Victoria De Piedmont

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  1. KittyPoppins

    KittyPoppins Queen of Azuria

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    Name: Victoria de Piedmont

    Age: 28

    Race: Ailor (Half Breizh and half Ithaninan. Imperialized)

    Lineage: Nautilaan

    Culture: Imperialized








    【✭Skill Information✭】


    Prof Points: 28 age + 5 bonus + 10 Hobby + 10 Talent

    Proficiencies:

    10 Admiral - (5 Talent) (5 Lineage boost)

    5 stealth rouge - (5 Talent)
    10 Sailing - (5 Hobby) (5 passive) (Ithanian Providence)
    15 Mixology - (15 age)
    5 Husbandry - (5 Hobby)
    10 War fan - (10 age)
    3 Needlework - (3 age)
    5 Statecraft - (5 age)

    【✭ Body Shape ✭】


    › Physical stat: 10 - 10 War Fan

    › Body Shape: Slim

    › Body Fat: Low



    【✭Mutations/Special Traits/Racial✭】
    Racial Abilities

    Infallible Navigator

    Iron Gut

    Favored by the Sea

    【✭ Language Information ✭】

    D’Ithanian (Mother)
    Alt-Regalish (Learned in childhood)

    Leutz-Vixe (Learned in Ostiermark)
    Common


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    Onwards we sail, despite the horrors we may face, we shall sail.

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    【✭ Visual Information ✭】



    Height: 5’5

    Hair Color: Dark brown
    Hair Style: Half up half down.

    Eye Color: Dull Ocean Blue

    Skin Color: Pale with blue undertones
    Clothing: Usually dark Imperialized based clothing

    【✭ Personality and Abilities ✭】



    Character Alignment: Neutral Evil

    Character Personality Type: ENTJ-A

    Religion: Unionism 7/10



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    I am here to drink wine and crush my opponents, though it seems we're out of wine!,

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    【✭ Childhood ✭】



    Victoria de Piedmont was born seconds before her twin, Victane, and grew up in a small house in the countryside of Ithania. As a young child, Victoria was well cared for by her loving but unwed parents, Bella de Piedmont and Reidane Valitorp. While the twins led a relatively easy life in their first few years, their father left abruptly when they were two years of age, leaving them in the care of their mother. After the disappearance of her father, Victoria’s mother became rather strict towards her, emphasizing the importance of leadership and command from a young age. Wanting to please her mother, Victoria would often assert her dominance over other people, particularly her brother, Victane. The two bickered frequently, Victoria typically being the instigator while Victane attempted to negotiate. In addition, Victoria became quite the prankster, often coming up with new methods of toying with her cousins, whom she spent a great portion of her childhood with. While she was known for being a troublemaker, she picked up a few hobbies as a young girl, one of them being needlework. Victoria found herself fascinated by the endless possibilities that were presented with a bit of fabric and thread. She was a quick learner with a creative eye for design, allowing her to create brilliant creations out of various materials.

    At the age of ten, Victoria was sent to Osteirmark with her brother and a few of her cousins to learn the art of business and self defense from their uncle, Pierre de Piedmont. During her time here, she learned the Leutz-Vixe dialect.





    【✭ Adolescents ✭】



    When Victoria was thirteen years of age, her mother gifted her with a black raven. She quickly bonded with the bird, becoming protective over the small animal as if it were her own child. Oftentimes, Victoria would confide in the bird with her secrets, whispering them to the creature in the confidence of the night’s later hours. Besides the bird, Victoria grew rather close with her cousin, Noelle. The two frequently bonded over playing tricks on their family members, specifically Victoria’s twin.

    When the Piedmont Trading Company moved to the City of Regalia, Victoria and her family moved along with it, save for her mother, who remained in Ithania. Victoria adjusted well to the City, finding that it was quite easy to get around as long as she had a family member by her side. However, she soon grew tired of meandering about the city and began to long for some sort of activity. Her family suggested she enroll in the School of Marshalry, and Victoria eagerly jumped on the opportunity. Along with her promising education ahead of her, she picked up a job bartending at the Golden Willow Tavern. It was here that she would learn the art of mixology.



    【✭ Early Adulthood - Present ✭】



    Victoria studied at the School of Marshalry for ten years before graduating. During her years spent at the academy, she became quite skilled in fan combat. She was quick to rise to a fight, and she was always pleased to see the surprise on people’s faces when she pulled out her bladed fans. After completing her education, Victoria decided she wanted to set her skills to work as an Admiral. She began to sail with her uncle, Pierre. She spent about a year on the sea before stopping in Ithania where she would reside for the next couple of years.She spent many months on the sea before stopping in Ithania where she would reside for the next couple of years. Here, she spent much of her time lounging about and surrounding herself with the luxuries of Ithanian living and the company of fine Ithanian citizens. While she kept a low profile, Victoria continued to study and demonstrate her weaponry skills to ensure she wouldn’t fall out of practice.

    On one particularly quiet day, Victoria received a letter requesting her return to the City after the passing of the patriarch, Maximilien. She packed up quickly before hastily boarding her vessel and setting sail for the Holy City. She found it harder to adjust to the City this time around, discovering that she no longer held the same viewpoints as many of her family members. However, she rarely let this bother her as she returned to her former habits of practical joking. While she enjoyed pranks, Victoria continued to grow as a strong leader, eventually becoming a valuable asset as an admiral.

     
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  2. Antimreoir

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    Hello! I'll be picking up this application for review, expect a response shortly. @KittyPoppins
     
  3. Antimreoir

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    Here's my review! @KittyPoppins

    Basic Information

    All good here.
    Skill Information
    You cannot have Alt-Regalisch and Leutz-Vixe as languages without investing 6 points into Linguistic Sciences. Ithanian and Picaron are your free parental languages.
    Special Traits
    All good here.
    Visual Information
    All good here.
    Personality
    All good here.
    Life Story
    With her Briezh father leaving home when she was 2 years of age, I don't feel that she would have reasonably learned the Picaron dialect, also considering that she had grown up in Ithania, and not Kintyr. However, having mentioned that she had spent much time on Osteiermark, and was taught Leutz-Vixe by a close family member, you may take Leutz-Vixe as your second parental language.
    Having been a graduate of the School of Marshalry, Victoria would have been heavily encouraged into immediate military service upon her graduation, please cite some additional military service post-graduation. Perhaps she engaged in additional naval endeavours during her travels?

    Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
     
  4. KittyPoppins

    KittyPoppins Queen of Azuria

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    @KittyPoppins I still see little mention of military service post-graduation, and you require 3 Points in Linguistic Sciences to take Alt-Regalisch, as it's not a parental language.

    Please fix these and I'll be delighted to get this approved.
     
  6. KittyPoppins

    KittyPoppins Queen of Azuria

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    You’re contradicting your previous answer as you said before I could keep L-V as a parental language.
     
  7. Antimreoir

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    @KittyPoppins I am not. You may take Ithanian and Leutz-Vixe as Parental Languages, you cannot take Alt-Regalisch too. This would require 3 points in linguistics.
     
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    Hello! Any progress on these fixes? I would also note that Ailor Lineages were updated too. @KittyPoppins
     
  9. KittyPoppins

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    The character is currently shelved
     

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