Vhaal Elessonai Eaolovas

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    Vhaal Elessonai Eaolovas
    Scion of Sca'Elle

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    Basic Information
    Basic Details:
    Shortened Name: Vhaal Elessonai Eaolovas.
    Full Modern Altalar: Mhaí-rona Vhaal’elessonai noso Eao-Talovas á Hyärra elas Talar Varnë.
    Full Middle Altalar: TBD
    Age: 148 years.
    Born: 3rd March, 160AC.
    Gender: Male.
    Race: Teledden Altalar.
    Sexuality: Metal.
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    Skill Information
    Proficiencies:
    Total Points: 70 point pool.
    Knowledge:

    +3 Societal Knowledge. (Allorn Culture.)
    +3 Historical Knowledge. (Nelfin History.)
    Science:
    +25 Metallurgy Sciences. (+25 Altalar boosted cap applied.)
    +20 Finecraft Sciences.
    Arts:
    +15 Architecture Arts. (Hobby Points applied +5 Proficiency investment.)
    Special:
    +8 Lightgiver Ritualism.

    Body Shape:
    Shape: Ripped.
    Physical Stat: 25.

    Calculation: 25 Metallurgy = 30.
    Body Fat: Extreme Low.

    Languages:
    Birth Languages:
    Middle Altalar.
    Modern Altalar.
    Learned Languages:
    Common.
    Olt’vven. (Ritualistic only.)

    Special Traits:
    Racial Abilities:
    Will of the Ages.
    +10 boost.
    30 cap unused.
    25 cap applied to Metallurgy Arts.
    Will of the Arcane.
    Arcanomancy.
    Memorymancy.
    Powermancy.
    Ritual Abilities:
    +1 Lightgiver; Her Blessed Tongue. (Olt’vven usage.)
    +2 Lightgiver; Purity’s Cloister. (Olt’vven-stone garden.)
    +3 Lightgiver; Mineral Majesty. (Gem-singing.)
    +4 Lightgiver; Domestimorph. (Cat/dog shift.)
    +5 Lightgiver: Concealing Glamour. (Tattoo/scar hiding enchantment.)
    +6 Lightgiver: Bright Transfigure. (Lavvanya mutations.)
    +7 Lightgiver: Green Body. (Plant growths.)
    +8 Lightgiver: Shining Shield. (Light-weave plate armour.)
    Advanced Mutations:
    Link

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    Visual Information
    Features:
    Eye Color: Bright sky blue.
    Hair Color: Dirty blonde.
    Hair Style: Grown long, styled into two longer lengths at the front and tied into a bun at the back.
    Skin Color: Slightly flushed, but fair.
    Clothing: Elegant Altalar styles in blues, greys, and browns suitable for work in a forge.
    Height: 6’8”, or 203cm.


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    Personality and Abilities
    The Core List:
    Moral Alignment:
    Lawful Neutral.
    Personality Type:
    The Architect; INTJ-A.
    Religious Affiliation:
    Religion: Estel’s Pantheon.
    Piety: 8/10.
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    Life Story
    Birth & Childhood (0-12)
    Vhaal Elessonai Eaolovas is born on the 3rd day of March in 160AC, the fourth of seven children to two Teledden Altalar parents, Kasha-elis Eaolovas (mother) and Raerulam Kernesmus (father), in Hyärra.
    His upbringing is similar to most Altalar; he doesn’t want for much, and is educated in literacy, mathematics, and the languages of Middle and Modern Altalar, both spoken by his parents.
    As soon as he can speak, Vhaal is noted to be a particularly solemn child. He is disciplined, slow to smile but quick to learn, with a defined tendency towards working with his hands. He is introduced to metalworking early, which he clings to from then on.
    Adolescence & Teenage Years (13-30)
    Vhaal apprentices with a master smith in Hyärra as soon as allowed, where he learns how to locate, recognise, and make use of minerals and metals, soon working his way to the more versatile metal of steel.
    Living in Hyärra, most of Vhaal’s early lessons in metalworking are central around the creation of simple weapons and armour, which he excels at. He continues to press through lessons, absorbing information quickly so as to continue progressing.
    Although not against having fun, Vhaal is rarely found with his classmates in their leisure periods- instead, he spends much of his time in his home, reading about the old Allorn Empire, its culture, and his ancestors. He develops some skill in engraving at the same time, carving simple depictions of ancient Altalar events into the weapons and armour he creates.
    Early Adulthood (31-90)
    As expected, Vhaal aligns himself with the Master of Magnificence, taking up with a priest of Sca’Elle known as Bel-Lhenná to become ever closer to his god. The priest instils Vhaal with a reverence for the Pantheon, bringing him close to full devotion to his gods.
    The priest ensures his devotion, then begins to teach him in the ways of the Lightgivers, starting with instructing him in the speech and writing of the ritualistic language of Olt’vven, particularly to be set into pieces of armour and weaponry. He goes on to teach him how to carve Olt’vven into stones to ensure the purity of a garden, and even how to sculpt precious stones with his bare hands.
    At the same time, the priest teaches him how to craft Nightsilver, guiding him in crafting what he calls ‘Sca’Elle’s Gift’. The priest, continuing to espouse Sca’Elle’s divine skill and supreme ability to create, shows Vhaal how to create scale-mail in the classic Allorn style, as useful as it can be to a good Est’alorn warrior.
    Vhaal also learns much of theology and religious practice from the priest, becoming a true acolyte of the Faith in his own right. Although nowhere near as skilled as his tutor, he still endeavours to provide guidance where he can.
    Later Adulthood (91-Present Day)
    Vhaal spends a few years longer with the priest of Sca’Elle before eventually departing, wishing to do more than just learn with his skill in metalworking. He puts himself to work for Hyärra itself, crafting arms and armour that the Hyärran military can put to use.
    Over the next decades, Vhaal continues to work, perfecting his crafts and continuing to be a useful asset to the Hyärran army. He weathers the storms that come, picking up slack as a builder and architect to assist with the building and maintenance of Hyärran military fortifications.
    He simultaneously operates as a representative of Sca'Elle proper, dispensing blessings, direction, and religious services were possible while working on the various walls and buildings that make up the Shield of Talar.
    The Dread War rolls around, and only then does Vhaal consider leaving Hyärra for elsewhere. He watches on as the forces of the Dread Empire annihilate a third of Sälarna’s Shield, sticking with Hyärran forces elsewhere to keep himself alive. When the war ends, he assists in reparations for a short time, but eventually comes to the decision that he should leave to assist the Altalar people in Regalia, and even to push the Regalian authorities to lend their might in repairing Hyärra’s damaged defenses.
    Vhaal leaves for Regalia from Teled Methen in the early months of 308AC, determined to establish himself as a master craftsman and be as much use to his people as physically possible, in whatever way that may be.
     
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    Requesting re-review; total overhaul of app and character.
     
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    Requesting re-review;
    -Switched Sculpture Arts for Architecture, with relevant information added in Life Story.
    -Changed Body Build and Fat to Strongman and Built respectively, with relevant information added in Life Story.
    -Included Advanced Mutation permission document link in the Special Traits section.

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    Requesting re-review; edits are as follows:
    -Divided the points invested into Nightsilver Forging equally into Finecraft Sciences (increasing Finecrafts to +20 from +10) and Poles Combat (increasing Poles to +10 from 0 investment), as the Proficiency was removed; added relevant information into character Life Story to explain the new investment in Poles.
    -Changed character subrace from Teledden to Fin'ullen; I found that in roleplay, Vhaal didn't have much regard for politics and was much more physically-focused than any Teledden should really be. Changed hair colour from dirty blonde to scarlet red accordingly.

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    Sorry for the delay, approved!
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    @Nesstro
    i am so sorry
    summarised edits:
    -switched back to teledden
    -removed 10 investment in poles; redistributed 5 into Architecture Arts to bring total up to 15, and 5 into Lightgiver Rit to bring total up to 8
    -reduced Metallurgy investment from 30 to 25 as fitting the recent Teledden cap changes; reserved the spare 5 points going unused to pay for Advanced Rit abilities when the document is written
    -reduced Body Build from Strongman to Ripped, and Body Fat from Built to Extreme Low for aesthetic value
    -included brief blurb of added Lightgiver abilities
    -pulled mentions of Fin'ullen heritage, large body build, and polearms training from Life Story
    -added mentions of Vhaal becoming a proper Pantheon priest into the Life Story in fitting with his recent Backstory Permission validating that​

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