Character Information Full Name: Tarnac Tortal Race: Senef Asha Age: 42 Sex: Male Eye Color: Light Blue, not Cahal Core Concept Tarnac is a very firm believer in the Baskarr Faith, and doesn't care much for other religions. Tarnac is a warrior who enjoys maintaining balance in things, whether it be giving someone something they need, or saying a kind word, or the occasional threating. Proficiency Information Core +15 Fist Combat +20 Shield Combat Special +10 Perception Training (5 Senef Boost) Hobby +10 Sailing Art (10 Hobby) +5 Hunting Art +5 Pathfinding Art 35 Physical Progressions Talents Level 3 Warrior Languages Common (Free) Ibeth (Parent) Appearance Information Tarnac is 6 and a half feet tall, with fur a few inches long. He is ripped, and has low body fat, though it can be a little hard to tell through his fur. Life Story Tarnac was born in the Queendom of Azzol, and as such has a strong belief in the Faces of Baskarr. Their teenage years were spent learning how to fight with a living metal shield and his claws, using them together. Once he was proficient enough with fighting, he started exploring the world, gathering his Kharma and helping to correct small imbalances he saw everywhere. He came to Regalia for the rich culture here. He is tired of traveling so much, and wants somewhere he can call home.
Here is my review! Everything looks fine but I would like you to flesh out the life story more. What was his early family life like? Did he have many friends growing up? Were there any important formative events throughout his childhood and adolescence? Why did he decide on the glave in particular?
Added more to the story. Thank you for the review, I did make this in a little hurry the first time (which I shouldn't have, but..). I added a lot more though. Here is the at mention in case you don't get notified. @Bellarmina
@Bellarmina did you read it? It is still unapproved, so I am unsure. That sounded bad, but is the only way I could think of to phrase what I am thinking so sorry..
@HydraLana Sorry, thought I had posted something for this. I basically just updated the proficiency points to match the new system. Thank you!
Hello! I will be taking this application for review going forward, please tag me regarding changes or edits. Noting the above, this is reapproved. @cambamman1
@Follower edited proficiencies, as I was thinking about it and I didn't like that he had so many points invested in few proficiencies, so I leveled them down and added shield combat to help spread it out a bit more. Sorry if it is so soon after the other edit, I am thinking it is fine as that was just adding Cahalism and not editing proficiency, but I'm not sure. Edits in red.