Approved Sheet Theotyr

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  1. Jittleyute

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    ⌘ INTRODUCTION

    ✖ Birth Name |
    Teoxihuitl
    ✖ Chosen Name | Theotyr Genanne
    ✖ Race | Half Elf - Maquixtl + Breizh Ailor
    ↬ Maquixtl Dominant​
    ✖ Age | Twenty-Two
    ✖ Sex | Male
    ✖ Eye Color | Blue

    ⌘ CORE CONCEPT

    ✖ Religion |
    With his parents both coming from different backgrounds, religion wasn’t the forefront of his education growing up. Despite this, Theotyr, because of his knightly status as a Fae, claims to be an agnostic Unionist.

    ✖ Core Concept | Theotyr is a rather morally grey take on an Aelriggan Knight, his methods seeming unorthodox and at times unnecessary despite his well-meaning intentions. He yearns to become a powerful sorcerer like his father while upholding his duty as a knight to prove his Maquixtl ancestors wrong about their cynical views on magic.

    ⌘ PROFICIENCY

    Point Allocation
    ↬ Strength | 7
    - Duelist Pack
    - Heavy Pack
    - Warrior Pack
    - Unyielding Pack
    - Demolisher Pack
    - Brutalist Pack
    - Hunter Pack​
    ↬ Constitution | 3
    - Bruteforce Pack
    - Ironheart Pack
    - Counterplay Pack​
    ↬ Wisdom | 0
    ↬ Dexterity | 0
    ↬ Magic [VOID] | 3
    - Casting
    - Displacing
    - Mimicry​
    ↬ Charisma | 1
    - Mount Husbandry Pack | Horse​

    ⌘ ABILITIES


    Specials
    ↬ Dark Element
    ↬ Shadow Element
    ↬ Smoke Element
    ↬ Heat Immune
    ↬ Chain Break
    ↬ Arcane Mastery
    ↬ Lightning Immune
    ↬ Cold Immune
    ↬ Surfwalking​

    Racials
    Languages
    ↬ Common
    ↬ Saan | Native Language​

    ⌘ APPEARANCE

    ✖ Abnormalities
    | Theotyr holds fairly minimal scarring, mostly due to training, while no physical deformities are present.

    ✖ Appearance | Theotyr is a fairly tall and built man with umber colored skin and dark hair. His clothing is typically darker in tone and Breizh fashioned, while he sports an unkempt and disheveled look to his jet black hair.


    ⌘ LIFE STORY

    ✖ Teoxihuitl was born to an excluded sorcerer Maquixtl father and a Breizh mother on the coast of Kintyr. To follow in the footsteps of both his parents, Teoxihuitl was enrolled in the Wards of Fae Order at age seven.

    ✖ His adolescence was spent at the Prime Sepulchre, where most of his training took place. He was introduced to sorcery early on, grasping the concepts fairly well due to his magically inclined heritage.

    ✖ After graduating at age twenty-one, Theotyr set out to fulfill his greatest ambition: Reconnecting with his Maquixtl heritage. He made contact with his father’s old village, and to his dismay, was rejected the same as his father.

    ✖ Theotyr, freshly graduated and twice disgraced from his own race, decided to pursue a new ambition: To become the greatest sorcerer in his order, in spite of his own heritage. Hearing word of a collective of Aelriggans stationed in Regalia, he set off to fulfill his knightly duties there instead.
     
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  2. Yurs

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    Claimed for review! App looks great, but there's one thing that needs to be specified before I can approve:
    • Please clarify which plane your character draws sorcery from. (Void/Exist)
    Go ahead and tag me @Yurs once you've made the necessary edit, I'll try and get this approved ASAP! Thank you ^^
     
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    APPROVED
     
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    @Yurs Updated proficiencies
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Redid proficiencies, core concept, and added slight changes to the life story
     
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    Rereview.
    • Proficiencies
      • You need to state whether your magic comes from the Void or the Exist after the number.
    Fix this, then you're all good for approval.
     
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    Done
     
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    Reapproved!
     
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    Need new reviewer! Proficiency changed
     
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    @Caelamus Redid proficiencies and changed his birth name
     
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    @Caelamus Wasn't expecting a magic rewrite lmao, profs updated again
     
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    @Caelamus Reworked profs again for the new update
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    Approved.
     
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