Preserved Sheet Soo-jin Hyun

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Points
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Location
twinleaf town, sinnoh region
Website
sites.google.com
Basic Information (Required)
  • Full Name: Soo-jin Hyun
  • Age: 125
  • Gender: Female
  • Race: Half-Varran Sanguine
  • Sexuality: Bisexual
Skill Information (Required)

Total Points: 30 Proficiency and 30 Vampire points (101 years of Vampirism)

Proficiency Points:
  • 30 Rogue Training (+30 from invested Vampire muters)
  • 15 Fast Blades (+15 from invested points)
  • 10 Food & Drink Sciences (+10 from invested points)
  • 5 Literary Arts (+5 from invested points)
  • 10 Athletic Training (+10 from Half-Varran bonus)
  • 10 Unarmed Combat (+10 from Half-Varran bonus)
Body Shape
  • Physical Stat: 15
    • Calculation: 15 + (0 x 2)
  • Body shape: Athletic
  • Body fat: Low

Languages

  • Tatsugo [ mother tongue. ]
  • Common [ free. ]
  • Modern Elven [ learned from her father. ]
  • Daendroque [ learned in her adolescence, from work ]

Vampire Mutations ( 10 muters, Guile Tree )
  • Blood's Lust
  • Feeding Delight
  • Shadow Flight
  • Disguise
  • Shadow Mask
  • Terror Panic
  • Hidden Home
  • Innocent Guise
  • Shimmer Mask
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Visual Information (Required)
  • Eye Color: Pale gold eyes, the color of straw.
  • Hair Color: Raven black.
  • Hair Style: Long and mostly unkempt, often put into a ponytail for the sake of ease. She has bangs that level off at her eyebrows.
  • Skin Color: Very pale, choosing to not spend much time in the sun.
  • Clothing: She prefers trousers for movement, but will wear whatever is available. Not particularly picky.
  • Height: 5'8
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Personality and Abilities (Required)
  • First Paragraph: In part due to her vampiric affliction, Soo-jin is largely seen as apathetic and lethargic. She makes her hesitance to assist others very clear, preferring to find something more interesting and beneficial to her. Due to her many years of being a Guile vampire, she's learned to keep her emotions reined in, as well as imitating the expressions she sees from others. Those who are around her see her as greedy, hoarding things to herself, no matter who they belong to. She's largely a kleptomaniac, finding herself unable to resist filching things.

  • Second Paragraph: The woman is largely confident in her abilities as a sneak and as a vampire, after spending so many decades as one. The faces she wears are often not her own, and while masquerading as someone else, her persona is variable. In truth, this often confuses her when she's not disguised. This leaves Soo-jin unsure of how to act, largely, for fear that she's still in-character. The woman loses herself in the many roles and people she disguises as, blending the lines between her personality and that of others. After years of being able to steal with very few consequences, the Half-Varran finds the allure of other people's valuables irresistible, her hands moving before she realizes.

  • Third Paragraph: Soo-jin doesn't find people she trusts as friends often, keeping most at an arm's length. For those who manage to make their way into her good graces, the woman opens up a bit. She externalizes most of her thoughts, and is excessively eager to share what she's stolen. To lovers, she's very needy, demanding most of their time. She's selfish in this regard, expecting leniency when she hasn't the time to pay attention to them, but ends up being frustrated when her partner can't spare time on her.

  • Fourth Paragraph: She believes in survival by any means necessary. It's the privilege of the strong to exert their strength over the weak, who must obey. This forms the foundation of her belief on relations between all things - vampires and those who aren't turned, warriors and scholars, Varran and Half-Varran. If she perceives someone as being stronger than her, she's less likely to challenge or steal from them. If someone is angry that they're stolen from, it's their fault for being weak.
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Likes

  • Describe three different activities, things or items that your character loves to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character happy and in a good mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they love these things and then also explain how it makes them feel.
Dislikes

  • Describe three different activities, things or items that your character hates to see, do, taste or smell. Generally speaking these are things that make your character annoyed or angry and in a general bad mood when they are near them/doing them. Go into detail why they hate these things and explain also how it makes them feel.

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Life Story (Required)

  • Soo-jin Rashida Hyun was born to Amon Mifsud and Eun-seo Hyun, travelling merchants who were traversing Daendroque. Her mother, who was frail to begin with, died giving birth to the Half-Varran. She is raised by the merchant group, who consisted of Ch'ien-ji peddling their wares, and Amon, one of a few Varran hired to protect the group. She is given her mother's surname in her memory.

  • The girl spent her childhood amongst the merchants and their hired help, learning from both. Her education was handled rigorously, and afterwards, she'd learn how to wield a dagger from her father. The youth had a rather bright childhood, loved by both peoples of her community. The group eventually splits, having made enough money individually to stand on their own. She and her father return to a bustling port town, where she befriends other children around her age.

  • Amongst the presence of peers, the now teenaged Half-Varran begins to turn to petty crime and thievery to make money for her father, who struggles to find work. Her smaller frame, lithe build, and skill with a dagger make her ideal for creeping around, and she begins to bring home enough money for them to afford a cheap room, lifting them out of homelessness. The girl's father leaves her in the care of a neighbor, having found a job on another Varran's ship.

  • Her father makes a sizable amount of wealth this way, sending it home to his daughter. He returns very rarely, spending most of his time ensuring Soo-jin lives healthily. A few years into this lifestyle, by the time the girl is about to become an adult, she receives a letter about her father's death at sea. She compensates the neighbor, who'd mothered her for so long, before leaving the city with her money.

  • The woman is now a young adult, and despite having a small fortune, can't get enough. She resorts to stealing and plundering, sometimes joining with bandit or thief groups to bring in more. Her life continues this way, an endless cycle of stealing and being stolen from, of beating and being beaten. On one particular encounter with a sanguine thief, she decides that the vampirism is the next step for her, to supplement her thievery.

  • Soo-jin has difficulty fitting into the age-relative hierarchical structure of the coven, though the gradual changes to her personality due to her affliction soon remedies this. Her mind warps, as a vampire's does as they age, to treat everything as hers. Any affection she'd felt grows into a sense of belonging, frightening what few non-sanguine friends she had. Well equipped with skills for survival, she outlives most other newbloods and rises through the ranks. At this time, her body specializes to make her a Guile vampire, making stealing easier.

  • She lives for decades like this, spending her money and exhausting the enjoyment out of most things. Her interest in money has focused into a keen kleptomania, robbery being the only thing that gives her a rise. The woman hears of discord in the holy city, and, like any good thief, moves there to take advantage of it.
 
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Here is my review:

Skill Information

  • You put 10 Food and Drink Sciences but marked it as +15 within parenthesis. Please rework this so the point count matches up.
Personality and Abilities
  • In your first paragraph, I would like for you to rethink the wording for the final sentence. You introduce it with "Those who are closer to her," which also makes this sentence more so in-line with the second paragraph's (or even third paragraph's) prompt. Instead, if this greed does convey itself to strangers, how would they see it, or how would it appear to other people?
  • In your second paragraph, you state that she is unsure how to act largely because she could still be in-character. This wording is a little confusing to me. Do you mean to say she isn't sure how to act differently from how she feels inside, or does she put on so many faces that she sometimes loses track of what behavior she should portray?
  • For your third paragraph, I would shorten and combine the first two sentences, as this part of her personality can be kept brief. However, I would instead like for you to put more detail in how she expresses herself to friends and how her clingy behavior shows itself with any lovers she may have.
Life Story
  • I would like for you to expand on the last paragraph. We only get a glimpse of what her life was like after she became infected with Vampirism before we are suddenly jumped with her transition into the Holy City. Consider discussing any shifts in personality, in goals, and perhaps if she had any particular bad experiences that made her so distrusting of people.
Make your edits in a legible red then tag me when you have completed them. @romeowo