Basic Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list.Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Full Name: Vinnic Vincenzo Hobbshire Age: 20 Height: 4'2 Gender: Male Race: Fennh Ailor (Halfling) Sexuality: Straight Inventory Information (Optional) Locket containing a family picture Concealed dagger (for self defense) A tattered backpack containing various strange items A very worn harmonica A wedge of cheese...? Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 50 + 10 Hobby Dagger Combat - 4 points Instruments - 10 points (Hobby) Theatre - 5 points Alchemy - 1 points Vocal - 5 points Horticulture - 5 points Pathfinding - 5 points Perception - 10 points Rogue Gift 1 (pickpocket reroll) - 3 points Rogue Gift 3 (writing and signature imitation) - 3 points Rogue Gift 4 (stealth) - 3 points Rogue Gift 5 (re-hiding) - 3 points Sleight of Hand Pack (pickpocketing) - 3 points Body Shape Physical stat: 12.5 Body Shape: Toned Body Fat: Average Languages Tolonnesa Modern Altalar Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Light on his feet/stealthy Short, good at crawling into small spaces Visual Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Brown Hair Style: Messy but low-key Skin Color: White Clothing: Slightly mismatched and oddly-fit Height: 4'2 Personality (Required with Choice) Option One: The Question List How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? Vinnic doesn't have much to be happy about in his life, but his face lights up when he hears a good song or smells something appetizing. The happiness he shows to others is often fake happiness, but there are rare moments when he is truly content. How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? Vinnic would definitely scream and run the other way if he saw something truly terrifying. Although, there might be a bit of braver How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Vinnic doesn't get stressed very often, but when he does he gets very overwhelmed very quickly and wears himself down. How does your character view Law and Authorities? He sees the law as a joke, they haven't caught him yet. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? He doesn't judge people based on races, but their personality and their values How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? Vinnic is skeptical about religion, because his prayers have never been answered. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? Vinnic hardly concerns himself with magic, but he has always had a dream of becoming an alchemist, possibly making potions for an army. How does your character feel towards their family? Vinnic was too young to know his parents when he was abandoned, so he doesn't know how to feel about them. When he was young, he always thought they had a reason for leaving him behind. But, as he got older, this seemed more and more like a lie. What is your character the most proud of about themselves? Their ability to steal almost anything from almost anyone What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? Vinnic is searching for that answer himself. He is struggling with life, but managing to enjoy the bits and pieces that make him want to keep going, like playing his harmonica. What is your character's biggest insecurity? His height. What is your character's biggest fear? Dying without fulfilling his "true purpose" Option Two: The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type The Virtuoso Choose your Character's Religion Old Gods (3 of 10 belief) Weaknesses (OPTIONAL) Height and weight Inability to swing large weapons Personality (Expansion) Sometimes very skittish, but sometimes acts skittish on purpose to make other people underestimate him Has gained a keen slight of hand skill, this combined with his small size and quiet feet makes him a great thief. Has an affinity for vocal and instrumental music, especially the harmonica, as well at the theatrical arts, May seem like a dirty thief at first, but has a good heart deep down. Likes Music Playing his harmonica Musical theatre Cheese, he loves cheese Dislikes Tone-deaf musicians Pickles Rain/cold weather Heights Insects Life Story (Required) Vinnic was born 20 years ago, a few years later being left on the street to fend for himself. He hardly remembers his parents, and only has a picture of them in a locket to remind him of their faces. Ever since Vinnic was left on the street, he never stopped moving, scrounging for scraps and doing what he needed to survive. For a while, Vinnic only stole food, often dairy products, because he couldn't afford to buy them. But as time went on, he's taken a liking to stealing valuables or trinkets from people he thinks deserve it. His sneaky antics often got him into many dicey situations. When he was young, Vinnic was involved with a shady multi-race crew, but after attempting a planned robbery at the wrong noble household, things went south quickly. Vinnic was able to hide himself away in a small crevice, but the other, larger members of the crew weren't so lucky. They were executed on the spot, and since then, Vinnic has never been the same, and has kept a grudge on nobility. Vinnic kept to himself, and learned to hone his skills of sleight of hand, stealth, and hiding to keep himself from ever getting caught. After all, who would believe a homeless halfling? After stealing a harmonica, he picked up the hobby of playing the instrument which happened to make him some money playing on the street. After that, he gained an appreciation for the musical arts, especially musical theatre. Every once and a while, Vinnic would stealthily move through the crowds to try and get a peek at an ongoing show. Although his size and stealthy abilities made it easier for Vinnic to sneak into theatres, it was hard for him to get a look at the stage with everyone towering over him. Vinnic, knowing he would not always get to see the show, learned to appreciate the music on its own, even further invigorating his musical spirit. Even then, Vinnic never stopped travelling, perhaps looks for his parents, or for a purpose in life. This is eventually what brought him to Regalia, where his story continues.
Not a problem, welcome to Massivecraft! Let's get down to this review. Firstly, great to see someone playing a Fennh, the character sounds like fun! I would recommend investing in the Roguery Point-buy abilities as Vinnic grew up on the streets, stealthing around and stealing food, this would supplement that aspect a lot! You have 10 Hobby Points to spend on Arts Proficiencies, so you can easily purchase these Roguery abilities with those points refunded when you change some of your Arts investments over to Hobbies. Please expand on your lifestory a little more to elaborate on all of Vinnic's various skills and character quirks, using your Proficiencies to do this is recommended, where did he learn what he knows? Are there any particular events that encouraged this? Take a look over these changes and colour them in a lovely green for me and we'll get you approved! @Mitch_Universe
