from the School of Drixon page

    Languages
    - Added d'Ithanie due to his background as a Stormblade
    - Added Alt-Regalisch due to his life story as a Drixon, also might contemplate learning Dressolini but not now

    Special Traits / Abilities
    - Added another pet to further fit into the lore of Drixons having a Calemberger Dobs
    - Added the racial abilities of the Brannon Lineage
    - Added the Schooling of Drixons and Marshalry

    Visual Information
    - Changed his Eye Color to Hazel Brown from Light Blue due to a skin change
    - Changed his Hair Color to a more darker color due to a skin change
    - Changed his Skin Color to a darker color due to a skin change
    - Changed his Clothing due to a skin change

    Personality
    - Changed his religious outlook from 'neutral' to somewhat devout

    Life Story
    - Changed his life story once more (sorry :3) to comply with the history of House Ferrum Tempestas (Stormblade) and Schoolings added to his prociencies

    Alrighty, that is all, thanks for looking at this! And sorry, even though I just changed it last week! The intent of this character was to roleplay more closely with Ashen but the purpose fluctuated a few times until now, hopefully I won't have a need to request a re-review until IC roleplay or something else. Edits in Blue! @Ded Jok
     
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    @Yui_Drax Due to Alt-Regalisch not being a parental language, you'll have to spend linguistic points to acquire it.
     
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    Edited the appropriate changes and thought to add Dressalo due to Volesus spending time in Lampeport for three years as he attended the School of Marshalry's Discipline of Artillery Command. Used six unused Age Points for Linguistics. Edits in Blue still. @Ded Jok
     
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    Yui_Drax Loong Worshiper and Sihai Enthusiast

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    Basic Information
    - Changed one of the Nicknames from 'Vol' to 'Volley' due to an IC interaction
    - Changed and added many Titles due to the Life Story and roleplay, some were striked out to follow lore
    - Edited the Preferred Weapon by removing the Calvary Lance and replaced it with Kite Shield
    - Edited the Racial Boost to be Shielding Combat from Husbandry Art

    Inventory Information
    - In the first spoiler, I changed the 'Javelins' that he had to 'Pilums' just for flavor text
    - In the second spoiler, I moved two weapons that would normally be 'hidden away' and added it to his person due to Volesus obtaining a Weapon Permit in roleplay
    - Also changed the amount of Regals Volesus carried from forty to just twenty

    Skill Information
    - Used all points from the reserves and as such, there are now zero in Allocation
    - Added five Age Points into Sword Combat to a total of twelve from the initial seven
    - Removed two points from Spear Combat bringing it down to five from its initial seven
    - Added four Age Points into Heavy Ranged Combat so that Pilums will be plausible in roleplay ; and if you're counting, yes, he is one Age Point over the limit to which I will address in the next few moment
    - Added three Age Points and five Racial Points into Shielding Combat to bring it to a total of sixteen points ; he is now four points over the limit, the reasoning will be in the next note
    - Removed Strength Training due to the proficiency itself being rendered useless with the Abilities being part of the Brannon Lineage already and his Body Stat being maxed already ; referring to the last few notes, the 'debt' is now paid and there is six points unspent
    - Reduced Husbandry Art due to the Racial Boost being Shielding Combat now
    - Invested all six unspent Age Points into Sorcery, specifically Elementary Control VI (6) and Element Brand III (3)

    Body Shape
    - Re-calculated the Body Stat from its initial thirty-two (32) to the now thirty-five (35), specifics are above

    Special Traits / Abilities
    - Added the Sorcery information and named / filled it with flavor text

    Personality
    - Re-wrote his Religion section for a mix of Evintarian and Vultarian Churches so that I can make him a somewhat pious and more militaristic character

    Life Story
    - Added lots of details, I'm not even kidding, I made him involve in nearly all the wars in the last few years and although he's only twenty-two currently, I made it more logical as he started being a soldier when he had sufficient training ; which means, right after he became a Drixon cavalryman, and when he was sixteen years old which is considered an adult more or less. Anyways, all new information of his involvement in wars are all in spoilers, no exception with what information that isn't in spoilers are highlighted in purple

    Alrighty, that is all gamer! Edits are in Purple! Thank you for looking over this, was a pain to sort and write in details in a way where he was actually there. @Ded Jok
     
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