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Played Character Valleros Avethiä || Inulvaan of Devouring Moon

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|| CHARACTER INFORMATION ||

Full Name | Valleros A'losso Avethiä Desa Dessëya Bel-Celaresë Lathan
ºº Meaning: Valleros A'losso of House Avethiä, Child of Lady Desire, from Celaresë, Lathan

ºº Standard Use: Valleros Avethiä
ºº Alias:
Corahaunt, Inulvaan of Devouring Moon
Heritage | Teled - Lanlath
Age | 336| Born: Jan 1st, 22 B.C.
Gender & Pronouns | Cisgender Male | He/Him Only
Occult | Mage of Birth & Blessing Origin

ºº Affinities: Sapphora Godborn & Strangle Marken
ºº Planar Alignment: Vortex & Silence
Religion | Estelley (Universal Focus)
Occupation | Senleya Member (Watchway Society), Inulvaan

CORE CONCEPT
ºº A Penitent Paladin | A former Ordvaan and teacher whose charismatic talents were used to betray his oaths and exploit his congregation, repaid in the form of a Godcurse sent from Cemaan. Having proved himself by adapting and carrying on, Valleros now serves as part of Artarel's legion of Inulvaan both in penance and as a means to sate lycanthropic needs.

This sharp change of life trajectory has caused this Son of Sapphora to go down a warlike path, much like the one his mother used to walk. Though, still a lover of love (in all its forms) is he.


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VISUAL INFORMATION
General Appearance | A lanky Lanlath who holds himself in a patient yet severe manner, having chosen to show his seniority in small measure (mid-40s). Having lived nearly all his projected longevity as an average Teled, Valleros is still not showing signs of age-related complications. Valleros' upper body is blanketed by a black-out tattoo consuming his neck, chest, and arms down to his wrists with designs outlined in negative space.
ºº | Summary
º Eye Color: Glowing pink irises (Sapphora) + black sclarae.
º Complexion: Fair and heavily tattooed.
º Hair Color: Honey blonde and greying.
º Height & Body Type: 6 feet, 5 inches | Narrow, Athletic
º Additional Features: Sapphora's pink lights (jaw, cheekbones, hips, mid-back). Nails grow into points. Exaggerated canines.

SKILL INFORMATION
  • Origins | As a healer once, Valleros used his inheritance from Sapphora to draw from the Vortex realm, only for his techniques to take on a more consumptive purpose. Much later in life was he bestowed a connection to the Silence realm by Artarel to serve her will.
    ºº | Standard Schools: Tenebrous, Evergrowth, Entropy, Counter

    Theme | A shadowy Evergrowth Mage with a motif of monochromatic rose brambles, gold, and predatory reptiles. Valleros' magic eats anything around it, rendering information void, ideas forgotten, and matter destroyed.
  • Heritage | Fully Lanlath: All Mechanics
    Affinities | Sapphora Godborn: [Light Manipulator], [Solur Tender], [Universal Speech] - Strangle Marken: [Greater Strength], [Greater Hunter], [Fauna Bane], [Greater Smell]
    Society | Watchway Society (Senleya): Calamity Archives
  • Languages
    ºº Innate | All Extant Languages (Universal Speech)

PLOTHOOKS & BACKGROUND
  • ⬦◉ || Corahaunt, Inulvaan of Shale Moon ◉ ||
    ⬦| Valleros dawns the title of Corahaunt while he represents Artarel's Holy Legion in armor. His task is to oversee and protect the piety and righteousness of Estellians, a job which can sometimes involve disagreement mediation between members of his precious community.

    ⬦◉ || Lanlath ◉ ||
    ⬦| Valleros is the quintessential Lanlath, here on Aloria with guiding intentions. Even as one of the notoriously aggressive Inulvaan, Valleros tends to avoid forcing his opinions but will happily share them if requested of him.

    ⬦◉ || A Great Lindwyrm ◉ ||
    ⬦| Valleros becomes Harsyth (har-seeth), a Strangle Marken which still resembles its mother. While unpredictable and base in its thinking, Harsyth retains his personality. These aspects make the perfect conditions to learn more about who Valleros is as a person and explore your own character's mettle and values.
    ⬦| Harsyth views other Marken or Monsters as safe outlets for otherwise overwhelmingly deadly violence.
  • ⬦◉ || Valleros was born and raised in Lathan, a semi-divine child bestowed upon his parents after struggling to conceive. Two more siblings came after him. As a practicing healer at the time the Cataclysm ensued, a young Valleros of twenty-two was among the many Lanlath sent forth by Leyon to soften the collapse of Allorn. But coaxed by a friend made, he is among the few who remained on Aloria for decades after the gates closed.

    ⬦◉ || Valleros spent the next two centuries in various occupational fields, with one becoming especially meaningful to him: an Ordvaan between Aloria and Lathan. As a Godborn, Valleros vested it upon himself the burden of being an exceptional spiritual example for his community; with his charasmatic talents, he earned the attention and trust of many. Sporadically, he came from Lathan to various locations in Aloria for years at a time.

    ⬦◉ || Somewhere along the way, Valleros began to exploit his audience at the expense of the material he preeched and was thus Godcursed by the cruel Empress of Power herself as a two-fold punishment for both the heretic, and those willfuly seduced by his lies. Transforming during a service one foggy morning, he commits the slaughter of his congregation. Somhow surviving, Valleros is hidden by his closest sycophants and family. Survivors and their families are blackmailed and blackballed into silence, but Valleros is no longer an Ordvaan. Reduced to a mad man struggling to come to grips with what happened, what he was, and how to control it.

    ⬦◉ || Months of effort and acceptance grant Valleros mastery over his curse. In penance and as an outlet for his newly acquired blood-lust, he devotes himself as an Inulvaan in service to Justice and the rest of the pentheon. Warped by his guilt, sequestered suffering, and the very technique of conditioning by which he's gained control, Valleros sees himself as the monster Cemaan ordained he be.

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{ A grueling transformation. }
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⬦◉ | Proficiency Information | 15/15 Points Used | 3 Persuasion | ◉⬦

POINT ALLOCATION
DESIGN DETAILS
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Magic | 08 - Vortex, Silence
◦◦| Cavalry: Summon (Free), Charge
◦◦| Adapt: Safeguard
◦◦| Arcane:
Counter, Aura, Warp, Snare, Cleanse, Shove

Faith| 04 - Estelley
◦◦| STANCE | Paladin: Armaments, Guard, Smite, Cleanse

Charisma | 03
◦◦| Speech: Hosting, Sanctioned, Political

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Sup there! I'll be picking this application up for staff review, expect a review shortly!
 
Sorry for the delay on this application, things got busy! But very well written, wonderful job on the proficiency points.

Approved. @PuffyPigeon
 
@Katiesc Changed power ring in favor of a better symbolic representation of this character. From Ulley to Ellea with a large owl familiar.
 
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@Katiesc My lad got infected and his proficiency and personality has thus changed. I'm also uncertain as to whether or not the timing is right for Middle Altalar to be his native language.
 
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Sorry for the wait, just got back from camping! Re-Approved.
 
Looks good! Approved, but also you have an extra point that you have not used so you can use that if you'd like to.
 
Worship and ring changed. Change and explanation of such in life story and personality is written in lilac. @Katiesc
 
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Hey there! It looks like you're five points over your limit! The Altalar are allowed 65 points from their age + 5 from their boost! Please adjust (It should come to 70 instead of 75).
 
Hello, here's a shnazzy review!

  • Proficiency Points:
    • You're five points over the limit. Altalar only gain up to 60 points (+5 boost included into the sum of 60) plus the +10 boost for being mundane (aside from Sorcerer). Please adjust this, @PuffyPigeon.
 
@Katiesc Was just approved for Ancient Character. Sorry to have you stare at this app yet again. Life story entirely rewritten. I'm also uncertain if the timing is right for his native language to be Middle Altalar.
 
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HELLO. First I'd like to say congratulations on your permission! But let's get to work.

My Review

Skill Information
  • Magical Knowledge: Demonology is no longer a magical knowledge option that you can pick from, please review the new list.
  • Languages: You've got a stack of free languages growing (Middle and Modern Altalar are a fair addition due to the perm). D'Ithanie feels out of place without linguistic points, so either remove this or add proficiency points.
Please make these changes and then get back to me!
@PuffyPigeon
 
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@Katiesc Update made to vampire mutations as an Alais! He isn't one atm, but I do have the traits in order right below the actual application. You know.. just in case. It's under the Sanguinism spoiler.
 
@ I don't have a reviewer anymore. Katie noooo...

Updated Sorcery. Also updated the Sorcery in the afflictions section beneath the original application.
 
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