Spoiler: Theme Basic Information Full Name: Stella Mariel Irvainvik Age: 31 Gender: Female Race: Velheim, Ailor Sexuality: Bisexual Skill Information Proficiency Total: 31 +20 Thin Blades (+10 from School of Griffer, +10 from Proficiency Points ) +20 Acrobatics (+10 from School of Griffer, +10 from Proficiency Points ) +10 Quick Fingers (+10 from School of Griffer) Culture Total: 31 +10 Dancing (+10 from culture points) +10 Stage Performance (+10 from culture points) +10 Horticulture (+10 from culture points) Languages Skodje 10/10 Common 8/10 Visual Information Eye Color: A faded blue, almost grey Hair Color: White blonde, often said to be ash-like in colour Hair Style: Almost always down, with a blue strip of fabric keeping it out of her face. Skin Color: Pale white Clothing: Consists of a white blouse tucked into brown pants, a blue scarf wrapped around her shoulders, which worn-down boots and leather gloves. Height: 6’0 Body Build: Athletic Weapon of Choice: Griff Blade Personality and Abilities First Paragraph: Upon seeing Stella, people would assume she was a loner of sorts. She usually finds herself sat alone in the tavern or elsewhere, just minding her own business enjoying peace and quiet. However due to her large height and appearance some may believe she would be searching for trouble. But this is actually the opposite. Upon speaking to her at first, she would seem to be a well-mannered woman, though no afraid to speak her mind when the situation comes to it. Second Paragraph: Stella inside is uncomfortable with herself, she mentions she isn’t self-conscious about her appearance. But deep down she despises her body, and wishes to just be attractive and beautiful like most of the women in regalia. However she is confident in her abilities that she had learned, knowing she can easily defend herself if the situation occurs. Her self-conscious thoughts are not often portrayed on her exterior, however those who are close to her may know of this. Third Paragraph: Stella is a friendly and kind hearted individual however is rather playful and rough-houses with family members. Towards her parents all she feels is resentment towards them, thus if she was ever to come across them, all she would be is cold and stern. Only speaking to them if she really had too, not bothering unless there was a dire situation that called for it. She tries her best to be well-mannered but often forgets who she is with and often speaks her mind, and is often being berated for acting un-ladylike. With friends Stella is an outgoing individual and often likes to have fun and play around, completely being relaxed she isn't afraid to be herself, and is often trying to crack un-funny jokes and being a tease. However within her friendship group she is the more mature one out of them all, often called the mother of the group.Towards lovers, she is completely different. Extremely bashful and shy is all that would describe her, extremely awkward with trying to convey her feelings. Fourth Paragraph: Stella is an extremely loyal woman, and follows the law to a dime. Always making she is upholding the rules. Upon seeing others corruption she sees them as a lost-cause, those who have straight from the path of good, and usually will help them to try get back on the right path. Although if they are too far gone, she will just assist with keeping these corrupt people behind lock and key, away from hurting civilians. Relationships Spoiler: Relationships Family- NPC Klaus Irvainvik - Her and her father have a rocky relationship, she saw the world in him but soon crushed that when he would quickly offer her up for money. Astrid Irvainvik - Her mother is a simple woman, albeit she did nothing to Stella. Though her idiocy on remaining to stay with her cheating father baffles her. Choosing not to question it, her relationship became distant with her. Feliks Irvainvik - Her beloved Uncle, more of a father figure in her eyes. The man she looks up to and often jokes around with, she loves her uncle. And would always speak highly of him. Both seemingly to be the best of friends in relationship. Vaughn Irvainvik - Her quiet uncle whom of which she doesn't really hear about. Though he married into the Sorenvik household and has brought the Irvainviks into a cadet branch. IC - Relationships @ZiggyStarDusted Lazaruz Lupenzi - A man she often jokes around with and a drinking companion. Though something about him makes her curious, familiarity radiates off him but she can't quite put her finger on it. No more than simple friends. @SkullScrub Barrulf Blackmyre - Her colleague at work and her superior within the Azure Vindicators. @Suicidium Hamelin d'Vaud - Her employer, the man who approached her about being a personal guard. She holds deep respect for this man, and appreciates the conversations they have. Life Story Childhood Born in a Northern town of Jorrhildr, her parents Astrid and Klaus Irvainvik were honest and hard working merchants who made a living selling fresh game caught in hunt. She was a treasured gem for her family, as it had been known, her mother’s fertility was extremely low and Stella’s presence was somewhat of a miracle. Being taught how to hunt and track animals since she was just a young child, her parents had aspirations for Stella to join their trade when she was old enough, and continue the family business when they passed away, however she didn’t like the idea of such. Having shown promise at such a young age, her parents decided to invest in sending Stella to the School of Griffer, hoping she’d perhaps blossom into a fighter that could make a living elsewhere besides Jorrhildr, to spread her roots in a different soil. It was at this time her family both fell into ruin, her father had grown broody and months later there was news of a bastard child. Her mother who was hopelessly in love with him, remained with Klaus. However Stella’s views of her father changed upon this news, not in a positive light. Teenage Years Stella did indeed flourish in the School of Griffer, and used these skills to assist her parents with hunting. She was quick with a blade and was rapidly getting better at using one. It was at this time she was wrapped up in becoming a bond wife to a Velheim merchant. Her parents were running low on funds and the only way they could keep their business running was if she was to become a bondwife, they would receive funds for her hand. This of course did not end well, and it caused Stella to soon cut ties with her parents. She left upon this year to live with an Uncle of hers, who was also a trained fighter. It was then he helped her continue her training with thin blades, allowing her to delve more into depth of it all. The two would train daily to keep their physical bodies healthy, and their reflexes fast. Adulthood- present Living with her uncle now for over 10 years, she was blossoming into an attractive yet skilled woman. Having graduated from the School of Griffer at the age of 20, she was now tutoring her cousins, alongside her uncle in her spare time. However she knew this wasn’t what she wanted to do for the rest of her life, she craved more in life, fulfilment. Stella continued to live in Jorrhildr until she reached the age of 30. It was then she began to make travel towards Regalia, her main destination on finding work. Her uncle travelled beside her, in hopes to watch his beloved Niece grow to be a strong independent woman. Living in a small one-bedroom home within the crown city, Stella began searching for a job. But only a year after moving, Hamelin d’Vaud came to her one fateful evening at the Golden Willow, offering her a job as his personal guard. Ecstatic she of course accepted and thus is where she is at today. .
Alright, let's get right into the review! Make these changes in blue and tag me when you're done! I highly suggest aligning everything to the left as having it all in the middle can be rather hard to read. Personality and Abilities In your third paragraph, I would like you to add a sentence or two elaborating on how your character acts towards friends.
Edits made in Blue! The centring of my application is just a personal preference of mine. It has been the same consistent layout as for my other applications. So I'll just be keeping it the same. @JennaLikesCoffee
