Tarnac Tidebreaker

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  1. cambamman1

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Tarnac Tortal
    • Race: Senef Asha
    • Age: 42
    • Sex: Male
    • Eye Color: Light Blue, not Cahal
    Core Concept
    • Tarnac is a very firm believer in the Baskarr Faith, and doesn't care much for other religions.
    • Tarnac is a warrior who enjoys maintaining balance in things, whether it be giving someone something they need, or saying a kind word, or the occasional threating.
    Proficiency Information
    • Core
      • +15 Fist Combat
      • +20 Shield Combat
    • Special
      • +10 Perception Training (5 Senef Boost)
    • Hobby
      • +10 Sailing Art (10 Hobby)
      • +5 Hunting Art
      • +5 Pathfinding Art
    • 35 Physical
    Progressions Talents
    • Level 3 Warrior
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Ibeth (Parent)
    Appearance Information
    • Tarnac is 6 and a half feet tall, with fur a few inches long. He is ripped, and has low body fat, though it can be a little hard to tell through his fur.
    Life Story
    • Tarnac was born in the Queendom of Azzol, and as such has a strong belief in the Faces of Baskarr.
    • Their teenage years were spent learning how to fight with a living metal shield and his claws, using them together.
    • Once he was proficient enough with fighting, he started exploring the world, gathering his Kharma and helping to correct small imbalances he saw everywhere.
    • He came to Regalia for the rich culture here. He is tired of traveling so much, and wants somewhere he can call home.
     
    #1 cambamman1, Mar 5, 2021
    Last edited: Nov 18, 2021
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    Bellarmina Mirrors? Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review!
     
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    Thanks! And I love your description about bees.
     
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    Bellarmina Mirrors? Staff Member Lore2

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    Here is my review!
    Everything looks fine but I would like you to flesh out the life story more. What was his early family life like? Did he have many friends growing up? Were there any important formative events throughout his childhood and adolescence? Why did he decide on the glave in particular?
     
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    Added more to the story. Thank you for the review, I did make this in a little hurry the first time (which I shouldn't have, but..). I added a lot more though.
    Here is the at mention in case you don't get notified. @Bellarmina
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
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    Last edited: Mar 7, 2021
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    @Bellarmina did you read it? It is still unapproved, so I am unsure. That sounded bad, but is the only way I could think of to phrase what I am thinking so sorry..
     
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    Thank you!
     
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    @cambamman1 Is this tag an error or do you want this re-reviewed?
     
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    @HydraLana Sorry, thought I had posted something for this. I basically just updated the proficiency points to match the new system. Thank you!
     
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    Hello! I will be taking this application for review going forward, please tag me regarding changes or edits.

    Noting the above, this is reapproved. @cambamman1
     
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    @Antimreoir not sure if you are still on this, but updated to show Caholism.
     
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    @cambamman1 Hello, I've claimed this app for review and will get back to you within 48 hours.
     
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    @cambamman1 Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower edited proficiencies, as I was thinking about it and I didn't like that he had so many points invested in few proficiencies, so I leveled them down and added shield combat to help spread it out a bit more. Sorry if it is so soon after the other edit, I am thinking it is fine as that was just adding Cahalism and not editing proficiency, but I'm not sure. Edits in red.
     
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    @cambamman1 Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower updated to new format, and removed Cahalism.
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Very clean app!

    APPROVED
     
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    Awesome, thank you so much!
     

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