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TELL THEM, TELL ‘EM, TELL THEM THE TRUTH I HOPE YOU FIND SOME PARADISE (TELL THEM, TELL ‘EM THE TRUTH) TELL ‘EM, TELL ‘EM, TELL ‘EM, TELL THEM YOUR- I’VE BEEN GOIN’ THROUGH SOMETHIN’ ONE THOUSAND, EIGHT HUNDRED AND 55 DAYS I’VE BEEN GOIN’ THROUGH SOMETHIN’ BE AFRAID. ” — UNITED IN GRIEF | KENDRICK LAMAR ╰─────────────────────────────────────╯ ━━━━━━━━━━━┓ ⚔ ┏━━━━━━━━━━━ 《 ⚔ || CHARACTER INFORMATION || to note one's identity. .ೃ࿐ 》 « FULL NAME » | Traoré Fa’Salor-Kassambara › Day to Day | Traoré Fa’Salor › Address As | ❝I've been around a while.❞ » Mister Fa’Salor | A formal title normally used by members of the peerage. » Taeron | A more regalized version of his birth name from the Masaya. He used it in the earlier days of his time in Regalia. He is sometimes referred to as Taeron. » Tae/Traé | Reserved for close friends and family members. A common nickname. › Occupations & Titles | ❝Not too proud of my past, but it’s who I am.❞ » Masayan Military | Affiliation | Commander Fa’Salor served in both Songaskian Wars. He pledges loyalty to the Masaya in most cases, even if he fought on Regalia’s side more than once. » Regalian Military | Affiliation/Occupation | Sendrass felt the heat of the Songaskian Commander under General Peirgarten. So far, Traoré has yet to fail. » Violet Order / State Metropolitan | Ex-Affiliation/Occupation | Vice-Commander Traoré Kassambara rings a bell to many, especially criminals in recent years. After almost three years of service, Traoré retired from the city’s guard. « PEOPLE » | Songaskia. › Ancestry | Traoré stems from a long line of religious leaders and military powerhouses in the Masaya. Most family members that remain home were in one way or another associated with either occupation. « AGE » | Fourty-two years old. › Birthday | July 23rd, 269 AC. in the heat of the afternoon › Physically | Mid-twenties. › Astrology | Leo sun. « GENDER » | Male. › Pronouns | He/him. › Preferred Terms | Masculine. « SEXUALITY » | Bisexual. › Preference | Someone who matches his energy, but also someone he can protect. › Status | Widowed (?). 《 ⚔ || CORE CONCEPT || to note one's personality. .ೃ࿐ 》 FAITH | ❝Mom would be dissappointed in me, I think.❞ › Overall Outlook | Traoré is a worshiper of Draconsim. His mother was a scholar and religious leader for the Songaskia Masaya in the capital, Korbamakora. While he was instructed to cling to the religion in his youth, within recent years he has strayed from it on the account of so many things happening to him. It is hard for him to have faith in anything. IDENTITY | ❝-❞ › Who am I? | Traoré is an ex-military/city guard/peerage member with a long past buried in the sands of Farah’deen. Unfortunately, he is more than likely the biggest Masayan-extremist of his family members. He refers to himself as a family man, set on whatever it is he can do to keep his family safe. › What have I achieved? | Medals of Honor and Valor from the Songaskian Masaya. Titles held in the Regalian and Masayan Peerage. Commander position in the Regalian and Masayan Military. Vice-Commander position in the Violet Order. Rescued by the Black Hand after a failed guard mission and returned to the palace. Owned a successful bar for over three years. › What are my goals? | Traoré for the longest time had goals of infiltrating the Regalian government in the sense of rising through the ranks and collapsing them from the inside. These goals have long since shifted, since Regalia holds some sort of place in his heart. With the Metropolitan doing less-than-adequate work in his eyes, Traoré returns to his first site of employment on the Crown Isle as an illegal mercenary and house guard. » MBTI Type | ? » Alignment | ? » Enneagram Type | ? 《 ⚔ || VISUAL INFORMATION || to note one's appearance. .ೃ࿐ 》 TYPICAL APPEARANCE | ❝It takes a lotta talent keepin’ myself lookin’ this good.❞ › Oddities & Mutations | Atop the Songaskia’s head is a set of double-ended horns that extend from just above his forehead and toward the back of his head in a swooped shape (these horns do not curl like a ram’s, and look more like a ‘dragon’s’). He has scars that cover his body, but his most noticeable ones are on his abdomen, arms, and neck. On the right side of his abdomen: A large stab/puncture wound. An X-shaped scar from two separate sword slashes. On his arms: Deep cut wounds that appear methodically placed, not just any battle scars. A piece of flesh missing from his upper left arm in the shape of a rectangle. He says it looks like an odd rectangle-shaped birthmark. On his neck: A singular puncture scar on the back right side of his neck, almost in the direct center. › At a Glance | WIP SUMMARY OF APPEARANCE | ❝-❞ › Eye Color | Amber irises with white sclera || Reflecting the flames of war. › Hair Color | Black. › Hair Style | › Skin Tone | › Clothing Style | › Height | 6’7”, or 200.66 cm. › Art Albums | WIP
Here is my review: "39 (In Alorian years)" what does this imply? Is she 39, or is she older? The proficiency points do not total correctly. I cannot conclude any error at the moment, since I'm unsure how old they are. The age is listed as 39, but there are 37 points listed, yet the total (minus hobby and talent) adds to42. A religion is listed as Dragon Worship. Which dragon(s) specifically? Yazzak disease is mostly confined to Daen. How would his mother have caught it? Make these edits and tag me with @AlphaInsomnia when you're done.
Your points are still off. You have a total of 44 age points, 10 talent points, and 10 hobby points. You can spend age points in any category. You can only spend talent and hobby points in talents and hobbies respectively.
Presently, you are spending 51 age points. 20 Greatsword Combat + 17 Shield Combat + 7 Medical Science + 7 Frontline Command = 51 points 39 (age) + 5 (start boost) = 44 51 ≠ 44
My mistake. I see what I did wrong. You used 7 talent points on frontline + 5 racial boost. I thought you used 7 age points. Your numbers look fine. With that figured out, your app looks fine. Apologies for the error. Approved.
@AlphaInsomnia Hola. Redid backstory completely, as I didn't like the bullet point thingies. Also profs updated accordingly. All done it ReD owo <3
Backstory Permission added, and I switched a smidge of tae’s backstory. Literally just instead of “somewhat respected general” for his father I made it “highly respected and important” to match up with the perm. that’s all owo @AlphaInsomnia
@AlphaInsomnia Hola. I finally put 'Kassambara' on Tae's sheet title and need an approval. Nothing else has been added besides the "IC EVENTS", some art, new themes, weaknesses, and question list. :)
@AlphaInsomnia Point Shuffle. - 1 from 4 fist combat, now making it 3. Used my two remaining points and the one taken from Fist Combat and dropped it into Schooling. Taeron now has General and Frontline Command. <3
@AlphaInsomnia NOT AGAIN yeah sorry i'm pinging you Dorkarth. So I can vibe. - All abilities added to sheet. :)
@AlphaInsomnia Yuh yuh yuh Homeboy is CURED of Dorkarth. Also removed K'alatibiri as a language since the Hadravs got YEETED. That is all.
@AlphaInsomnia Updated da sheet. Activated Racial boost, gave the boy some construction & cooking art cause I wanted something new. Let me know if I missed anything!
@Staff Roleplay Ayoo just popping in to say I dropped the 5 construction art from Taeron and condensed a few things to make the sheet look a bit cleaner. Also going ahead to grab a new reviewer. Everything I do past this will be only aesthetic edits. o>
@Staff Roleplay Need a reviewer! Switched my packs around in Charisma because the general and commader packs didn't exist anymore.
