@A_r_e_s You have too many languages. At thirty years old, you have two to choose from, excluding Common, as it is no longer a free language. I'd like you to add more onto his life story. It's a bit short. Make these changes in blue and tag me when you're done!
@A_r_e_s Add in a few experiences that shaped his personality, interactions with people that have had impacts on his life, etc.
With the release of new Velheim and Skagger lore bits, as well as the new Frontline Combat proficiency, I updated Ved's ambition, and reshuffled his points a tad, in this orangish-brown color. @Athelois
Might want to change some stuff since the Clinton's assault on the noble and his death have been voided for a while.
Here is my review: Your body stat calculation is correct, but what body build are you selecting? Slim? Athletic? Muscular? Your languages are only free in the case of a homeland language, language of the parents, and common. All else require points. Since the languages of Nordskag are Tunge and Common, assuming Ved's parents are from Nordskag, the languages he would be permitted to know without cost would be Tunge and Common. Both Skodje and Daen would require +10 in linguistic. Please correct this. Once you have made the adjustments, tag me with @AlphaInsomnia .
Changing some things, One is point reshuffle two is inactive soul-line Highlighted in spooky pumpkin Orange @AlphaInsomnia
Removed Tunge, because Hydra said to, and with that, those linguistic points are being shuffled, 2 to pagan and 3 to athletics @AlphaInsomnia
@AlphaInsomnia hey man, I decided to update Ved as I'm getting back into massive, and there have been updates to various things in the mean time.
Looks good. The only issue I see is in the life story. An explosion in a ring fort? The north lacks modern artillery, so there would be no explosive storage, and the Imperial Army would know to not push any artillery into the fort, nor to fire at it with their own men inside for risk of blue on blue casualties.
The majority of his more recent backstory is in need of an update. I'll keep that in mind while I do so, thank you. @AlphaInsomnia