Preserved Sheet Tanyl "golden Eyes" Fajyre (also Known As The Crimson Scourge)

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  • Full Name: Tanyl "Golden Eyes" Fajyre (Also known as "The Crimson scourge" in Drixagh)

  • Age: (turned at 20) 126

  • Gender: Male

  • Race: Ch'ien-Ji (Vampire)

  • Sexuality: Asexual
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  • State the total Proficiency Points. This is always Character Age equals Proficiency Points. If your Character is a Mage, declare the new cap based on the amount of Spells your character has.
    Removed the extra skills
  • Summarize the completeness of your character's Proficiency Points here as stipulated: ( 0-points left)
  • +10 Sneaking (+10 from Undercroft School)
  • +10 Quick Fingers (+10 From Undercroft School)
  • +10 Syndicate Contacts (+10 From Undercroft School)

  • Summarize the completeness of your character's Culture Points here as stipulated: (10 points to spend)
    • +20 Vocal Music (From points)
      * +30 Brewing (From points)
      * +10 Cuisine Cooking (From Points)
  • Summarize the Languages your Character knows with a bullet point list. Languages don't take any Proficiency Points, but still follow the general "10 years per language" protocol (it doesn't actually take 10 years to learn it, more like 4, but this limit is set for gameplay reasons). You can Mary-Sue Languages, so keep it reasonable.
    • Just Common.
  • Summarize the Magic Spells your character knows: Guile Vampire Control path Mutations: Vampire Guile tree (Just the path boi), Blood's lust (Understanding the desire(s) of those that is feed from), Feeding Delight (Gives no pain when feeding on people), Shadow Flight (Magic Robe vanish magic!), Control (The Ability to sense magic and Holy Water), Enchanted Kiss (*kisses* your mine now - makes mindslaves at a kiss), Dread Claws (Killer broken nails), Un-turned Feeding (Does not turn people when feeding, unless the Vampire desides to turn on the feed I think), Fed Lust (Makes the fed wish to feed Vampires again), and Feeding Pheromones (Makes the Vampire give off a calming aura).
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  • Describe your character's position in Regalia. Why are they there? How long have they been there? What is their occupation and living situation? Tanyl, born and raised in the northern bit of the Opper Calem border before a skillful raid of vampires breached the city taking the young lad away to Drixagh - Many years past since that moment where he eventually got turned himself in a small village named Askori where he trained in the Undercroft arts - he was left to his own devices, and plans - after many weeks even months a plan was hatched in the fridded north of Drixagh where he killed everyone in the village of Askori he was staying in, by draining the entire town he was forced to moved south after he heard about Vampire Hunters being near that place, to the Imperial capital of the Empire of Regalia he went, where he started to settle down after a span of a few months, hidden in plain sight, after a year has passed he would have had gained enough power to set up a little place in the slums alongside the Syndicate cartels and the looming Vampire families, he'd be staying and working as a Innkeeper as of today, yet not many know of his existence, those that do will have trouble seeing though his clever tricks and plans, avoiding the hunters many times by sticking to dark places where none can see him, or even using a Mindslave to distract the people. Yet whilst he can't remember much of his past life when he was taken as a young boy, he seeks to learn about his family and much more… chaotic things, yet this lad may not be evil as he has kind, but he is quick to anger if you stand in his way.

  • Describe your character's upbringing. Where were they born, to whom? How many siblings do they have? What about their extended family/noble family? Tanyl was brought up by thieves, murderers, and Vampires, raised in their twisted ways and catastrophic tendencies, he quickly learned to survive he must stick to the shadows and don't let anyone get in his way, if they did they often was found dead soon after, whilst he can't remember his real biological family, it was not too small, housing around five members three children and two adults, yet he sees the Vampiric family as his only true family, while he wishes to learn about his biological family the vampiric one will always be the one he calls his own. Tanyl's family extended or not is home to a few in nobility, Regalian or not, maybe not held in high regards yet it is there.

  • Describe any secondary ambitions your character may have. Short term ambitions, or ambitions that may not be related to your character's main goal in life. Tanyl seeks to gain knowledge of his past whilst converting people to his way, he wants to start a little family and maybe keep climbing the Regalian ladder and become nobility, for with power comes great opportunities - Tanyl also has a plan to start a little chaos in the streets to maybe use as an opportunity to turn people to his ways, oh! And he also seeks a little more simple thing of running a little inn in the slums as brewing is a hobby he enjoys to do with a little cooking also, and perhaps singing.

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  • Eye Color: Golden eyes.

  • Hair Color: Blacken gray.

  • Hair Style: Short, but covering his ears.

  • Skin Color: Sicken pale.

  • Clothing: An Asian styled green robe with a undershirt, and more!

  • Height: 5'8"

  • Body Build: Toned
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  • Describe the Character's body. Go into detail about height, body shape, the color of their skin, the size of their bones and muscles, their amount of fat, any physical disabilities they may have, their amount of body hair if applicable and more. This description is purely for the body. He is five foot eight inches, he is quick normal looking with his body to modern standards, but with a little muscle, he looks physically frail and weak.

  • Describe the Character's fashion appearance and accessories. Talk about what kind of clothes they usually wear, preferred colors, what jewelry they have, weapons they carry on them or any item of note that they may always have on them. He tends to have a lot of fancy robes in green with golden markings along it, he tends to have a dagger in his outer robe (as he has two layers on) and might carry a sword on him if inside his home or on patrol in the local area, and as a item of value he always carries a little makeup to make him look a tad bit better.

  • Describe the character's voice. How do they speak? What is their typical tone and speed? Do they have an accent or a tendency to stutter? Any quirks about their voice listed here. Maybe also add a list of the languages they can speak. He speaks normally except for his thick accent, which ends up sounding like a mix of German and French.

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  • First Paragraph: At first glance Tanyl looks like a sick man always with a smile on his face and a calming mood around him, they would see him as kind and caring if they don't stand in his way, if they do he can be ruthless and relentless monster, though that side rarely comes out, and not in a public space. They could perhaps have heard of his nickname "Golden Eyes" after his bright gold eyes, which would be tied to his inn The Golden Eyed Crow which comes from a tale of his he forged to get more interest.

  • Second Paragraph: They feel a continuing internal pain and impoles for more, more, more - he gained that after he first came to Regalia's capital like a shift in his code, like a blood lusting mutation side-effect making him more greedy. He carries a calm demeanor not really fearing anything except for death, though he has a crippling fear of lose and letting go of loved ones, making it a huge burden on his mind, which he always have had since he was taken, else he is a pretty normal bloke.

  • Third Paragraph: He treats friends well, often holding bias towards one of them or giving them power, if a friend betrays him however he hold no restraints in executing them next chance he gets, or at least making them pay dearly, he holds friends high like a like a family, as a family is like high value pawns and servants to him, giving them more le-way and being a little more kind in there presents. Unlike that of new-folks which he gives no chance to grow in power to overwhelm him in anyway, he simply "acts" kind towards them.

  • Fourth Paragraph: His morality is more robotic then you might expect he is not pure evil, he does things for a reason, I'd name him more neutral, he lives with strict morals, he wont kill children nor innocents unless he needs to, tending to just bend their will if he can, and only killing if he haves to, as it is costly breaking the laws without reason, he sees it as needs even with his unending desire for things, he is not evil, just… misunderstood and wildly chaotic.

    [*]Fifth Paragraph (OPTIONAL): What is your character's Worldview? Explain what their relation with their religion is, how strongly they believe, how they feel about the relation between commoners and nobles, and how they generally view their privilige in the world. This last paragraph is optional, you don't have to use it in case you fear the information will be metagamed. Skipping this one, not quite sure yet.
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  • You don't need to have any Weaknesses, it's entirely optional. You also don't get any additional points for Weaknesses, they are purely aesthetic. Other then maybe his fear of lose and his impulses I think those are all the weaknesses, has he is willing to sacrifice almost anything for those he loves, which can be a huge flaw.

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  • Describe any number of Character Quirks your character has, strange behavior that they exhibit in certain situations. For example, a character rubbing a beard when nervous is a quirk, or a character biting their lips when doing math is a quirk, or a character shuffling their feet when talking to someone is a quirk. Quirks are not mandatory and may be left out if the writer doesn't want to include them or can't think of any.

  • Describe your character's skills; abilities they've developed, but not necessarily put at the forefront of their lives. For example, if your character is a good cook, but not a chef, or if they are a good horse rider but not necessarily a competition racer, you would mention them here. Feel free to mention multiple skills but try to keep your character from becoming over skilled. Not adding anything here for a few reasons, it might be meta'ed and it might change as he lives his life.
Likes

  • Describe three different activities, things or items that your character loves to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character happy and in a good mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they love these things and then also explain how it makes them feel. They enjoy cooking and brewing, being a long time passion for them even turning the hobby into a job, he also loves being with friends and family as it fixes the empty void that was left after he was taken from his real family, he also loves above all other food items regalian red wine and venison.
Dislikes

  • Describe three different activities, things or items that your character hates to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character annoyed or angry and in a general bad mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they hate these things and explain also how it makes them feel. Killing needlessly, he is disgusted at the killing of Vampires or other beings without reason, he sees it as a sin that is punishable but a swift pained death, or worse -- He strongly dislikes the smell of smoke, as it reminds him of the sun, his mortal enemy, he also tends to dislike bad singing, which gets him in a pretty bad mood.

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he caught sight of a man wil greyish blue eyes and black hair staring at him one day when he fled the man clearly some sort of Darkwald knight (Mavromino's char.)

Life Story (Required)

Add a summarized plot line of your character's life story. The point of the Life Story is not to give a novella long list of events that happened in the character's life, it's supposed to just create a summary of the person's life, while keeping a keen eye on explaining the previous points. The life story is supposed to tie together and provide background information as to why and how the person became what they are. It is required to limit your Life Story to about 3-4 paragraphs with no more than 800-900 words. If you want to, you can include a full Life Chronicles behind your Life Story where you go deeper into detail, with no upper limit for words, however this will not be reviewed. Keep in mind that all crucial factors should be in the Life Story, as the approval only counts for the information in the Life Story and information in the Life Chronicles may not be lore canon. Dawn rises as Tanyl Faiyre is born a child to a Ch'ien-ji family in the border of Opper Calem a simple life as a small merchant family, not more then a few years after his birth (around the age of five) he was taken by a group of Vampiric cultists and masterminds getting "new blood", as time went by he started gaining trust for these people starting to get brainwashed into it, as they began to travel along the countryside of Opper Calem and the Skagger Horde lands, raiding and recruiting more and more, the young golden eyed boy now around the age of ten was raised into a life of banditry and raiding, not long after this time a band of regalian knights came by to claim the lands and slay any bandits in the lands -

- the small Bandit and cultist horde moved east towards the frozen wastes and tundras of Drixagh after hearing of this little band of knights and fighters, where Tanyl along the way began training in the Undercroft School, learning how to get by undetected mostly and being quick and nimble with his fingers, and learning of contacting methods of Syndicates, and how to find them, along the way they stumble on towns and villages stopping by taking what they need and moving along again, as the band moved more people joined and left, a constant flux as the harsh climate killed the weak - as time flew by Tanyl learned how to use weaponry, small blades and daggers as well as more lessons from his School of Undercroft, now at the age of twelve he began to learn how to sing and started experimenting with the group's brewing, making ale and scotch among other things, and began to experiment with cooking in local taverns and inns they reached along the way on their journey, gaining a small interest for cooking he continued then he could

- time passed again now aged at sixteen he'd begin writing a little here and there trying to come up with stories for the future meeting many lovely people along the way as he grew gaining more friends, yet many he would not see again after their first meeting as it is the life of a Horde - From then on up until the age of twenty it was pretty slow until the leader revered as a mighty Vampire from long ago offered to turn him into one, after some convincing being promised glory and power, he accepts the offer and begins to turn, joining the feeding group as his power grew he became stronger and more careful also becoming known as "The Crimson Scourge" in Drixagh, yet none knew his true name.

As the years went on and on nothing much happened out of interest until he decides to leave the horde, though the glory and fame he gained the horde accepts, and tells him that they won't harm him if they see him, along his lone journey he sneaks past many hunters and inquisitors bands send out to hunt the horde running around - throughout many years he'd feed on local huts and villages until the attack on Askori, where the Hunters almost caught him as he fled, now heading south towards the Regalian Imperial Capital where he would set up a small home in the Slums which would grow more becoming a home-run Tavern named "The Golden Eyed Crow" slowly gaining power from there.
 
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Hello! Here is my review;

  • Summarize the completeness of your character's Proficiency Points here as stipulated: ( 0 left points)
  • +10 Daggers (+10 from Points)
  • +10 Short Swords (+10 from Points)
  • +10 Sneaking (+10 from Undercroft School)
  • +10 Quick Fingers (+10 From Undercroft School)
    * +10 Syndicate Contacts (+10 From Undercroft School)
Vampires who have +30 vampire points and +30 proficiency points, cap by default at 30, this includes schools. Which means if the character has attended a school, all he will only be able to use or learn is the +10 in each of the three attributes (unless one of them is a cultural proficiency) The school is included in the cap, the same as it is with magic! Additionally, I would like to request that under skill information, I would like for you to list off his mutations as a vampire, be sure to include the power or survival, guile tree mutations as they're included!

Basic Information (Expansion)

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I would like to request that you put the expansions under a spoiler and remove the informational parts of the template under each category so it cuts down on fluff and makes it easier to read!

, he holds friends high like a secondary family, but unlike his friends he treats real family with a caring touch, as he wishes not to lose one of them.
Vampires often stop caring towards family in a sentimental way after turning and see them more as tools, pawns or property rather than genuine family. I would like to request you elaborate on how he feels internally after infection and how he conducts himself towards family.

(How does your character act towards friends and family? This is roughly the same as the first paragraph, but you'd have to get more specific about how your character acts around friends and family and lovers, people they are naturally more comfortable with. Detail how this differs from how they are perceived by strangers).(What is your character's morality? Explain how your character's morality works, whether they are good, neutral, or evil, and how that manifests itself in their moral code. Are they just or corrupt? How do they see other people's corruption and evil deeds etc?)
Please remove the default informational sections! And put optional or expansions under a spoiler!

Life Story (Required)
I would like to request for you to split the life story up into categories of the characters developement so events are easier to track chroniclogically, such as childhood, years as a teenager, adulthood etc.

Be sure to tag me and highlight edits in blue when you're done!
 
Approved!

Add a summarized plot line of your character's life story. The point of the Life Story is not to give a novella long list of events that happened in the character's life, it's supposed to just create a summary of the person's life, while keeping a keen eye on explaining the previous points. The life story is supposed to tie together and provide background information as to why and how the person became what they are. It is required to limit your Life Story to about 3-4 paragraphs with no more than 800-900 words. If you want to, you can include a full Life Chronicles behind your Life Story where you go deeper into detail, with no upper limit for words, however this will not be reviewed. Keep in mind that all crucial factors should be in the Life Story, as the approval only counts for the information in the Life Story and information in the Life Chronicles may not be lore canon.
On a fianl note I would recommend cutting the informational sections from the template as they're not necessary to the final application!