CHARACTER INFORMATION Full name | Thaddeus von Leitner Race | Statesland Ailor Culture | New Regalian / Imperial Age | 25 Birthday | January 27th, 284 AC Sex | Male Sexuality | Heterosexual Eye Color | Blue CORE CONCEPT Thaddeus is a devout Unionist who is sincerely committed to his faith. While raised within the Vierzehn sect, he has grown to be more tolerable. Thaddeus holds civil participation as a fundamental principle and is a particular enthusiast of politics. ABILITIES ◦ SHREWD INSIGHT I ◦ OMNIAWARE I ◦ HONED SKILL I ◦ SKIN PURGE I PROFICIENCY LANGUAGES ◦ Common [Free] ◦ Calem [Parent] ◦ Öbern [Linguistics] ◦ Hinterwälder [Linguistics] ◦ Wirtem [Unlocked] ◦ Skodje [Linguistics] ◦ High-Anglian [Linguistics] APPEARANCE Thaddeus has a very clean appearance about him, with hair and a beard that is black and well-maintained and blue eyes. At 5'11, he has an athletic body shape with average to low body fat. He subscribes to Imperial fashions however can be seen in the traditional "Waldmann" style of his culture. LIFE STORY Thaddeus was born to parents of higher commoner class and moved to Regalia very young as a child. In his early childhood, his parents did well to teach him the principles of Unionism and civil participation, to which he would both be later devoted to. Thaddeus attended the School of Statesman. He would find work in a government ministry and go on to serve in a noble house court. PROGRESSION TALENTS - 3 Diplomat
Howdy! There's a few small issues that need to be fixed before I can approve this application: It looks like you've selected Stateland Ailor as your subrace, but haven't specified on your sheet. Please include this alongside culture. You have listed 2 Racial boosts, however you are only able to boost one proficiency. Please select one and remove the other. Please list which Ailor racial abilities you have selected in your ability section. Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes, thank you!
Looks much better, however there is still no mention of your racial abilities on the app. These are separate from the proficiency bonuses, and can be found here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Ailor#Summary_of_Racial_Abilities Please pick three for yourself and list them in your ability section, then tag me when you're done. Thank you!
@Yurs Hey, I reworked some things. I changed my character's linguistic abilities to be more realistic, also largely sticking to languages with similar roots. As a result, I also adjusted some of my proficiencies and organized it better on a table.
Howdy! There's a few issues with your new prof spread, please make the following edits: You combined Hobby Points and Core Points in your 'used points' section. Please separate them, as they are two distinct point allowances. The Perception proficiency caps at 10. You cannot have 15. Physical Stat always rounds up, so you'd have 14 rather than 13.5 Generally speaking we discourage people from using the excel-type format unless they are familiar with the system, since it's more difficult to make edits if anything needs to be changed. You can keep using it ofc, but I'd recommend changing it back until you've gotten used to proficiencies. Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary edits, thanks!
