Played Character Tull'ryn Kee'lyth

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    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Basic Information
    • Full name: Tull’ryn Kee’lyth.
      • Nicknames: Tules, Tulip
    • Race: Maquixtl.
      • ◆ Huactl Subrace.
    • Age: Thirty-one.
      • ◆ Birthday: 11th November.
    • Gender: Male.
    • Pronouns: He/him.
    • Sexuality: Aeda.
    • Eye Colour: Hazel.
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    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Core Concept
    • Religion hasn’t always been kind of Tull’ryn. But due to circumstances, they’ve a willingness and optimism for the future. As time trails on, he is slowly growing a connection with the Estellon religion.
    • A newly adapting Maquixtl, wishing to protect their home-stead and community at all costs.

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    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Proficiencies

    • ◈ Total Points: 14.
    • Strength: Building Smash] Maquixtl Free pack.
    • Constitution: 7
    - Shield Slam, Shield Brace, Shield Taunt, Shield Deflect, Rage Counter, Shield Snare, Shield Wall, shield block (free pack)
    • Wisdom:
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 7
    - magic snare, magic curse, magic cleanse, magic bolster, magic barrier, magic warp, magic revenge, magic revive (free Maquixtl Pack).
    • Charisma: 0
    • ◈ Pet Husbandry Pack [Free]
    Tull'ryn has a divine avatar form, -- this is the spell-set!



    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Abilities
    • ◈ Maquixtl [10 Specials]
    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Languages
    • West Linguist Pack
      • ◆ Common | Fluent
      • ◆ Saan | Fluent
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    【 ◆◈◆ 】 Appearance Information

    ◈ Tull'ryn stands at 5’9 with a ripped physique, accompanied by dark-auburn curls and daring hazel eyes.

    ◈ Soulrend form: A champion sworn to his Ordvann, he offers his hand as guardian in the name of the Estellon.




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    【 ◆◈◆ Life Story

    Childhood || Tull’ryn was born in Regalia on the 11th of November, 274 AC, to his Ailor Father Naushe and Kathar mother Aeandir. He was one of multiple that his father housed throughout his child-hood, along-side a plentiful amount of half-siblings and cousins. His mother didn’t stay long, leaving him to have no extensive ties with her.

    Adolescence || With time the halfling boy began to learn the family trade, aiding in the tattoo parlor beneath their cramped apartment alongside his brother and father. When he wasn’t, he snuck away to practise and prod at magical intentions he was told to stray away from. This in turn taught him he had some aptitude to cast and consort with the occult.

    Young Adult-hood || Having the ability to now properly step out and explore, the young man found himself accompanied by a group of misfits that ended up in multiple messy situations. In an attempt to cater a stable income, he passed through a range of guarding charters, never really staying put to one though. In the end he decided it wasn’t for him.

    Current || After arriving back after a few months away from Regalia and its previous ‘Clicker Crisis’, he visited Floral-court. After months of interaction, he grew a fondness for the district and found it to be his new home. Not only did he find a home, he met his now fiance, and welcomed a son into the world. With the growing familiarity of Floral-court, he took the steps to become a Maquixtl and fully commit.


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    Hello there! I'll be picking this up for staff review.
     
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    My Review

    Life Story

    • Details: As we both know, Tullion Kearney has gone through a whole lot. I'd like you to expand and give details on how he came to be as a person. What "dangerous" life events occurred to cause him to be proud of surviving through them? Please go into more detail on this in his life story. @ShipIt
     
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    Bump! The application has been sitting without edits for almost two weeks now, on 10/25/2019 (gave you a few extra days since this slipped my mind) to make the change(s) or this application will be rejected. @ShipIt
     
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    @Katiesc Sorry for the delay! I added a few points in the young-adult section that demonstrate scenarios in the past he held as requested.
     
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    COOL. Approved.
     
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    @Katiesc Aaaa, I was told to re-tag you for tax return when it comes to magic and body-stat check!
     
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    @Katiesc Heyyy, I've transferred Tulio's mage-spark points into sorcery spells. Requesting a re-review. Sorry for the inconvenience, I should've done it a while ago but didn't due to complications.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay helllo, I finished up the sorcery update changes and need a new reviewer I think!
     
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    Please, please, set your application to Needs Reviewer when you lack one.
     
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    Ahh I'm sorry! I didn't know if I had to put need reviewer or needs re-review.
     
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    @ShipIt After looking over your application, there are a few things that need to be corrected:
    • You currently have picked Dravinda's Gift II as a sorcery spell. This is not a sorcery spell, but instead a Suvial Altalar Racial Ability. Please replace this with a sorcery spell from the list.
    • When you do so, please specify that you are an Exist sorcerer as well.
    • Body Care is also included within Physical Stat Calculations, please make the appropriate corrections.
    • Please mention what your parents subraces were for the appropriate Physical Stat Limitations.
    • Currently as it stands, you do not have the Silven permission, please either rewrite the backstory without such, or apply for the permission, and wait until you receive a response to continue.
    Once you have made these changes, mark them in a color of your choice and tag me.
     
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    @Follower I think I've done everything! I put it all in orange. Also the silven stuff was from ages ago, I hadn't touched the application properly again up until now. Sorry about that.
     
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    @ShipIt After reviewing your Application, everything seems to be in order. Approved.
     
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    @Follower Hello! I've updated the app since the half race update, I think I've done it right.
     
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    @Woodwork Changes with Cahal turning for Tulio!
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Hello! Done a complete redo of my application, along with the new proficiencies and such! Also don't know if my reviewer is around anymore.
     
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    Please make the following edits and tag @BiBiBirdie when complete!
    You have purchased 3 packs, but only listed 2 points as invested! Please correct this.
     
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    @BiBiBirdie Adjusted a few points to different areas, specifically Con points so I can use my Earth Magic Shielding ability. Also added a new magic to fit better.
     
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    @BiBiBirdie Hello. i got cahal'd! I just put the basic stuff on the app for it. ALSO changed one of the magics for a lack of use of enchant magic
     
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    @BiBiBirdie we doing the epic updating of points! updated magic + melee to new standard
     
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    Avast.
    I'd just switch this to say "Block Pack" to avoid confusion.
    You should add a short description of Tull'ryn's transformation in the Appearance Section.
    You aren't invested in the West Linguist Pack, so I'd just select one native language and Common to have here!
    With this birth date, Tull'ryn should be 33, going on 34, not thirty-one. Figure I'd point that out.

    You also only have 11/12 possible magic specials, if you want one more.

    Besides that, everything looks good. @Tag me once you're set with the changes!
     
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    @ezalB all done, I didn't know what to do for language thoughhh. Since Tulio was changed via 'The Garden', and his old native would've been Kathar. But I've put it for Saan rn because he's Maquixtl!
     
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    You could do either or, really. Taking West Linguist would also of course fix all that, which is prrrooobably what I would do mself. But, this looks fine as-is!

    Re-approved.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Hello! I did a little shuffling of some points, only two into strength from widsom as a revise. But I don't know if my reviewer is about to review anymore, so I'm tagging for another just in case.
     
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    @ChapterDeath did a little editting of the point and this is what I got from it! I added quite a few to con and strength, after the update.
     

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