Approved Sheet Vaell'aer Drulvaar

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  1. PapidaCarrot

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    @Katiesc Updated points and removed blood cast cape mention from inventory!
     
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    @Katiesc Bit of an error on my part. They made kathar mageblooded two levels of sorcery instead of three! Removed distant discourse! Everything else is the same!
     
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    @Katiesc ACK I WAS WRONG! Didn't read the new sorcery level and point system changes to the mage page! They've been updated now! Two aesthetic spells from the chaos magic school!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved but continue to ping past reviewer.
     
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    Added ritualism and adjusted physical stat! @Katiesc @Caelamus (I don't know which one of you to tag... SORRY)
     
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    Just added some images!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Continue to ping @Katiesc
     
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    he's back
     
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    HydraLana The Very Gay Walking Talking Lore Encyclopedia Staff Member Lore3

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    My sole point of review is to ask that you give information on what he’s been up to for the past several months in more crass terms. At current, the last section of his Life Story section is extremely cerebral and don’t give many concrete facts about where he went and why he’s back. Tag me once you are done.
     
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    @HydraLana
    Changes made in red!
     
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    @HydraLana Removed a spell, and metallurgy skills in exchange for construction art!
     
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    Remember to always update your Physical Stat calculation when you update proficiencies, but as you reach the max even without the correction, Re-Approved.
     
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    @HydraLana Application updated due to recent infection, and also fixed from the last prior error!
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    @HydraLana Added the recent Twiceborn ability for Milot bloodline. (Temp bloodline)

    Also lowered a lot of combat proficiencies in general, and moved racial boost to mixology instead.
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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