Va'la Tahlruil

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  1. ZiggyStarDusted

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    "Don't you dare get it twisted
    I'm nice but I can get wicked."


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    SEATBELTS - Gotta Knock a Little Harder
    Heart - Barracuda
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    By FlossyBerryRene
    Character Information
    • Full Name: Sihn Va’la Tahlruil
    • Race: Sihndar
    • Age: 22
    • Gender: Female (She/Her, They/Them)
    • Sexuality: Pansexual
    • Eye Color: Amber Brown
    Core Concept
    • Born and raised in the deadly misty forestry of Drowda's Milai region, The young demon huntress was raised on balancing the scales of the pragmatism of her people, with a hint of diplomacy. Moving to Regalia, with efforts to rally the other city-bound Sihndar to work towards their goals, whilst attempting to find her own path along the way.
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    ''I wanna know, have you ever seen the rain.
    I wanna know, have you ever seen the rain.
    Coming down on a sunny day?"

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    Proficiency Information

    Total Points | 14/14 used

    Strength: 6
    • Unarmed Pack
    • Blades Pack
    • Large Blades Pack
    • Short Blades Pack
    • Blunt Pack
    • Flexible Weapon Pack
    Constitution: 1
    • Heavy Shielding Pack
    Wisdom: 1
    • Dimentist Wisdom Pack
    Dexterity: 5
    • Stealth Pack
    • Parkour Pack
    • Knocking Pack
    • Cover Pack
    • Trailing Pack
    Magic: 1
    • Enchant Magic Pack {Free from Sihndar}
    Charisma: 1
    • West Linguistic Pack

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    "Those are people who died, died... They were all my friends and they died."

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    Ability Information
    • Northern Taint
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Sinnayed (Free)
    • West Linguistic Pack
    Appearance Information
    • The Sihndar stands at relatively average height for their kind, with a toned physique primarily attributed to her time spent traversing and surviving in Drowda, now maintained through exercise as best as she can muster in day-to-day city life. Their hair is often kept in a pair of ribbon tied buns to keep out of her way in combat and general trivial ongoings.
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    ''The world is a vampire, sent to drain. Secret Destroyers. Hold you up to the flames."
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    Life Story
    • Va'la was born within the warrior-riddled locale of Drowda's Lirranna region. For as long as she could remember, being raised by an adoptive mother and leading figure in Lazzri’el Tahlruil. Death is trivialised early in the Sihndar's life.
    • The young Sihndar’s youth however was primarily spent in and around the misty forestry of the Milai region, feeling their dealings to be more attuned to the person she was becoming. Receiving deep tuition of her people's history, enemies, and cause. All the while needing to hone her skills in combat along the way for her own survival against the various demons that loom over her home, sought to take her as they had many.
    • Va’la went on to reconvene with her adoptive mother in the culturally shocking city of Regalia, though she eventually came to remaining there on her lonesome in the hopes of putting her training to true use, albeit in their intentions of simply tending to the Sihndar mission, she would also come to find herself immersed in the city’s people, politics, and more. Like nothing she had ever seen.
    Current day (IC influenced)
    • Seeing a gap in leadership among the Regalian Sihndar, Va'la presents herself to try to fill the void, much like her adoptive mother before her, and after a vote is near-unanimously accepted. Now works her hardest to continue working for the Sihndar's goals, whilst trying to remove naive city-goers rose-tinted glasses where she may.
     
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    @apath

    Hey! Could I please get a re-review? It's been a good while...
    Anyhow, here are the changes made:

    - Aged from 22 to 25
    - 8 points of light sorcery added ontop of 8 in order to put her at 16 in sorcery.
    - Nelfin history knowledge pack removed.
    - Addition of the special traits area alongside a new void mutation.
    - Sexuality quirkified, pretend to laugh at it please.

    - GREAT DAYS added as a theme for jojo energy.

    Thanks.
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    Henlo Va'la is back for season 3.5

    Aesthetics updated and tidied up.
    Proficiencies shifted to abide by the new update!
    >:)

    In need of a new reviewer.
     
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    @Katiesc Hey! Re-review please? :D
    I have made edits in this color to prof points/ increased body stat.

    - Aged up a single year, and used all of her points I left out for IC learning.
    - Updated her life story a smidge.
    - Also added some aesthetics, songs, and artwork.

    EDIT: of course a sihndar Esa-Ajo update comes up moments after I decide to edit my app. I might have to do pretty big life story shifts after the fact to this.
     
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    @Katiesc can I bonk you about this because its been a week? >w>
     
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    Bumping this, Been 2 weeks, and also needs a new reviewer.

    Thanks!
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review. Because of how long this has taken, I'll try to get to it today.
     
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    @fantuinn Hi! Need a Re-review. Prof spread updated to suit newer prof update.
     
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    @fantuinn Been a full week, so i wanted to check you didn't miss the ping for this.
     
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    ZiggyStarDusted *lute music stops*

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    @fantuinn hey there. In need of another re-review

    Updated to new character app template, proficiencies changed up heavily ahead of sihndar update.

    will chuck in aesthetic later
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Looks good! App is solid, everything seems to be in order. One minor issue though before I can approve:
    • You appear to have invested 1 Point over the 50 limit, for a total of 51 Points. Please shuffle your investments around to rectify this issue.
    Please go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes, and thank you for your patience!
     
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    @Yurs

    sweet. One point dropped from unarmed to hit the 50 quota. Ahaha.

    Thanks!
     
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    Looks good!

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    @Yurs
    Hey again,
    - Fully updated accordingly to Sihndar/ Northern Taint update.
    - Retconned into Fin'ullen nelfin from ka-meraic to remain northern tainted. (farewell fishtail)

    Thanks :)
     
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    Looks good!

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    Hello, I return.

    -Updated in accordance with the new proficiency system.

    Needs a reviewer/ re-review. Cheers!
     
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    swapped out pet pack, and added on disguise skill pack. still 12/14 points used.
    @Mollymock

    (did an oopsie and went about with this whilst va'la is already submitted to someone's prog order that doesn't involve either profs- idk, felt to clarify)
     
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    Requesting re-review per sihndar update

    adjusted life story to fit lore changes
    adjusted point spread

    @Caelamus
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved.
     
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    Some additions made to my point spread made in orange. @Caelamus
     
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