Approved Sheet Skotadi Xotiko

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  1. ImNotRatty

    ImNotRatty Certified Rat Bastard

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    @HydraLana Ezekiel, Ezekiel! Of course changed up his Affliction to Ezekiel, changed his Proficiencies a tad to fit such, Added where he was Afflicted in 70 - 100 of his Life Story, and I believe that's it.
     
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    HydraLana The Very Gay Walking Talking Lore Encyclopedia Staff Member Lore3

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    Re-Approved.
     
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  3. ImNotRatty

    ImNotRatty Certified Rat Bastard

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    @HydraLana Hello, hello! Changed things up for the new(ish) Character App Template. Do let me know if anything is overlooked, misplaced, or otherwise funky.
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    @HydraLana Kathar update! Little was changed besides Abilities, beyond nitpicking little bits for continuity with the new update.
     
  6. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Claimed for review!

    App looks great! If you'd like to add progression talents later down the line, feel free to throw them in and tag me for review.

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    Mollymock The Verdant Preacher Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Please remove all of this from a spoiler and remove all the flavour text/ability descriptions. It needs to be easily digestible at a glance. Once you have done this, ping me and we should be good to go.
     
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    Understandable, I skimmed it down to just pack names/ability names, let me know if I need to do any other formatting changes
     
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    - I just realized, I never actually pinged. @Mollymock
     
  11. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Howdy! App looks fantastic. Do you mind also throwing in what planar alignment your Mage abilities are drawing from? (Void/Exist/Primal/Oridal). I know it's super obviously Void, but it just need to be somewhere on there for ease of reference.

    Besides that no changes needed! Thanks for the speedy clean-up

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