Rejected Sheet Sirius Oloran

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  1. DrHasagi

    DrHasagi Just a guy

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    • Full Name: Siritelius Byletathir ïeshlyanra-Oloran Bel-Antaal Ivaëlle
      • Simplified: Sirius Oloran
    • Race: Teledden Altalar
    • Age: 37 Years
    • Sex: Male
    • Sexuality: Hand-Holding
    • Eye Color: Ocean Green
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    • When he was young, Sirius was introduced to the Faith of Estel, being guided to such via his parents which was among the few things they gladly taught him during his childhood, and he had grown interested in who he now has deemed his patron; Sei-Mann, who he remains devoted to.
    • Sirius is a Teledden healer and alchemist, and is always seeking further knowledge among anything he can grasp, while also supporting his family and the public via his medical knowledge, and his alchemical creations, even if he can be a bit too serious and uptight with all things, appearing stoic for a majority of the time he is present. Regardless, he wants to provide aid and support through medical means, be it alchemy, or sorcery.
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    Points: 60 Total Points (50 Core | 10 Hobby)
    Preferred Weapon: Rapier

    • Core
      • +7 Rapier Combat (Core)
      • +4 Caster Ranged Combat (Core)
    • Point Buy
      • +9 Exist Sorcery (Core)
      • +6 Alchemy (Core)
        • Healing Alchemy
        • Volatile Alchemy
      • +6 Linguistics (Core)
      • +3 Arcanology (Core)
        • Affliction Knowledge
    • Talent
      • +10 Medical Training (Core)
    • Hobby
      • +10 Theatre Art (5 Core | 5 Hobby | 5 Boost)
      • +5 Winemaking (5 Hobby)
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    • Teledden Altalar
      • Age Control 1
      • Arken Speculate 1
      • Arcane Mastery 1
      • Memory Sense 1
      • Exorcism 2
      • Servile Collar 1
      • Shrewd Insight 1
      • Altalar Master 1
      • Keen Mind 1
    • Talea's Blessing
      • Sei-Mann's Craft
    • Exist Sorcery
      • Exorcism 1
      • Light Mend 2
      • Power Curse 1
    • Caster Ranged
      • Spell Shot
    • Medical Training
      • Light Mend 1
      • Light Mend 2
        • NOTE: Medical Training versions of Light Mend 1 and Light Mend 2 are both Mundane.
    • Alchemy
      • Healing Alchemy
      • Volatile Alchemy
    • Arcanology
      • Affliction Knowledge
    Languages
    • Common | Free
    • Modern Altalar | Regional
    • Zorrana | Linguistics
    • Ithanian | Linguistics


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    • Sirius has no form of mutation or abnormalities on his person to note.
    • Sirius is around the height of the average Teledden, standing at 6'2" and being more of a lightweight at 115lbs, along with a slim, yet toned body. His long, slightly-wavy hair is sandy blonde in color, and is typically tied into a long braid that reaches his waist. Under his left eye is a small, yet easily-noticeable cut, while having no other scars on his body. His usual attire leans more towards a fine mix of being dressed up for formal occasions, while also remaining to be quite comfy, and sticking with shades of blue.
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    • Childhood
      • Siritelius was born as a Teledden, one parent sharing that bloodline while the other was a Slizzar, the secret of Slizzar being in his family lineage being kept from him as he was raised in Tanaar Ivaelle. He had a rather peaceful life, despite not seeing his parents much, along with being kept separated from his sister, whom was born alongside him.
    • Adolescence
      • Early on in his life, he was kept away from his sister, and did not often see his parents. It was mostly the servants of his household and the teachers at his school that taught him his skills, such as sorcery and spell-casting, but one of the few things that his parents gladly taught Siritelius was religion, where he'd grow to be devoted in the Faith of Estel, and soon enough was drawn to Sei-Mann. Later on, Siritelius gained an interest in fencing after wanting to find a way to stay active and physically healthy, but not necessarily for combat. Before he could settle for second best, however, his parents surprisingly encouraged him to strive for better in a positive manner, to which he happily took the encouragement, while still holding resentment. That resentment would grow after he would be told the big secret of the family, where, along with Teledden like himself, there were also Eremite Slizzar among them, such as his own sister. He agreed to keep the secret safe, though couldn't help but feel shocked, and lied to. He opted to distract himself with further studies, and those studies would spark his interest in the medical field, studying it as much as he could in his home's library, until he was sent off to school to get a more in-depth education on the world of medicine and other practices of caretaking, as well as get his first real experience of interacting with Ailor.
    • Adulthood
      • As time went on during his studies, Siritelius had found it'd be easier if he went by "Sirius," and much like what his name sounds like, he grew to take a lot of things seriously, growing stoic and not wanting to be distracted from his studies, keeping the thought of impressing his family close. Soon, Sirius would graduate, but found himself wanting more knowledge, so he travelled in search of other forms of medical care, where he found a local alchemist. Through him, he learned how to not only use alchemy for medical, but also for harm. When Sirius felt himself ready to leave after seeing his teacher begin to grow unstable, the latter tried to keep him from leaving. Sirius managed to escape, but not unharmed, as he left with a small cut under his eye, a reminder of what humanity can be like in his eyes. With the hope of seeing his family as well as clinging to his faith, he finally made it home. Shortly after he returned, he found that the production of wine was quite similar to alchemy, and decided to expand his knowledge, picking up the art of winemaking. As time passed even further, Sirius would be introduced to more of his family, Teledden and Slizzar alike, and through them, as well as his readings in the library, he would learn about the city of Regalia. After a delayed trip due to recent conflict, he found himself travelling there.
    • Sirius had come to Regalia with the goal of supporting his family through the medical field, and possibly even winemaking scene, be it to help grow his family's reputation, as well as help provide medical treatment where needed. Secondly, he also wishes to quench his thirst for any knowledge that he finds himself interested in, which he is always looking to gain more of.
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    Youth
    On the rising sun of November 13th, 272 A.C., in Tanaar Ivaelle, Siritelius was born with the blood of a Teledden Altalar, alongside a twin sister, unknowing of the Slizzar secret within his family, and such a secret remained hidden from him for the moment. Regardless, his childhood was rather peaceful, being raised in a wealthy family, though did not often see his parents, and he was often kept away from his sister. Instead, it was mainly servants that would take to his teachings, and when he wasn't at home, it was the teachers at his school. One of the servants was instructed to teach the young Teledden sorcery upon him turning seven, and to Siritelius's surprise, he had a knack for it. Despite this, though, he was never met with much praise from his parents, other than a nod or the occasional "well done," followed up with, "but you can do better." Because of this, Siritelius tried all he could to perhaps get more than that, seeking some way to see if they were at all proud in the moments where he did see them. One of the things that they gladly assisted him with, however, was introducing him to the Faith of Estel. Over time, he grew more drawn to Sei-mann.

    Later on during his youth, he became rather interested in fencing, seeing it mostly as a way to become more fit and in healthy shape rather than be built for combat. He settled for second best, though to his surprise, he was met with encouragement from his parents. The inspiration of wanting to make his parents proud remained, but with a more positive outlook, though Siritelius still had some form of resentment due to how he felt they viewed him early on, but he tried his best to move past it. Eventually, his parents also felt it was time to introduce Sirius to the secret of his family. He was told that, along with Teledden much like himself, there were Eremite Slizzar among them, one of them being his own sister. He was promised his life would be much easier if he kept the secret and didn't reveal a word, to which he agreed, and added in the task of learning their language as a part of his studies. Though, he couldn’t help but feel shocked and rather lied to, unsure of who was really Teledden and who was a Slizzar. Due to this, he opted to distract himself with his studies, as well as grow more devoted to his faith.


    Adolescence
    By the time he turned fifteen, he began to find himself growing an interest in the medical field, despite not knowing if his family had any form of history in the career. He studied it as much as he could in the library of his home, and even signed up for classes to get better instruction and teachings. Soon, he'd find that he studied all he could at home, and after some convincing, he was allowed to be sent off to Regalian Ecological Academy, where he'd obtain a more in-depth education on natural sciences, and also get a more up-close experience with Ailor culture, which he found to be rather distasteful. Before having arrived, Siritelius had decided to go by "Sirius," as to make things simpler. And much like his name sounded like, he took a more serious approach towards advancing towards his goals, becoming more stoic towards others as he focused on his studies, though the inspiration of making his family proud remained within him.

    In time, Sirius finally graduated after three years. He wished to learn more, but did not return to the school, but decided to find another means of providing medical treatment. During his travels, Sirius found himself in a small town outside the city where his school was, and came upon a local alchemist, who agreed to teach him how to use such for medical purposes. He spent an extra year in the town, enhancing and improving his medical knowledge as well as gaining a new interest in alchemy. Eventually, though, Sirius had grown skilled with it, having learned everything he could from the alchemist, whom he learned to know as Ademar. He began to notice that Ademar began to grow rather unstable mentally, though, and decided he shouldn’t overstay his welcome. While preparing to take his leave, however, Ademar attempted to incapacitate him, not wanting Sirius to leave. The latter managed to make his escape, though an alchemic burst managed to strike his eye, thankfully not enough to maim, but leaving a reminder of that unfortunate night in the form of a small cut, causing him to grow further into stoniness, whilst clinging to both his religious faith, and the hope to see his family again. After all was said and done, however, Sirius would finally return to Tanaar Ivaelle.

    Adulthood
    Time flew on after Sirius returned home, and during his travels, especially after the night he was attacked, he grew to take a lot of things rather seriously, holding a neutral expression most of the time. Though, being home now did not mean he completely opted to just relax. By the time he reached the age of twenty-five, he grew a taste for wine, and opted to try and incorporate his alchemy skills into the liquor. He grew to be rather decent in winemaking after a couple years, even opting to make wine for the family, as well as sell it. As time passed, Sirius was introduced to more of his family, including that of the Slizzar, whom he soon became more familiar with. During his reading in the library, he was told about the city of Regalia, and though his trip to the city was delayed by a conflict in the city that had recently ended, he eventually found himself travelling there.
     
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    microwavemmm no such thing Staff Member Lore1

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    Hi there, just a couple things. @DrHasagi

    • It hasn't been made clear where you're getting your 13 Physical Stat from. It seems like it should only be 11 from Rapier & Theatre Arts. For convenience's sake, please write out the Phys Stat calculation in addition to declaring its total. (Ex: 5 + 12(.5) = 11)
    • Since a rate of 7/10 in the Faith of Estel & harnessing Talea's Blessing projects Sirius as fairly devout, I'd suggest mentioning their religion in their Life Story at least once, & how it affected/still affects them.
    Make the appropriate edits in blue & tag me once finished. Thanks!
     
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    @murderwaveaaa Hiya! I noticed my miscalculation and fixed it to 11. Secondly, I added it in his backstory as to how he is still affected by his faith/why he is devoted to it.

    Overall changes have been marked in this color!
     
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    @microwavemmm Heya!! I updated this sheet to the new char-sheet template, and also made some proficiency-point adjustments due to Schooling no longer being a thing. Overall changes (apart from the template-update) have been made in this color!
     
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