Approved Sheet Triss Aduro - The Delicate Storm

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    Triss Aduro
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    Basic Information
    Full Name
    : Tryphona Maryam Aduro
    Nicknames: None
    Regalian Name: Triss Aduro
    Age: 46
    Visual Age: 25
    Birthday: 12/28/263 AC
    Gender: Female
    Race: Half-Isldar
    Subspecies: Mix - Fin’ullen/Moon Vault Isldar
    Affliction: None
    Sexuality: Sekhet, Polyamorous
    Preferred Weapon:
    Sword, Spear
    -Often wields a yari-shaped spear with red ribbons tied to the top.
    -A blacksteel sidesword with a crimson hilt. The handguard has a wyvern that wraps into the crossguard.
    -A seax, resembling a shattered sword-turned-shortsword, rests on her lower back.
    - 20 Regals
    -A journal/report pad

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    Skill Information

    Total Points: 50 Spending Points + 10 free Hobby Points

    Core Combat
    3 | Sword Combat
    15 | Spear Combat | +10 Spending Points, +5 Half-Isldar Racial Bonus


    Point-Buy
    3 | Schooling - Admiral Command | Admiral School (Talant Ilha-Faial Academy)
    21 | Core - Sorcery
    3 |
    Linguistics

    Special Training
    5 | Strength Training

    Hobbies
    15 | Hobby - Sailing Art | +10 Hobby Points, +5 Spending

    Yacht- Aria of Defiance

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    Body Information

    Physical stat
    +3 Sword
    +15 Spear
    +5 Strength Training
    +~7 Sailing
    Cap Reached - 25
    170% * 120lbs = 204lbs

    Body Shape:
    Athletic Body Shape

    Body Fat:
    Average Body Fat​

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    Languages


    Common
    Free Language
    From the world around me.

    Parent Language
    Sulvaley Altalar
    From the Mother who taught me to achieve.
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    Parent Language
    Modern Altalar
    From the Father who taught me to dream.
    10/10

    Learned Language
    Skodje
    From the dearest of friends.
    5/10


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    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations


    Half-Isldar Racials
    Skin Purge I
    Age Control I
    Empath Sense 5
    Element Brand 1
    Element Control 1

    Sorcery
    Dueling Brand I
    Light Mend II
    Magic Bolt I
    True Path I
    Super Self I
    Element Control 7
    Arcane Mastery 1


    Point-Buy
    Great Force I

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    Visual Information

    Eye Color:
    Golden-Hazel
    Hair Color:
    White
    Hair Style:
    Long, often braided
    Skin Color:
    Light naturally, tanned when sailing for long periods
    Clothing:
    Either very loose or very tight. Has taken a liking to lighter blue colors with openings due to the hotter months. Hair is often kept braided and tucked into a hairpiece wrapping around her head.
    Height:
    5’5"

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    The Core List

    Character Alignment
    Hinging between Neutral and Chaotic Good

    Personality Type
    Campaigner (ENFP)

    Religion

    Estel (0/10)
    As time has gone on, Triss found her faith in Estel wavering. Between Exist extremists and the rise of the Allorn Empire, she found herself unwilling to submit herself to the same beliefs. She severed her ties and tossed her blessing from Estel aside.

    Dragon Worship (2/10)
    Triss has begun to explore Dragon Worship more since coming to Regalia. Still having only scratched the surface, she seeks to continue her learning about how these creatures of old truly shaped the world.
    As time has moved on, it's become clear that the dragons are inherently fallible, and one in particular is downright horrid. Triss has started to distance herself entirely, especially after a certain betrayal, though has vowed to never leave the side of her Isldar kin.

    Old Gods (2/10)
    Triss has started to learn about the Old Gods as she has started her service with House Sorenvik.
    She's as intrigued about them as she is confused, but nonetheless, her curiosity remains tried and true.

    Likes:
    -Honesty
    -Loyalty
    -Adventure

    Dislikes:
    -Heavily dislikes injustices
    -Cowardice
    -Bad flirting

    Relationships


    Cellica Aduro || NPC - Deceased
    My sister if I ever had one. Rest easy, Cellica. The world has become a darker place without you in it.

    Sekhet || @mcmann
    You brought me out of a hole I couldn't get out of myself. I'd be lost without you.

    Elena || @Totemo_kawaii
    I'll never regret a single moment we had together.

    Taeron Fa'Salor || @HeyItzAPotato

    I've always wondered what it's like having a brother. A giant Songaskian wasn't what I had in mind. But he fits the idea pretty well, pfhah!

    Wasa Singhateh || @sarpbp
    The one headache I intentionally keep in my life. Somewhat worth it.

    Elise Thomas || @GoodDayGamers
    One of my first friends in Regalia, and my closest in general. I can't wait to see what comes out of her life. There's so much potential, and I'm so proud of her thus far; more than she'll ever know.

    Isobel Lykke || @FrostedDewDrop
    Oooh, Is. She drives me crazy half the time, keeps me sane the other half. I know she's got another life she's working through, I just hope she finds the path she wants to walk.

    Eloi Playero || @Wilvahelm
    Whether you admit it or not, you know what you've done. I will not forget.
    Alduir Stormblade || @AshenRoman
    I can't stand knights. But Alduir.. He's more than a knight. Behind the armor, there's someone I never thought I'd meet. He's been there when no one else was, and I will never forget that.

    Laria || @FinishMeOff
    The only clown I want in my life.

    Cecil Dzekh'aar || @sonofthestars
    Cecil is... Complex. He fights for his family, and that I admire. I hate how often our paths find us with blades pointed at each other. I much prefer being on the other side of a bar table with him.

    Erwin Braunschweiger || @BeetrootSalad
    I.. Erwin. Every punch I land on him is a cry for him to get the help he needs. I don't plan on stopping.

    Tim Borros || @Dodink
    It's all gone, Borros. I'm through.

    Viggo Sorenvik || @SupremeCripple
    There are few I look up to or have learned from as much as the Lord Commander. That's why failing him hurts so much. I don't intend on making the same mistakes again.

    Sivrid Sorenvik || @MrsCripple
    It's a dream job standing by her side, heh. She's one of the most real people I know. Truly one of my best friends.

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    Life Story

    Childhood - 0-13


    Triss was born in the naval port of Algassäi to Arton (Father, Fin'ullen) and Verna (Mother, Isldar) Aduro in 263 AC. She was an only child growing up and spent her time running about the city whenever she could get out of sight of her parents with her cousins. When finally caught and sat down in a chair, Triss studied whatever her mother put in front of her, but she never really enjoyed it. What she did enjoy was watching the garrison of her town spar and train. She and her friends would take to sparring back alleyways (in a much less elegant manor). Her mother was not pleased when Triss would come home with bruises from being hit with sticks, but Triss absolutely loved it.

    Her father, a well-respected boat designer often contracted by naval officials, suggested dropping her into the teaching hands of a family friend and navy admiral, who could teach her how not to get hit instead while also putting her on track to enlist in the city's navy. While not the solution her mother was looking for, Triss was eager and her begging was enough to get her mother to agree.


    Teens to Early Twenties - 13-24


    Triss spent the next few years studying in the city’s naval academy. She quickly found herself thoroughly loving the experience, excelling in her military studies. The same was true when it came time to crew a ship, then later to begin learning officer roles. At 18, she graduated from the academy and formally enlisted in the Algassäi navy as an officer in the fleet. Although rarely actually mobilized, she enjoyed her time in sailing and in strategizing in wargames.

    Her performance was noted by her mentor as the years went by. A recommendation was submitted for her to captain her own vessel. At 24 years old, the recommendation was approved and she stepped foot onto her own vessel.


    Adulthood - 25-46


    Triss spent the next decade serving faithfully in the navy. She eventually went on to receive additional advanced leadership training from the academy before undergoing trials for fleet coordination and command. Though faced with her greatest challenge yet, she managed to endure and was given command of a small fleet under her mentor. As she turned 45, she met with her mentor to discuss going abroad to expand her experiences due to Ilha Faial's lack of action in global events, despite its large navy. He agreed under the condition she returned to take her post under his command once more when she was ready, to which she whole-heartedly agreed to. With that, she took a temporary leave of absence from her fleet and made ready to make way to Regalia. As she explained her plans to her parents, her father decided it was a good time to unveil a gift he had been working on for her success thus far - her own yacht. She soon after set sail for Regalia where many new adventures lay in wait.


     
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    Messtro Flower Goblin Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Please pick from the personality type link that the character app template gives you.

    But other than that, approved.
     
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    Done! Missed that link, thank you :)
     
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    Updated hobby from Fabric Art to Needlework art. This was a misread on my part as Needlework art was supposed to be chosen to compliment Triss' sailing experience (repairing sails) and altering clothes and such.
     
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    Mollymock Estel's Devoted Staff Member Lore2

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    Hey @Mollymock/@Nesstro!

    So for changes on this one... Basically everything. Since Triss was my first character, there was a lot of shallowness in her backstory that made her stale for a long-term character. I've rewritten her backstory, updated her points, changed her race from Fin'ullen to Fin'ullen/Isldar, and just flushed her out a bit more.

    Much thanks!
     
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    Mollymock Estel's Devoted Staff Member Lore2

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    Hey @Mollymock, couple of adjustments!

    -9 Spending - Rapier (realized the sword she was using is actually just... a normal sword. Not a rapier, technically, so these were just kinda wasted.)

    +5 Spending - Husbandry; for a pet wyvern (+10 Total, will be making a RP trip for all of that)
    +2 Spending - Sword Combat (17 Total)
    2 Spending points left over for future learning! Changes marked in this color
     
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    Mollymock Estel's Devoted Staff Member Lore2

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    You shouldn't have access to these racials, since your character is a half-race. Any two Neflin races having a child will result in them being Full Blooded Altalar, so please correct this to accomodate with such. This will also affect your wyrmtongue language as well as your racial prof boost.

    Make this edit, tag me and we'll go from there.
     
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    Alrighty @Mollymock, made the edits

    -Isldar attributes
    +Fin'ullen attributes, adjusted the body stat and such accordingly

    Readjusted point values on skills
    - Removed Isldar bonus from spear
    - Removed 5 Spending points from Husbandry - (7 Spending points free)
    + Added Fin'ullen bonus to sailing (+5), freed up 5 Spending points - (12 Spending Points free)
    + Added 9 Spending points to spear combat - (3 Spending Points free)
    + Added 3 Spending points to Ritualism, added Uproot and Lightmeter - (No spending points left over)
     
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    Mollymock Estel's Devoted Staff Member Lore2

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    Hey @Mollymock, apparently my Approved tag got removed when I fixed some aesthetic things on my sheet! So sorry :I
     
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    Hi @Mollymock! Some updates in light of the Ritualist changes to come, going back to Triss' roots in sorcery from the person that taught her some when she first arrived in Regalia.

    -3 Points from Spear combat
    -9 Points from Sorcery

    +12 Points in Sorcery
    +Dueling Brand I
    +Light Mend II
    +Astral Being II
     
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    Hey there @Nesstro, redid my spending points/some abilities/phys stat stuffs - basically need to be treated as a new thing with all the changes I imagine. Thanks!
     
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    Hey @Messtro! Update:

    - 3 points from sword combat
    + 3 points to Linguistics, added Skodje

    Triss is learning Skodje :)
     
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    Hi @Messtro, edited for the long awaited Half-Isldar update :')

    ALSO,
    -3 Sword Spending Points
    -3 Spear Spending Points
    +6 Sorcery Spending Points

    Triss been learning more magic! All changes and added magic abilities marked in this color.
     
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    Hey @Messtro, completely missed changing the racial bonus with the Half Isldar update, so adjusted points accordingly.

    Removed Bodycare Training, put some points back into sailing from this
    Removed some points from sword training, put into spear and sailing.
    Added Spear racial bonus
     
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