Character Information Full Name: Rosa Village Race: Warmland Ailor Age: 65 Visual age: 25 Sex: Female Sexuality: Deez Eye Color: light brown Core Concept A one-sentence, long-form description of what religion your Character believes in, and how strongly they believe or obey the tenets of that religion. If they are Atheist, or Agnostic, write that down. A one-sentence, long-form description of your Character Identity Concept, that tells your reviewer and people skimming your Application what they fundamentally are. This helps explain their point spread and Abilities. Proficiency Information Sorcery 3 (age) Husbandry 10 (5 age + Honed Skill 2) Arcanology 6 (age) Volacrum 9 (age) Pathfinding 15 (10 hobby + 5 racial) Linguistics 15 (age) Writing arts 2 (age) Sailng Arts 10 (age) Ability Information Ailor Racials Honed Skill 1 Hones Skill 2 Empath Sense 7 Sorcery Flux Shift 6 Arcaneology Ward Knowledge Purging Knowledge Languages Common (Free) Fordic (ling.) Thalic (Honed skill 2) Old-Dyllic (unlocked) Daendroque (cultural) Bragacao (ling.) Girobaldan (ling.) Creole (Unlocked) Farradi (ling.) Sofaal (ling.) Appearance Information Life Story Prog Talents: Sage (lv. 3)
My Review Format Labels: You're missing Basic Information Basic Information Preferred Weapon: Please do not use first person, rewrite this sentence. Personality and Abilities Religion: Please write down his religion before becoming a Sanguine, but rather write down 0/10 and the reasoning behind such would be his Sanguinism. @bwmwags3
@Katiesc hey Katisec my apologies is Sorcery spells being changed isn’t something requiring re-review. I got a unclear response from help chat, so I changed it to needs re-review apologies if a five prof change isn’t required to be re-reviewed under these conditions.
@Katiesc Most of the Life story is the same just tried to remove the specification of removed profs and replace them with story for existing stats.
@Katiesc hey I read over the prof page and seems I forgot the 5 points from age 0. So those have been added to strings. Also I updated the profs and switched it up to try and provide tomas some More variety. Also adding in the racial boost
@Katiesc I decided to swap lines to give tomas more ability to do the things that I find enjoyable. Hopefully this will fix the lull Ive felt with him
@bwmwags3 Sorry for the delay! Please make the following edits and tag me once complete: If the character is a half race, please use percent or indicate it's a mix rather than calling anything a secondary race Proficiency section could use cleaning up, as it's a bit difficult to calculate how many are spent I would remove the part about him getting beat as a child, if necessary just swap it to him getting into fights as a teen rather than child abuse Additionally, "It is required to limit your Life Story to about 3-4 paragraphs with no more than 800-900 words. If you want to, you can include a full Life Chronicles behind your Life Story where you go deeper into detail, with no upper limit for words, however this will not be reviewed." I glanced through the rest and didn't notice any glaring issues but please present a more accessible life story for review in the future Thanks!
@Azas I fixed the above thanks for the concise bullet points. I also found out I missed allocating some points so those are now allocated.
