Preserved Sheet Thalion Resclan

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Basic Information

  • Full Name: Thalion Resclan
  • Age: 65
  • Gender: Male
  • Race: Avanthar
  • Imprint: Varran
  • Main Ambition: Bring a name to his Clan, Via taking political action as well as mercenary action.
  • Lesser Ambitions: Obtain Higher Quality Gear, capture his father's killer for shaming the Res Clan.
Visual Information

  • Eye Color: Blue
  • Hair Color: Black
  • Hair Style: Ear length, spiky tufts.
  • Skin Color: Peach
  • Clothing: Simple forester outfit, loose clothing for less restrictive movement.
  • Armor: Black Hard Leather Gloves, Vambraces along each forearm. Hardened leather pauldrons. Thick black gambeson, with a blue dragon reaching out from shoulder to shoulder. Mail backed boots, steel knee pads.
  • Height: 6'
  • Body Build: Ripped
  • Weapon of Choice: Weighted Elven Quarterstaff, Dual Ularcian Axes, Throwing Knives, Arcol bow, gauntlets. Uses a grappling hook for scaling surfaces


Skill Information

  • School: Ularenn / Avant
  • Level: Warrior / Warrior
  • Source: Pröta'll Mentor
Personality

  • On the outside - Generally, Thalion can be seen as cheerful and overall friendly whenever coming across new people. While somewhat reserved and distant upon first contact, a few sentences with a stranger can melt this away, revealing a willing extrovert. Along with that, most women find out he is incredibly flirtatious. Somewhat shameless in that area, he's hounding to the point of extreme annoyance, depending on the person. He likes to talk alot, and this can be very overwhelming to some people.

  • Within the Walls - He doubts himself on a consistent basis, wondering whether or not he should have acted that way, or if he made a rude gesture or said the wrong thing almost immediately after any action. Thalion will search the people's reactions around him intimately, often too much as he'll pick out something he perceives as negative when its nothing at all. Although he usually doesn't let this bubble to the service, revealing a facade of bravado and confidence that any leader should require.

  • Besides his Brothers - Incredibly protective, mainly. As of recently, he went from heir to the head of the Res Clan- and he feel applies the responsibility of preserving it to anyone he'd consider a close friend or family. An easy one to love, Thalion has a plethora of relationships, mostly comrades in arms. His 'brothers' are treated just as if they were family, laughing and crying side by side with their good times and bad. Because he has no living relatives, this is the extent of care he gives to anyone at the moment, however if he did he'd treat them as if they were delicate, an almost hostile protection that could do more harm than good.

  • If this were a Dice Game - A free spirit by nature, but a good person at heart, Thalion could best be described as chaotic good. Loyal to only those that he owes, his mercenary take on life conflicts somewhat with his baser, ingrained want to do good. As a person, he is just, and will take the high road in standings of personal morality and ethics, although this doesn't always mean he follows the local laws. People are the important things, to him, so long as everyone gets what they need then the world is in working order as far as Thalion is concerned.


Strengths


  • Combat Training - Having spent thirty years of his life alongside the Ularenn Horde, Thalion has grown adept at the improvisational dance that is the School of Ularenn, along with great skill in the school of Avant. This allows him great precision firing when it comes to archery, whether horseback or on foot.

  • Athlete - A good balance of strength and speed, attributed to both his heritage and his career as a soldier. His training has never been emphasized on either or as a general principle, although he goes through different periods of time where he'll lean on one more than the other. He goes about this via imprinting.
  • To be developed IC
Life Story


240 AC - Born in an Avantharian Tribe in Daendroc, to Duron Resclan and Madilyn Futhren. His dad left before his mom was ever found to be pregnant.


250 AC - Begins the more active lifestyle of a Plains Elf, learning to ride as a member of the Ularenn horde, and beginning his long road to becoming a fully fledged warrior.


255 AC - Five years down the road, he wins the Ba'ella seïa Barii, showcasing some of his worth as a tribal warrior. Reaching the level of Student in Ularenn and Avant at this time. It would be then that the young elf began training with true axes.


270 AC - Making up for his complete lack of archery skill, Thalion has pressed himself hard in the schools. An experienced campaigner at this point, with plenty of combats under his belt. All the sadder when, on the latest raid his party takes, Thalion receives a glancing blow to his head which put him out of the fight and gave him the appearances of being dead. It was only when a travelling group of performers passed by and found the near gone Elf that his future had a chance. He became smitten with one of the performers, Bell, and fell hopelessly in love after a week. This lead him to follow the group, and consequently become a member of the acrobatic troupe.


295 AC - After twenty five years on the road, practicing the performers trade, something horrible happens. Boredom strikes him, as well as Bell. Actually not to tragic, pretty common, but it made him long for change and a new degree of freedom. Going off on his own in free lance, he'd perform for coin, and become a sellsword of sorts for it.


300 AC - Back in Regalia, he'd take up his weapons again during major armed conflicts only to put it down and take up his job as an acrobatic performer during the gaps of piece in the Isle. He met his father, Duron, to find out the man was a living oxymoron, a warpriest of Estel. Thalion also found work with Myrnin Thane and Don'Yoku, the partners that owned the Mossy Poss. Working his way up to second man, the business would fall to the Usque at the same time his father was killed by the criminal elf Kero. Now the avanthar is searching for more meaningful purpose, and is trying to make his mark and breathe life into his dying Clan.
 
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Here's my review -
  • Elaborate on your character's main ambition as it currently doesn't lend much direction to your roleplay.
  • The third personality paragraph should distinguish more clearly between his relationship with friends and family, as obviously he wouldn't treat them exactly the same.
  • Each talent paragraph needs to meet the threshold of three sentences each.
  • State exactly where your character was born. There is some mention of Anglia, but that's later in his life.
Mark these changes in red and tag me when you're done.
 
I'm putting this under re-review on the basis that I forgot to mention a few things.
  • The dual combination of both Warrior Tenpenny and Expert Feer-Drakken is far too much and should be limited to either one or the other, or alternatively toned down in terms of skill.
  • Anyone who has learned in the School of Feer-Drakken must be Strongman or Muscular body build.
Mark these changes in red and tag me when you're done.
 
I'm putting this under re-review on the basis that I forgot to mention a few things.
  • The dual combination of both Warrior Tenpenny and Expert Feer-Drakken is far too much and should be limited to either one or the other, or alternatively toned down in terms of skill.
  • Anyone who has learned in the School of Feer-Drakken must be Strongman or Muscular body build.
Mark these changes in red and tag me when you're done.
@Valentinian Bumping this, as its been a week. Changed from Feer-Drakken to Ularenn and Lecgaen.