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    "To the darkness I bring fire. To the ignorant I bring faith. Those who welcome these gifts may live, but I will visit naught but death and eternal damnation on those who refuse them."
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    Full Name: Titus Evander Cretch
    Race: Warmland Ailor
    Culture: Ohrneti​
    Age: 33
    Sex: Male
    Gender: Currently Male-presenting
    Sexuality: IDK, chief
    Eye Colour: Light Blue​
    • Formerly a military Chaplain from Kausis and absolute unionist fanatic, Titus made the choice to travel to the capital to face and combat the growing heresies which currently are thriving within the city. Titus is well off, though by no means wealthy as a result of his military pay.
    • The youngest of six, his entirely immediate family were put to death for heresies committed by his father and only spared the fate himself due to only being in infancy at the time, Titus grew up among, Reverends, knights of the faith and other men and women of the cloth as the closest recognition of family.
    • Titus does not know what other ambitions he has in life beyond his faith and his belief that he must do everything in his power to defend the faith, without this drive he is completely lost. So by default his secondary ambition would be to find purpose in other things.

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    Religion:
    Raised within the Ohrneti Kingdom of Kausis within the wintery land of Ellador, Titus' faith is one steeped in extreme fanaticism. Having been raised within the walls of an Evintarian monastery following his family's prosecution by his people's inquisition. His beliefs remain an incredibly defining part of his person, despite having simmered down some during his time outside his Homeland.
    Identity Concept:
    A Stalwart defender of the Unionist faith, having been a commanding officer of the last four Iterations of the Inquisiton within Regalia, Titus is a military Chaplain and 'witch' hunter who following his time in the Capital, opt'd to travel the Empire in search of a new purpose. He has aided small communities plagued by rogue Sanguinary elements and malicious cults, Now returning to the Holy Capital to see the Unionist faith restored among it's populace.

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    Total Points: 46/50.
    Proficiencies: 40/40
    ✙ 20/20 Sword Combat skill
    ✙ 10/20 warlash Combat Skill
    ✙ 15/15 Husbandry Art

    10 Hobby + 5 Racial
    ✙ 10/15 Dancing Art
    ✙ 25/25 Physical Stat
    (20 Sword +10 warlash | Stat limit: 25)
    Abilities.
    Honed Skill I (Ailor)
    Choose Metallurgy, Arcanology, or Linguistics. If at least 3 points are invested in the chosen Proficiency, choose a single 3 Proficiency costing "Pack" for free additionally. This Pack does not contribute to the maximum Packs possible for this Proficiency at max point investment. If none of these are chosen, nothing is gained.
    Omniaware I (Ailor)
    The user cannot be taken by surprise from behind, below, the sides, above, or from far away. if any (Mundane) attack or harming ability is used on them, a sixth sense will trigger making them aware of an attack that would otherwise take them by surprise. This does not grant additional dodging or avoiding mechanisms or guarantees, so standard Combat Roleplay Logic must still apply to dictate whether or not the user would be able to fairly block or avoid an incoming attack. This Ability purely gives the knowledge of such an incoming attack
    Destined Body II (Ailor)
    The user has greater control over their own Emotional Capacity, which can do a couple of things. Firstly, the user can disable all their own emotions and re-enable them at will. Secondly, the user can choose to compartmentalize certain feelings or memories, thus completely disabling themselves from feeling/remembering them until another person with Destined Body 2 re-connects them with their disabled feeling or memory in meditation. Finally, the user can disable their sense of guilt or conscience altogether. The user is still entirely affected by Control Powers however, and any emotions they have disabled can also still be emulated by Control Powers to make them feel them anyway.


    Languages: 6/6
    Common (learned in childhood)
    Etosian Dialect (Mothers tongue)
    Vladno (point-buy)
    Varsivas (Point-buy)
    Hellas (Honed Skill I)
    Vristos (Pack complete)

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    "With faith as your shield and righteousness your sword, no enemy of the Spirit can prevail against you."
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    Abnormalities:
    For the most part, Titus would seem to be lacking in any type of abnormal features, However closer inspection will reveal a mosaic of self inflicted wounds and scars upon his back. The mortification of his own flesh due to his practice of flagellation. This has also resulted in him having quite an Anemic appearance due to frequent blood loss as a result of his practice.
    Visual Appearance:
    Titus is a tall Individual standing at around 6'0" in height, but appears to be underweight for his height as he is only 136 pounds, with a rather small amount of body fat. His lithe build, delicate facial features and almost none existant body hair has given him an incredibly androgynous appearance. He tends to dress quite modestly, prefering conservative attires which cover his entire person hands included. If any Jewelery is worn they will almost always be silver.

    Face
    Describable as attractive in the purest sense. Titus has an incredibly neutral face with untelling eyes, none of Titus’ features are particularly masculine or feminine and are best described as androgynous with sharp delicate features. Defined cheekbones and jawline. A softer brow and thin petite nose with sharp eyebrows, he’s somewhat more akin to the features of a nelfin than an ailor and has been known to on occasion be mistaken for a nelfin who’s ears have been clipped, though pointing out this detail to the Unionist fanatic would not be recommended.


    Body
    Following a similar state as his face, his body lacks any broadly male or female characteristics that can make it rather difficult to discern his gender, his physique is incredibly slender with a slight widening at the hips that makes identifying him all the more ambiguous and difficult to discern. Years of combat experience has left him with a seriously well defined figure. Titus is a practitioner of flagellation and as such, his back is a mess of scars which are constantly being reopened due to constant whipping, the loss of blood caused by this has left Titus looking very pale.


    Clothes
    A preference towards conservative garments, Titus dresses like many of the pious. Though with a preference towards darker tones. He often goes for basic robes and garments, the only real form of stylisation and accessorization that appears in any of his outfits are religious in nature, including prayer beads and religious texts.


    Voice
    Authoritative and direct. Titus speaks with absolute conviction without hindrance and hesitation, it’s not a particularly deep or soft voice. The Ohrneti accent is evident, but he speaks in a clearly understandable manner which doesn’t portray his emotions, Titus never raises his voice unless absolutely necessary, even when speaking to masses of people his voice remains controlled. As a result of it never portraying his true emotional state, people often find it to be rather intimidating.

    Andrei Vykos (NPC): A Knight of the Unionist Faith, Andrei saw potential in the young Titus and sponsored him, which put him through schooling and ultimately allowed Titus to become what he is today. Titus is than thankful for the opportunity provided to him by Ser Vykos.

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    "the Spirit sees all that transpires in His domain; and we are judged equally for the illumination we bring to the blackest night. We are judged in life for those moments where we spill light into the darkest reaches of His Empire."

    birth and childhood:
    Born Arevik Giorgiez, he was the sixth child of a farming family. His family were tried & executed on the grounds of void worship, with Arevik being spared due to his youth and suffered a grueling upbringing in an Evintarian Monastary, where he later changed his name.

    Adolescence:
    Initially intending to be trained as a Reverend, Titus instead pursued a career as a military Chaplain due to growing tensions between the Ohrneti & the surrounding Isldar, Velheim, Dorkarth cultures. His education and training patroned by a Unionist Knight named Andrei Vykos.

    Young adult life:
    Took to Military life with relative ease as it allowed him to focus his growing anger towards the enemies of his people, which strengthened the young mans religious convictions and continued conflict with Dorkarth Vampires led to an increased distaste towards Aberrancy in most forms.

    Coming to Regalia, first time:
    While in the company of a Regalian Solider, Learned of the Holy Capital, in particular the criminal underbelly which under pinned the city and the heresy which thrived within. He made a Pilgrimage to Regalia, were he served in three iterations of the Inquisition, but saw each fail for one reason or another. Disheartened he left the Capital and unable to return home due to Isldari occupation, travelled the wider Empire.

    Wanderlust & Return: During his Hiatus away from Regalia, Titus spent much of his time around Baldmark and the Etosian States, providing services as a lay priest and occasional witch hunter towards communities plagued by malignant cults and rogue sanguines. He has now returned to Regalia, following much contemplation, with a desire to finish his work in the Capital.


    Progression Talents: 3/3
    • Level 2 Warrior
    • Level 1 General


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      ♰ Evintarian Unionist
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      Titus Evander Cretch, Born Arevik Giorgiez was the sixth child of a common farming family within Kausis. Following a bad harvest Arevik’s family were risking starvation over the winter months and gathered what they could and prepared for winter. During this time a group of guards led by an inquisitor turned up at the house, expecting tithe for the local church, the family had to refuse as they had nothing to give. The Inquisitor took this as a slight against the Unionist faith and ordered the guards to search the house, in their search they located items which they believed to be related to void worship and the family were taken into custody and tried for crimes of heresy. Almost all of Arevik’s family were put to death by the inquisitors, however Arevik was spared, being only a child of four they believed his soul and mind was able to be saved from the clutches of the void.


      While in the custody of the church, Arevik was subjected to brutal treatment, for two years he spent much of his time locked away within the penitent halls of his church suffering brutal whippings from guards, to the extent he’d often fall unconscious from either pain or blood loss, only when he turned six did the punishment end and the beatings stopped, at least for a while as Arevik adopted the practise of Flagellation believing his soul remains and will always have been touched by the void. The church took him in as a young ward and became an acolyte of the clergy, doing menial chores such as cleaning the halls of the church and washing the clothes of the faithful. During his time he caught the eye of a knight of the faith by the name of Andrei Vykos. The knight sponsored the boy and his generosity allowed him to learn to read and write, Titus to this day does not know what drove the knight to raise him up. it was around this time that Arevik decided to change his name having learnt of his families betrayal of the unionist faith and his now insatiable hatred for the void, he desired to distance himself from the people he once loved.


      Initially Titus had intentions of becoming a Reverend and began the process of learning to become one, though as time progressed, Titus often heard stories of the horrors committed by the unfaithful and anger began to boil inside of him, this prompted him to begin the process of combining martial training with his learnings as a Reverend to defend and help lead man against those who'd oppose Unionism, finding contact with his old Mentor Vykos, he requested the man teach him how to fight, to which the senior man accepted with a smile saying he’d been waiting for this day since they’d met. Titus split much of his time to either training or learning the litanies of unionism and during this time his faith grew to fanatical proportions, he made attempts to learn the dead language of Proto Regalian wanting to read the creeds of Unionism as they had been written. Once he had learnt what he could Titus bid farewell to Vykos and left to join his peoples eternal crusade as a Chaplain.

      Titus took to military life like a duck to water, the strict discipline and highly organised way of life was something that worked well with young Titus, as it allowed him to focus his anger and hatred against the enemies of Unionism, this allowed him to excel quickly through training and it wasn’t long before he saw battle in a skirmish against Dorkarth vampires, witnessing the sanguines brutality only strengthened his convictions against the void.

      Titus continued his military service with utmost loyalty and provided his skills as a Chaplain with complete fervour, fighting all manner of the faiths enemies, However while tending to the spiritual needs of a younger imperial soldier from Regalia, he learnt more of the capital, in particular of the cities dark and vile underbelly. This left Titus in a state of shock and loss, His culture and his life had evolved around the fervent defence of the Unionist faith, yet behind closed doors of the Capital heresy was not only present, but was thriving. Titus remained quiet on his intentions for the rest of his tour and to the surprise of many of his companions and superiors declined the option to continue his service and announced that he was making a pilgrimage to the holy city and ultimately cleanse the enemy from within.
     
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    @PapidaCarrot rejigged Titus' Profiencies.
    • removed Frontline combat skill and put the +5 into blades.
    • removed Ailor racial from Lashing & blades.
    • added 15 Sanktism skill with racial boost
     
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    Updated to align with new profiency format
    Changed history so that he continued his church education to become a Reverend along side his martial training
     
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    @Caelamus I've rejigged his Profiencies
    • Changed blades combat from 20 to 10
    • Athletics from 4 to 5
    • aged him up by 1 year
    • introduced Command tactic skill 10
     
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    Update:
    Dropped Magical Knowledge Sanguinology freeing up 4 points
    Dropped Athletics freeing up 5 points
    aged up to 37 gaining 1 point
    Increased Command to 20 and added personal Regiment
    added ability section
     
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    @Nesstro
    Forgot to @ reviewer, woops.
     
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    Another update due to changes in Reverend requirements. Swords are now 6 and Society Knowledge is 8.
     
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    Update:
    Command reduced to 10, removed personal regiment.
    Blade skill increased to 10.
    Added Lashing 5.
    reduced age by 1 year.

    Apologies for constantly changing his stat layout, trying to work out what I want him to be.
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    Hello again!

    dropped command skill 10
    invested 8 points into lightgiver ritualism as part of the unique ailor racial trait.
    put the last 2 points from command and moved 5 from blades to Lashing
     
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    Approved!
    Next time mark the changes in a separate color though please!
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    Okay, I'll do that! sorry for the inconvenience.
     
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    Hello again alot changed this time.
    • added Archan Heritage & listed skill improvements.
    • removed blades and put all points into Lashing.
    • dropped a lashing point & Ailor culture knowledge to get Dimenthism.
    • removed ritualism abilities and put all points into Union Blessings.
    • Added Etosian Dialect from his Mother.
     
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    first time updating the sheet broke, but am back.

    Update log:
    Completely redid profs so they're up to date with current system
    Bought an additional Union Blessing ability.
    added Sofaal to Languages.

    I've elected to add no information on a mercenary company for now as theres no particular reason for him to have one at current time and frontline is merely meant to represent talents.

    Plans to also expand his backstory.
     
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    @Azuralan I'll be picking up this review. Please make the following edits and tag me once complete:
    • For your proficiency total, list out the contributing sources: you'd have 41 from age in addition to 10 hobby, 10 talent, and Archan lineage can receive a boost of 5 to one of Painting Art, Sword Combat, Strength Training if they invest 5 if any of those interest you. If not that's fine too.
    • Include points spent on sorcery in the proficiency listing
    • Be sure to update body stat with any proficiency changes. Currently it lists 16 from lashing but you have 15 invested.
     
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    Thank you, edits have been added with total point breakdown beneath.
     
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    Physical stat should be 20
     
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    @Azas
    I completely missed that, I'm dumb my bad.
     
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    @Azas

    Hello, I've been away a while.

    I've updated character sheet changes in Blue, hope this is alright.
     
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    You'll need to update to the new version of the template found here, and put any old template sections that you want to keep into spoilers.
     
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    omg
    hes back?????????
     
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    I've updated to the New Template& spoilered any additional information

    Do you also want me to condence the backstory or am I okay to leave it as is?
     
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    Definitely condense please
     
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    Old backstory has been moved to spoilers & replaced with an abbreviated version.
     
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