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Played Character Valleros Avethiä || The Scorched Divine

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PuffyPigeon

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|| CHARACTER INFORMATION ||

Full Name | Valleros A'losso Avethiä bel He'ilicinyä Lathai
ºº Alias: Corahaunt, Paladin of Vermillion Moon
Heritage | Lanlath - Star of Calmness
Age | 334| Born: Jan 1st, 22 B.C.
Gender & Pronouns | Cisgender Male | He/Him Only
Occult | Mage of Birth Origin & School Training

ºº Affinities: Sapphora Godborn & Strangle Marken
ºº Planar Alignment: Abyss & ??? (Awaiting Godborn Update)
ºº Schools of Choice: Blood & Shadow
Occupation | Senleya Knight; Brightmoon Chapter
CORE CONCEPT
ºº A Damned Paladin | A former Ordvaan and teacher whose charismatic talents were used to betray his oaths and congregation, repaid in the form of a Godcurse sent from Cemaan. Forced to crave that with which he casts, this penitent one once more proves his promise by somehow surviving his punishment and making something of it, but is warped by his guilt and zeal in the process.


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VISUAL INFORMATION
◉ General Appearance | An Altalar who would look quite typical, were it not for his enthusiasm for body art and modification. Valleros is blanketed with a menagerie of black ink with designs outlined by negative space. He holds himself in a patient and severe manner, looking like some kind of warlock without being one.
ºº | Summary
º Eye Color: Glowing gold irises with pink petals, black sclera.
º Complexion: Fair and heavily tattooed.
º Hair Color: Honey blonde and greying.
º Height & Body Type: 6 feet, 7 inches | Narrow, Athletic
º Additional Features: Many ear piercings, ear gauges. Black-out tattoo covering entire upper body, terminating below the rib cage, head, and wrists. Two golden Sapphora snakes from his hair. Black claws, fangs.

SKILL INFORMATION
  • ◉ Heritage: Fully Lanlath
    ◉ Knight Order: Senleya

    ºº | Brightmoon Chapter: Valleros can fly with angelic, blood-soaked wings.
    ◉ Affinities: Marken & Godborn
    ºº | Marken: Valleros is a Strangle Marken and claims the Library of Forgotten Pleasures as territory.
    ºº | Godborn: Valleros is a Sapphora Godborn, is not Scorned, and currently has 2 snakes.
  • ◉ Athletic Hobby: A byproduct of martial training and a symptom of his Markenism at once. Valleros can sometimes perform unexpected feats.
    ◉ Magical Talent: By old Allorn theory, Valleros is considered a Rank 6 Mage.
    ◉ Cleric Talent: Valleros is deeply religious and may conduct rituals in the name of his Estelley deities.
  • ◉ Languages | Universal Translator (Godborn Mechanic)
    ºº Innate | Markenspeech (Bestial), Lenelämor (Love Language)
    ºº Native | Altalar (High Elven), Allorn (Ancient Elven)
    ºº Fluent| Common (English), d'Ithanie (French)

PLOTHOOKS & BACKGROUND
  • ⬦◉ || Corahaunt, Paladin of Vermillion Moon
    ⬦| Valleros dawns the title of Corahaunt while he upholds the standards of his Brightmoon Chapter. He preferentially defends Estellians, their property, and the faith itself from slander, repression or degradation. In calmer moments, he may lend spiritual guidance if no Ordvaan is already present or attempt to mediate differences between members of his beloved community.
    ⬦| As described under Design Details, Valleros' choice to burden the very lifespans of other people to cast his magic is a contentious one and not more than a step away from being Vamperic. Someone should do something about that.

    ⬦◉ || Star of Calmness
    ⬦| Valleros has excellent self-control and is resilient toward the mind-corrupting forces of Spirits. Thus, he feels confident while interacting with ones that aren't immediately violent. He may help Spirits help themselves.

    ⬦◉ || A Great Lindwyrm
    ⬦| Valleros becomes Aulhellion, a golden Strangle Marken. While unpredictable and base in its thinking, Aulhellion retains his personality. These aspects make the perfect conditions to learn more about who Valleros is as a person and explore your own character's values. However, encounters must be private or arranged and Advanced Roleplay Mechanics accepted.
  • ⬦◉ || Valleros was born and raised in Lathan, a semi-divine child bestowed upon his parents after struggling to conceive. Two more siblings came after him. After expressing interest in Aloria, he is allowed to attend Helëssa in Amontaar for a short period before the Cataclysm hits. Having survived, he immediately retreats back to his home dimension and attends Lathëya from that point forward. He was twenty-two.

    ⬦◉ || Valleros spent the next two centuries and decades more carrying on various occupations, with two becoming especially important: work as a notable Ordvaan and instructor of Arcanology. Sporadically, he comes from Lathan to various locations in Aloria for months and years at a time to carry on his efforts. His charismatic talents as a child of Sapphora grant him enormous attention and followers of his preaching.

    ⬦◉ || Somewhere along the way, Valleros became greedy to the point of blasphemy and was Godcursed by the cruel Empress of Power herself. Transforming during the climax of his service one foggy morning, he survives the slaughter of his congregation and is hidden by his family. A two-fold punishment for the heresy of both the speaker and those seduced by his lies. Survivors and their families are blackmailed into silence and his family's image, too, survives. But Valleros is no longer an Ordvaan and is beside himself, struggling to manage control.

    ⬦◉ || Months of learning and effort grant Valleros a measure of mastery over his curse. In penence and as an outlet for his newly aquired bloodlust, he devotes himself to the Senleya Order in service to Her Pantheon as a brutal blood paladin. Warped by his guilt and sequestered suffering, Valleros sees himself as the monster Cemaan ordained he be.

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⬦◉ | Proficiency Information | 14/14 Points Used | 4 Persuasion | ◉⬦
  • POINT ALLOCATION
    DESIGN DETAILS
    Faith | 04
    ◦◦| Paladin | Estelley: Stance (Free), Burn,
    Revive, Smite, Rescue

    Magic | 06

    ◦◦| Invoke: Duelist
    ◦◦| Magic: Snare (Lanlath), Smog (Lanlath), Cleanse, Warp, Isolate, Safeguard, Wardrobe, Mindcontrol (Godborn)

    ◉ Charisma | 04
    | Speech: Host, Fame, Political, Saving
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  • POINT ALLOCATION
    DESIGN DETAILS
    Strength | 02
    ◦◦ | Melee: Technique Parry, Shrug Off

    Constitution | 05
    ◦◦ | Training: Iron Will, Breather, Status Endure, Rage Counter, Bulwark

    Dexterity | 07
    ◦◦ | Cutthroat: Stance (Free), Backstab, Target, Dodge, Reversal, Tears
    ◦◦ | Roguery: Escape Artist, Dirty Fighter
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Sup there! I'll be picking this application up for staff review, expect a review shortly!
 
Sorry for the delay on this application, things got busy! But very well written, wonderful job on the proficiency points.

Approved. @PuffyPigeon
 
@Katiesc Changed power ring in favor of a better symbolic representation of this character. From Ulley to Ellea with a large owl familiar.
 
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@Katiesc My lad got infected and his proficiency and personality has thus changed. I'm also uncertain as to whether or not the timing is right for Middle Altalar to be his native language.
 
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Sorry for the wait, just got back from camping! Re-Approved.
 
Looks good! Approved, but also you have an extra point that you have not used so you can use that if you'd like to.
 
Worship and ring changed. Change and explanation of such in life story and personality is written in lilac. @Katiesc
 
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Hey there! It looks like you're five points over your limit! The Altalar are allowed 65 points from their age + 5 from their boost! Please adjust (It should come to 70 instead of 75).
 
Hello, here's a shnazzy review!

  • Proficiency Points:
    • You're five points over the limit. Altalar only gain up to 60 points (+5 boost included into the sum of 60) plus the +10 boost for being mundane (aside from Sorcerer). Please adjust this, @PuffyPigeon.
 
@Katiesc Was just approved for Ancient Character. Sorry to have you stare at this app yet again. Life story entirely rewritten. I'm also uncertain if the timing is right for his native language to be Middle Altalar.
 
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HELLO. First I'd like to say congratulations on your permission! But let's get to work.

My Review

Skill Information
  • Magical Knowledge: Demonology is no longer a magical knowledge option that you can pick from, please review the new list.
  • Languages: You've got a stack of free languages growing (Middle and Modern Altalar are a fair addition due to the perm). D'Ithanie feels out of place without linguistic points, so either remove this or add proficiency points.
Please make these changes and then get back to me!
@PuffyPigeon
 
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@Katiesc Update made to vampire mutations as an Alais! He isn't one atm, but I do have the traits in order right below the actual application. You know.. just in case. It's under the Sanguinism spoiler.
 
@ I don't have a reviewer anymore. Katie noooo...

Updated Sorcery. Also updated the Sorcery in the afflictions section beneath the original application.
 
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