Vincent Ravenstad-krier

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  1. Greenie

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Vincent Witteric-Richarr Ravenstad-Krier
    • Held or Previously Held Titles:
      • Grand Admiral of the Raven's Fleet
      • Wing Admiral of the Grand Imperial Marshal Cabinet
      • Captain of the Florentin V
      • Master of Ships to House Ravenstad
      • Admiral of the Imperial Navy
    • Age: 54
    • Gender: Male
    • Race: Leutz-Vixe Ailor
    • Sexuality: Heterosexual and married.
    Skill Information

    Total Points: 54 [Age = 51]

    • +10 Threads Knowledge (Culture Boost)
    • +30 Admiral Knowledge (from Points)
    • +10 Sailing Knowledge (from Points)
    • +4 Marshal Knowledge (from Points)
    • +10 Unarmed Combat Skill (from Points)
    Body Shape:
    • 10 Sailing Knowledge + 10x2 Unarmed Combat Skill = 30 Stat
    • Muscular Body Shape
    • Built Body Fat
    Languages:
    • Common (learned in childhood)
    • Leutz Vixe (learned in childhood)
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    Visual Information
    • Eye Color: Dull Blue
    • Hair Color: Graying Ginger
    • Hair Style: Short on top, with a muttonstache beard.
    • Skin Color: Ailor Pink
    • Clothing: Leutz-Vixe styled garbs in Ravenstad colours.
    • Height: 6’1
    • Body Shape: Portly
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    Personality and Abilities
    • To The People: Jovial, ambitious and hedonistic are among the best words to describe Vincent. Vincent is always up for a conversation, particularly between other nobility but can usually see past appearances or beliefs. However, Vincent does tend to avoid non-human races, especially Varran due to their affiliation with his brother’s death. As a seasoned commander on the seas, some of the noble peerage have come to perceive Vincent as strong-willed, witty and a naval genius. Though most commoners can't say the same and just think of him as another ginger-haired Ravenstad, those that have worked with him perceive a kinder soul
    • His Inner Thoughts: Vincent’s confidences come his position. He believes his position of Master of Ships is an honorable one, even though behind his back it is often called the joke position. His noble status often leads to him believing he cannot be touched, making colleagues with shadier individuals he can make use of later. However, he is also afraid of losing his position, and failing the family.
    • To Friends and Family: To Vincent, family is everything. Being a Krier originally, he tends to look out for those who have more Krier blood in them. His nephews and nieces are like his own children, on top of his own son, Rolf II. He adores his wife, believing they have an inseparable relationship. Friends are kept close, and those he deems shadier characters he attempts to gain trust with.
    • Morals: Neutral Good. Vincent is normally a cherry, jolly man who wouldn't hurt a fly. He puts himself, his family, friends and the Unionist Cause before anything. He is goal-driven and practical in most circumstances, and tries to achieve what is expected of him. That being said, when an opportunity is laid before him that might not be the most honorable route, he might not shy away from the idea if he was certain it would work out. The man would go ahead to attempt to lie and cheat his way through life, but only if the circumstances were either his true desires, or a family desire.
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    Relationships
    • Adelheid Ravenstad Krier (née Vaardenwood) [Wife]
    • Rolf II Ravenstad-Krier [Son]
    • Witteric I Ravenstad-Krier [Son]
    • Erwald I Ravenstad [Nephew]
    • Valerie I Ravenstad [Niece]
    • Percy Ravenstad [Old Friend]
    • Christopher Black [Fellow Admiral]
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    Life Story
    Birth/Early Years | 253 AC - 263 AC

    • Vincent was born in the year 253AC to Luthor and Priscilla Krier in their ancestral home of Boussiney Keep, northern Brissaud.
    • Vincent was primarily raised by nannies, being of noble birth.
    • Vincent was rather overlooked by his father, his older brother Rolf stealing the spotlight.
    Teen/Adult Years | 263 AC - 278 AC
    • At the age of ten, he is placed in the Regalian Naval Academy to study admiralty just as his brother was. He proceeded to study there until the age of twenty
    • Upon return to Boussiney, he was met with the Age of Plagues. His family hardline quarantined the keep, causing protest among the peasantry. Vincent lost his younger sister Lucia to the plague, as she had been away from the keep courting a d’Esclat lad.
    • In the year 275AC, house Ravenstad began to absorb Krier lands. Luthor was extremely hesitant to allow peace talks and fought against the Ravenstad forces, eventually losing his life. The Ravenstads marched on Boussiney and took the keep with ease, as Rolf had sued for peace. The Kriers were absorbed into the Ravenstad family, giving them the name Ravenstad-Krier. Priscilla was executed for defying the Revain Charles VI.
    Adult Years | 278 AC - 303 AC
    • Vincent grew fond of his new family and moved to Vianscheid Keep. He quickly began courting Adelheid Vaardenwood, and married her in 279AC.
    • In mid 280AC, Rolf Ravenstad-Krier was slain on the seas. He had fallen to a band of Varran Pirates. Vincent was named the patriarch of the Ravenstad-Krier line. To honor his brother, he named him Rolf II. He was let down by his family when the position of Master of Ships, previously held by Rolf was given to Adelheid’s father, Godefryd Vaardenwood.
    • In the Chrysant War, Vincent served on one of the lesser ships in the Ravenstad fleet that was stuck with most of the bulk fleet of the Empire. News arrived towards the end of the war that the flagship of the Ravenstads, Adrianna II had been sunk in an ambush by Allar. Vincent was honored with the role of Master of Ships by Anton II and would command the Ravenstad fleet during the final battles of the war. During one of these battles, they were boarded and Vincent was badly injured, with his leg bashed. He later made a recovery, but could not walk without an aid from a walking stick.
    Recent Years | 303 AC - Present
    • After the war, Vincent began reconstructing the fleet. While preparations were being made for the future, he began travelling the world. For the next few years he would visit places such as Ithania, Hadravia and various places in the North Belt. He would also command the Ravenstad fleet when called into battle. Over his journeys, especially in Ithania he became awfully hedonistic. He would eat meal after meal, attend painting and sculpting classes and became a fan of the visual arts. Upon his return to Brissaud, he had become awfully fat, earning him the nickname ‘The Whale’.
    • Vincent moved into Castle Malchellon and commanded the Ravenstad fleet from there. He was summoned to Regalia by Vulmar Ravenstad in 306AC.
    • Vincent served on the board of admirals during the second Elven War, and commanded his dreadnought flagship Florentin V. Vincent briefly returned to devise strategies with his family during an impending civil war, but returned to the front during the Kathar conflicts. With the war once again reigniting he has returned to Regalia to attempt at claiming a seat on the Imperial Marshal Cabinet and supporting the Calemberg Union.
     
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    Go into a bit more detail for me please. You didn't say much in this paragraph, and I feel you can write a bit more than simply three sentences. Try expanding on these points, as they seem to mean the most to Vincent's design.

    How are friends treated different than family, if they are at all? Does Vincent see friends and family as two halves of the same whole, or is there a distinguishing factor?

    Chaotic good is more or less someone who will do literally anything to preserve their self-created idea of good, and often fight against the order of the world. I'd argue Vincent is probably more Neutral Good, if you still want him to have that breaking point where he'll skirt outside rules in order to achieve good. You should also add on one sentence or so dictating his opinions on good and evil, as well as the law.

    Make changes in purple and @ me when done.
     
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    Needs re-review.
     
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    Bumping again so I can hopefully be approved before the sign up campaign.
     
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    0/10 not obese
     
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    I'll be taking this app over. Claimed for review. @Greenie
     
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    Alright, let's get started. @Greenie

    Personality and Abilities:
    • Your first and fourth personality paragraphs need a bit more substance.
      • Describe the difference between how commoners and nobles perceive him for your first body paragraph.
      • Describe the limitations his agenda forming has on his morality. Would he just lie, or cheat, or go so far as to kill? What are the circumstances that would drive him to do such.
    Overall an exceptional app, mark those changes in pink.
     
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