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    CHARACTER INFORMATION
    » Birth Name | Valenya Merithya Aetris
    Regalianized Name | Valenia Merivel Aetris
    Nicknames | Val, Vale, Ember
    Aliases | Lumira
    » Race | Isldar
    Cult | Cult of Life
    » Age | 30 Years
    Date of Birth | February 3rd, 281 AC
    Zodiac Sign | Aquarius
    » Gender | Female
    Pronouns | She/Her
    Sexuality | Pansexual

    Relationship Status | Married to Viola Aetris
    » Occult | Valenia was born with an Exist Magespark.
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    CORE CONCEPT
    » Religion | Valenia was raised to believe in Dragon Worship, as taught by her devout parents. She has a largely pro-Occult mindset that clashes with the traditional views of her faith, though despite other faithful antagonizing her for this view, she believes that her devotion to the Dragons is unwavering―until recently. Now, she is left wondering if she made the right choice on a fateful day one year ago.
    » Identity | Valenia is a cheerful and impressionable healer with the desire to befriend and help anyone in need. Carrying an insatiable wanderlust and curiosity for the world around her, she has cast aside the closed-off personality typical of most Isldar in favor of treating everyone she meets with kindness and friendliness. Born with an innate connection to magic, she wields angelic song to heal the injured and protect the defenseless.

    Personality Type | ENFP-T | The Campaigner
    Character Alignment | Chaotic Good
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    VISUAL INFORMATION
    » Appearance
    Oddities | Valenia bears no mutations, though she often can be seen manifesting lavender-colored Wyvern scales and matching horns over her body with Elladorsong.
    At a Glance | Valenia stands at 5’9”, and has long, wavy white hair that is typically worn loosely over one shoulder. She has an average, if not slightly athletic, body shape and build. Her face and shoulders are covered in freckles, and a number of piercings decorate her ears. Additionally, her left arm is decorated with tattoos of swirling vines and blossoms. As a Life Isldar, her eyes are an amethyst purple hue, dotted with light blue specks of light.
    » Disguises
    Arcana Shift | This form resembles a female Death Isldar with long, dark hair that fades into a green ombre, decorated with a braid. She has a few patches of green scales upon her forehead and shoulder, complimented by a pair of matching Wyvern horns. This form stands at a height of six feet.
    Avatarsong | This form features an ethereal, feminine figure made of moonlight, seeming to have stars drifting through their mystical form. She is accessorized by many Draconic attributes, including a tail, horns, and crystalized scales up her limbs. Her voice becomes flawlessly melodic, accompanied by an angelic, echoing aftereffect.
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    POINT ALLOCATION
    » Magic | 7
    Radiant Point Buy | Radiant Revive, Radiant Push (Isldar Buff II), Radiant Feather, Radiant Bolster, Radiant Relocate, Radiant Shield
    Chem Point Buy | Technique Parry, Chem Feeding
    » Wisdom | 7
    Enchant Point Buy | Enchant Shift, Enchant Defense, Enchant Bolts, Exorcism
    Tech Point Buy | Tech Stim

    Tech Branch | Melortech
    Medical Point Buy | Medical Resist, Medical Buff

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    LINGUISTICS
    » Native | Sulvaley
    » Fluent | Common, Altalar
    » Proficient | Katharic, Nātl

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    LIFE CHRONICLES
    » Childhood
    › | Valenia was born within a Moon Vault of Islavaal on February 3rd, 281 AC. Her parents, Laerdya and Vulwin Aetris, were both Isldar of the Crystal Spire. She was the fifth of eight children. Born with an Exist Magespark, her innate connection to the Veil was discovered at a young age.
    » Adolescence
    › | Valenia spent much of her time reading about the world outside of her home, and developed an insatiable curiosity for learning. Above all, she had a passion for helping those in need, both friends and strangers, and took an interest in medicine. She studied both magical and nonmagical methods that could be used to cure the sick and wounded, and received special tutorage to groom her arcane abilities once her innate powers were noted by the Moon Vault's Elders.
    » Adulthood
    › | Her studies continued, and Valenia grew into a purehearted healer. By the age of 20, she was conscripted into military service, learning the physical skills to defend herself while also putting to use her medical knowledge as a combat medic. For a few years, she served to heal those injured in the field, though her sense of wanderlust had never faded, and she yearned to travel further beyond her homeland. By the time she was 25, she left Ellador in order to gain firsthand experience of the outside world―valuable adventures that would be infinitely more enriching than reading from a book. She traveled south, stopping in villages wherever she was welcomed to tend to the ill and hear their stories.
    » Regalia
    › | By the year 309 AC, Valenia had made it to Regalia and decided to settle there, at least temporarily. She was greatly intrigued by the vast variety of peoples that could be found in the city, determining it to be the ideal environment to meet new allies and offer her aid. With each new day bringing her a new lesson, she wanders the city, looking for those who might need a healer―or a new friend.
    » Current Events
    › | Since her arrival to the city, she has made many new friends and acquaintances, and has sought to pick up a wider range of skills to protect both herself and her loved ones. However, Valenia now battles with her own self-identity after pledging herself to Aurora and the Life Cult, while simultaneously believing that her magic is capable of performing good deeds in the name of the Dragons.

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    » Occult Guardian | Valenia is very sympathetic to the Occult, and even to some Afflicted―more so than the average Regalian might be. Those with magical abilities or powers than make them be seen as "other" in society can find an ally in her, within reason. She is always open to offering magical advice to those who are curious on the subject.
    › | She is positively-inclined to Mages practicing from any Dimension, and generally views the Afflicted with a sense of neutrality. She can become allies with any magically-inclined individuals as long as she is treated respectfully.
    » Crisis of Faith | Valenia is a Dragon Worshipper, despite being a powerful Mage, and struggles to "fit in" with the rest of the Dragon Faithful despite her heavily pro-magical views. She is often at odds with those who are less tolerant of magic among the Dragon Worship community, and despite the poor treatment she occasionally receives, she is still desperate to try and better her reputation for herself among them.
    › | In recent days, her devotion is faltering, and others have inspired the concern that her faith may be misplaced.
    » Free Spirit | Valenia is always eager to try new things and explore new places, and her gullible and carefree nature tends to get her into trouble. She can be seen both above and below Regalia's surface, and often ends up in places she shouldn't, meaning that people from all walks of life have the chance to interact with her.
    » Gentle Soul | Valenia primarily functions as a support character that looks to help her friends and allies however she can, whether by cheering them on from the sidelines, or by providing physical assistance on the battlefield. She certainly prefers to make allies over enemies, and often attempts to act as a mediator when tensions are brewing between two opposing groups.


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    RELIGIOUS EXPANSION
    » Overall Faith | 7/10
    › | Valenia was born and raised by the tenets of Dragon Worships, and spent decades being educated on the faith. While her belief in the Dragons will never be swayed, she is not as zealous or devout as other Dragon Worshippers, or even other Life Isldar. She tends to pick and choose the aspects of Dragon Worship that seem most representative of her, and ultimately, she will always listen to her own morals over the demands of any religious doctrine (despite her religion having molded much of her moral code).
    » Aurora | 9/10
    › | Valenia considers Aurora to be her patron deity, much thanks to the Dragon's deep-rooted connection to her race. Unlike most other Aurora worshippers, however, Valenia prefers to display her reverence through the act of preserving and healing Aurora's creations, as opposed to actively hunting and testing them. In the name of her patron, Valenia also wishes to cleanse dimensional corruption in nature, so that the world's flora and fauna can be preserved in their natural states.
    » Armina | 7/10
    › | One of Valenia's greatest desires is to repair and preserve the Soul Rivers of Aloria, and Armina's doctrines align with exactly that. For this reason, the Isldar considers this Dragon worthy of almost as much praise as Aurora, and actively works to follow out the wishes of the Weaver of Souls. In her travels, she sings for the Rivers, puts to rest weary Spirits, and forces malevolent Demons back into slumber---though Valenia would surely continue to do these things even if it wasn't Armina's demand.
    » Zanobi | 10/10
    › | Valenia is greatly reverent of the Dragon of Magic and all that she represents, and holds a far-fetched dream that it could be through the Yellow Dragons that she can be "cleansed" and achieve true Dragon Magic. The Isldar's own love for the occult most keenly compares to Zanobi's appreciation for magic, and she believes that the great Water Dragon is key to bridging all the hatred between infection-loathing Archon and Regalia's vast occult populace.
    » Ballas | 10/10
    › | Valenia's adoration for nature and plant life lends a special spot in her heart for Ballas, especially so due to the Dragon's positive inclinations towards magic, and even further still for the connection that Ballas has with her patron Dragon. She clings to the hope that the Green Dragons are somewhere alive and healthy, and abhors the idea that there was once a point in history where the Allorn attempted to slay them. The Isldar aspires to match Ballas's kindness and continues to nurture the flora she comes across in her name.
    » Regulus | 9/10
    › | Having been born with a Magespark, Valenia largely respects Regulus's acceptance and mercy towards the occult. She, too, wishes to offer kindness and acceptance to the magically-infested to a degree that has occasionally labeled her as a traitor to worshippers of the more anti-occult Dragons. She fervently believes every occult individual has the right to live peacefully, and sees no situation where the death of an infected person should be valued over curing or saving them.
    » Severena | 6/10
    › | Many of Valenia's values of compassion, healing, and protection all closely align with Severena's designs, so the Isldar holds this dragon in high respect. However, she largely disagrees with Severena's stance on the occult, and believes that all magically-inclined people are capable of achieving good deeds, regardless of if the magic itself is considered "corruption." In all other aspects, however, she holds the Penultimate Defender in high favor, and looks to her for guidance in her day-to-day life.
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    PERSONALITY EXPANSION
    » Regarding Law | How does your character feel about law and authority?
    › | While Valenia does her best to follow the laws set out by the city, and has no wishes of making herself into a criminal, she will always hold her own values and morals over Regalian Law. That is to say, if she believes that something about the law is unjust, she will avoid following it to whatever extent she can without having herself publicly labeled as a criminal. She believes in mercy, pro-occult views, and fervently believes in the power of choice. She is usually fearful of the Metropolitan and other law enforcers of the city, her past experiences with them leading her to believe they are corrupt, biased, and hateful to people like her.
    » Regarding Family | How does your character feel towards their family?
    › | Family will always hold a high place in Valenia's heart. She has an abundance of siblings, cousins, uncles, and aunts, and her lifetime was spent growing up alongside them all. Loyalty to and acceptance of one's family was molded into her head at an early age, and Valenia's cheerful (if not naive) personality has generally left her on good terms with most of her relatives. She believes even those that have fallen out of grace, such as the rare few that strayed to the Death Isldar path, are still deserving of her love. Her relationship to her parents is somewhat distant, though she maintains close bonds with many of her siblings, a good portion of which also traveled to Regalia.
    » Regarding Race | How does your character feel about races other than their own?
    › | Valenia sees all races as equal: Or, at the very least, she tries to preach that idea. Deep down, she will always carry a feeling of Nelfin superiority over the other races of the world, and even above that, she feels preference for the Isldar especially. Though she would never be caught openly admitting it, she holds a slight disdain for both the Dwarves and the Teledden for their roles in attempting to destroy her ancestors. Despite this, she will never treat an individual as lesser sorely based off of how they were born, and prefers to allow actions to define how she treats other people.
    » Regarding Religion | How does your character feel about other religions?
    › | The Isldar is open-minded to most of Aloria's other religions, and even took an interest in reading about them from a young age. In general, she is indifferent---if not curious---to religions not her own, and will happily sit and listen to learn more about one's faith. However, she has a rather fearful view of Unionism, believing that it has inspired a lot of unnecessary hate and bloodshed throughout history, that violence often being targeted towards people of occult status. And, to exist in an Empire where failing to acknowledge the divinity of the Emperor is a high crime, Valenia regularly lives in fear that she will be punished for not following a conservative Ailor faith.
    » Regarding Magic | How does your character feel about the arcane and the magical in the world?
    › | She is largely pro-occult, believing in the freedom to use magic as long as it is done so in a non-violent way. She sees the learning and controlling of magic to be a process worthy of respect, one that requires enough time and practice that it should never be dismissed as a "crutch" by those without arcane talents. She actively promotes facilitating the teaching of magic and the arcane, and even owns a store that specializes in selling magical trinkets of her own making. Those who actively seek to suppress, marginalize, restrict, or humiliate the usage of magic among the common populace are quick to earn the Isldar's disrespect and disgust. A sole exception for her love of the arcane is that of Necromancy; raising and tampering with the dead will always be something she despises.
    » Regarding Pride | What is your character most proud of about themselves?
    › | She remains proud of both her magical affinity and her extensive medical knowledge, two skills which she worked to hone for decades. Though, as she is only three decades into her life, she understands that she has a lot to learn, and several centuries of work stand before her before she can achieve her full potential. Magic has become a part of her lifestyle, using it to protect, to teach, or even just recreationally. A lifetime of medical practice has transformed her into a suitable doctor as well, and the satisfaction of being able to save a life is all too great---though it is not without episodes of failure, most of which leave lasting scars on the Isldar's mind.
    » Regarding Insecurity | What is your character's biggest insecurity?
    › | The Isldar has an excessive desire to be accepted by everyone she comes across, and always lives in fear that her current ways of acting will never be up to standard. Sometimes, her life is defined by acting in a way to make others happy, or in hopes of gaining their approval---and just as often, she spends long nights reflecting upon how she has likely failed to do so. She wishes to be everyone's friend to a fault, and the idea of unwittingly creating enemies---sometimes, due to circumstances entirely out of her control---will always gnaw at her mind.
    » Regarding Fear | What is your character's biggest fear?
    › | Valenia's ultimate fear is that she be unable to save her loved ones. Whatever the definition of "saving" means seems to vary depending on the situation---it could be as drastic as being unable to save their lives, or perhaps only being unable to save them from injury. In any case, the Isldar is desperate to be there for her friends and family, and lives in fear that the time will come that she will be too helpless to offer aid when they need it most. She cares not for her own well-being, if it means she can ensure the ones she cares about are safe.

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    Approved. @Saaber Also cleaned. Just edit the comment beneath the thread with it.
     
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    Hiya, requesting a quick re-review please! @Caelamus

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    • Added details of Valenia's Magespark special permission.
    • Included a new line in her Life Story to account for said Magespark.
    • Also swapped out the Brittle Pack for the Parkour Pack!
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    @Caelamus Sorry, need a quick re-review again! Valenia's been cured!

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    • Removed mentions of Vampirism and Vampiric Abilities.
    • Reverted the Core Concept section back to how Valenia's mentality was pre-infection.
    That's all! Changes made in blue!
     
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    Updated Valenia's app to some new standards following the update to Isldar lore, and tweaked some sections of her Core Concept and Life Story to accommodate. Decided to also shift Valenia's patron Dragon from Saaima to Asaph because it felt more fitting for her character. Changes made in blue! @Caelamus
     
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    @Caelamus Hiya! Updated this sheet in accordance with the magic update, and swapped some proficiencies around.

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    • Lowered Strength stat from 2 to 0.
    • Increased Magic stat from 6 to 7, added new Magic Abilities and Specials.
    • Increased Charisma from 1 to 2, added the Demon Alter Pack.
    • Added details to Valenia's Demonic Form.
    • Included a mention of the new free Specials granted to Isldar.
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    @Caelamus Requesting a quick re-review; had to shuffle some points around due to the update to Alchemy.

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    • Removed Common Alchemy and Healing Alchemy.
    • Added Mineral Wisdom.
    • Added the Medical Artificer Pack, its associated specials, and the chosen Artificer branch.
    • Also took the opportunity to redesign Valenia's Demon Form to be more consistent with the themes of the deity I had in mind. Hopefully this shouldn't be a problem, since I haven't used her Demon Form in-game yet.
    That's all! Changes made in red.
     
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    Hiya! Requesting a quick re-review, since I had to shuffle some points around due to the new proficiency costs for my Custom Kit. Changes made in red! @Caelamus

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    • Lowered Dexterity from 1 to 0. Removed Roguery.
    • Lowered Charisma from 2 to 1. Removed/retconned Demonology, since it was almost never used in general.
    • Added the 2 Point Cost for the Custom Kit.
    • Also took the opportunity to swap out a few magic specials I wasn't using for ones that looked more interesting.
     
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    @Caelamus Hello! Going to need a quick re-review, please.

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    • Swapped Breaking Magic for Protection Magic.
    • Swapped out a Greater Magic Spell (exchanged Blessings for Enchanting).
    • Added the details of Valenia's Altered Self spell, since I'll probably start actually using it in RP soon.
    That's all! Changes are made in blue. Thanks!
     
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    Slightly tweaked the wording of Valenia's Religion section to include Armina as well, as it is fitting with her current ideals of protecting Soul Rivers.
     
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    @WingedJade Hiya! I made a couple quick changes to Valenia's proficiencies, so I'm requesting a quick re-review! Also, if this thread could be cleaned up again, that'd be awesome! Thanks!

    Changelog:

    • Swapped Mineral Wisdom for the Barricade Artificer Pack. Added two Artificer specials.
    • Swapped Blessings Magic for Disruption Magic.
    All changes are indicated in blue!
     
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    @WingedJade Made some small changes to accommodate the updates to Spell Point Buy! Changes addressed in blue.

    Changelog:
    • Updated changes to Spell Point Buy. Magic Throw became Arcane Attraction, and Altered Self became Reflection Strike.
    • Swapped out Affliction Wisdom for Soulrend Wisdom. What was previously Valenia's Altered Self disguise is now her Soulrend form.
    That's all! Thanks!
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @WingedJade Updated for the changes to Isldar Racials! Added Control Magic for the Snow's Kiss special.
     
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    Upped Valenia's age by one year, since it's her birthday! Happy Birthday, Valenia <3
     
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    @WingedJade Hello! Requesting a quick re-review! Changes marked in blue!

    Changelog:

    • Tweaked Valenia's religion section to reflect updates to the Dragon Worship lore, though the general premise remains the same.
    • Selected a new batch of Spell Point Buy specials with the new magic changes! Some are the same as before, some were removed, others were removed.
    • Edit: Also added the free Automaton pack!
     
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    #26 Saaber, Feb 11, 2023
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    Bumping this!
     
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    Claimed for review!
     
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    Hello. Here's my review

    Appearance Information
    -A question for this one. Is the altered appearance in reference towards Aurora's mark or the soulrend point buy?

    Outside of that, everything looks good and checks out. Approved!
     
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    It’s the Soulrend Pack! I’ll add in the one for Aurora’s Mark if there’s a point I end up using it. :)
     
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    @RaggedyGrace In need of a quick re-review! I made the decision to OOCly retcon the appearance of Valenia's Exist Avatar because it looks too closely to the design of Solvaan with their new update, and I don't want there to be any confusion. A new description has been provided in blue!
     
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    Looks good. Approved.
     
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    Updated to new template!
     
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    Changelog 5/1/2023
    • Replaced Control Magic with Mimicry Magic.
    • Added details of Valenia's Altered Self disguise.
     
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    Changelog 6/3/2023
    • Shuffled around points due to the changes made to magic point buy.
      • Dexterity: 2 ➝ 1. Removed Edgewalker.
      • Wisdom: 4 ➝ 6. Completely shuffled around packs.
      • Magic: 7 ➝ 6. Took literally every Radiant spell.
     
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    Changelog 6/29/2023
    • Removed Dimenthist Wisdom, added Exorcism.
    • Removed Tech Barrier, added Tech Sanction.
    • Added Sacred Healing.
    • Updated languages.
    • Updated religion section in Core Concept.
     
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    Changelog 7/8/2023
    • Swapped out the Chem Cleanse pack for the Radiant Feather pack.
     
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    Changelog 8/28/2023
    • Swapped Tech Armory for Enchant Defense.
    • Swapped Sacred Healing for Tech Antimagi.
     
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    Changelog 9/17/2023

    • Removed Tech Antimagi and Tech Sanction.
    • Added Medical Buff and Medical Resist.
     

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