Simari Elsynfaere

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  1. HorizonCythulu

    HorizonCythulu The Insane

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Simari Elsynfaere
    • Age: 105
    • Gender: Female
    • Race: Lesarra Altalar
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Preferred Weapon: Unarmed

    Visual Information
    • Eye Color: Green
    • Hair Color: Blonde
    • Hair Style: Long and Curly
    • Skin Color: Pale, light skinned
    • Clothing: Some well worn trousers, a white tunic and stylish draped cloth in the middle.
    • Height: 6'2
    Skill Information:

    Total Points: 50 (+10 Hobby, +10 Talent)

    Core Group:
    • 15 Linguistic Knowledge (+5 Racial Boost)
    • 20 Crossbow Combat
    • 9 Metallugy
      Rich Metallurgy
      Utility Metallurgy
      Finecraft Metallurgy
    Talent Group:
    • Perception Training (+10 Talent Points)
    • 10 Woodwind Instrument
    Hobby Group:
    • 10 Circus Art (+10 Hobby Points)
    • 1 Drawing Art

    Body Shape
    • 10 Body Stat (10 Body Stat Cap; Lesarra Altalar)
    • Average
    • Low Body Fat
    Languages
    • Common (Learned through childhood)
    • Modern Altalar (Learned through Childhood)
    • Twi Dialect (3 Linguistic Knowledge, 15 Linguistics to learn)
    • K’alatibiri (3 Linguistic Knowledge)
    • Kathar Elven (3 Linguistic Knowledge)
    • Plains Elven (3 Linguistics Knowledge)
    • Faraddi (3 Linguistics Knowledge)
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations
    • Racials
    • Age Control I
    • Arken Sense I
    • Arcane Mastery I
    • Inth Gift I
    • Inth Gift II
    • Inth Gift III
    • Control Counter I

    Personality and Abilities:

    • How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness?
      • She's very prideful, so she would smirk knowing she deserved this. She is a very hard worker, so she might feel entitled to such a feeling after putting so much effort into something she herself enjoys. Also a bit cocky often.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?
      • She might find it in herself to fight back against something she's afraid of. At least, with her sister nearby mainly. She relies on her a lot more than she'll ever admit up front. If her sister were ever gone for any reason, she might feel alone and unable to fight against whatever is against her.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?
      • She would try to bury it in the back of her head, doing things to put it away until it eventually gets dug up, and she'll go to her sister for a bit of guidance. As she's the youngest, she relies on her for questions and whatnot, often finding it easy to let her emotions out.
    • How does your character view Law and Authorities?
      • She used to not have any issues with the laws and authority, as it seems she abides by them. She respects authority, and gets by following the law, for now at least. She would be happy to bend the rules if her sister's life was ever at stake.
    • How does your character feel about Races other than their own?
      • She has no disliking to any race. She does however, look down upon commoners most of the time. The closest thing she has against any race are Kathars and Sihndars, but that's mainly just her watching out for herself, not because she'd be afraid they would hurt her.
    • How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?
      • She's a believer of the Old Fayth, but is rather respectful to others' religions. She doesn't seem to like talking about her own religion, but more just quiet acknowledgement towards it and moving on with her own life. She prays when she feels she's blessed, and always wishes for her sister's safety.
    • How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?
      • As she was able to pick up these powers on her travels, she feels it's apart of her. Something that she embraces, and mainly learned for her sister's sake without her having to carry the burden. For those who also have such magic, she feels connected to those people in a way, even if hers might be looked down upon.
    • How does your character feel towards their family?
      • She dislikes her family for having to suppress everything that she's ever enjoyed. Smithing was her biggest hobby, and if she told them she knew her family would look down on her. She's glad she never has to deal with their presence.
    • What is your character the most proud of about themselves?
      • She's proud of her skills, and her abilities. She feels she has enough to protect her sister. While her smithing is more of a hobby, she doesn't like to tell anyone about it, thus why she kept it from her sister for so long, and doesn't plan to tell her until she feels she can share it completely.
    • What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?
      • Definitely her sister, and in the hopes to have a new life after splitting from her family. She knows with her sister she can have a house, a job, and a normal life that her family tried to take away from her.
    • What is your character's biggest insecurity?
      • The fear of not being enough. Not being able to safe her sister, and not being able to hide her emotions. She does a decent job keeping things wound up but she feels herself slowly slipping away and there's nothing she can do about it. She tries to run away from it it's like the void, no matter how far she runs it'll always still be there, and possibly closer than she would expect it.
    • What is your character's biggest fear?
      • Anything bad happening to her sister. She cares for her more than anyone else in her family. She could never just imagine a life without her, and she wishes to stay with her for as long as she can. If she ever lost her sister for any reason, she could feel herself going to a dark place, one where she doesn't want to think about.


    Life Story

    Born in the city of Graelle Talea alongside Reldaya (her twin), they couldn’t be more different in terms of personality. While Reldaya was that of more brash and bold, she was kinda quieter, but it seems her sister rubbed off on her quite a bit, being rather selfish at times and stuck up. But, she is rational at times, depending. It seems her enjoyment of both martial arts and smithing were abnormal to that of her sister.

    As her sister had loved the glaive, and thus seemed to be rather normal compared to her sister; her enjoyments of crossbow shooting and smithing where well hidden. Due to her more flexible form, she was able to slip out at night to be an apprentice while growing up. It's something she's hidden from her family for quite a while, and even her own sister still didn't know. She was rather great at hiding things, but it seems her sister knew about her combat ability, and found each other sparring rather often.

    As their family had set a certain path for each of them, and Simari didn't seem to enjoy cooking or anything along the lines of being a housewife, she truly hated this for many reasons. But, she put up with it for her sister, and so she wouldn't been seen as a failure as that of her sister. Seeing her sister being ridiculed for her interests made her even scared to stand up to her mother, making her happy for now. After her sister had lost her title to the heir, her brother took it without fail. Simari had no use for it, she didn't want to be stuck in this house any longer to grow up whatever her mother wanted to be since it was only her sister who she wanted to please. As one night her sister stormed out, she searched for her to bring her home, wondering how long this could go on for.

    Until, Simari had been married off to someone, the date approaching very fast with very little warning. She didn't want this, she wanted to fall in love with someone of her own choosing, and do what she enjoyed. And so, she had to leave her home, her city and the one thing that seemed to make her feel worth anything. To leave Graelle Talea, to never see her family again and take her sister with her to make a new life for themselves. They traveled for quite a while, even using their time to brush up on Twi Dialect, as it for a way to strengthen their bond. It was her sister's idea as she used her previous knowledge of Neflins to look for such knowledge, and managed to buy it and both of them spent time learning it.

    These travels went on for a long time, to points where they had to camp out in places that were often scary, or nasty just to get by. But she didn't mind it, for she was with her sister, and she would do anything to make that a reality. If this was going to be a different life for the both of them, she was going to make it possible. Being inducted as a worker for the Gochnipunchni Imports and Investments, she would finally make use of her skills and even get to work alongside that of her sister.
     
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  2. Arhbi

    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    Claimed for review expect a reply shortly.
     
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    Arhbi Peacemaker Supremium

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    Please also list the proficiency invested into Sorcery under your proficiency points section

    Approved.
     
  4. HorizonCythulu

    HorizonCythulu The Insane

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    @Arhbi Points reworked to be compliant with proficiency changes.

    Take a look when you can, thank you.
     
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  6. HorizonCythulu

    HorizonCythulu The Insane

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    @Arhbi Changes made to proficiency update

    Changed a few previous skills, remove sorcery.

    Let me know if anything else needs to be changed.
     
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  8. HorizonCythulu

    HorizonCythulu The Insane

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    @Arhbi Updated to fit in with Metallurgy update, did some point reworking and fixed racials.
     
  9. HydraLana

    HydraLana The Very Gay Walking Talking Lore Encyclopedia Staff Member Lore3

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    My Review:
    • I will mention, you get the whole Pack with the investment, so they can also know Ancient Altalar if you want.
    • Unless I'm mistaken, this player is nowhere near online this server anymore, and the business doesn't exist anymore, Maybe look through your overall Life Story, and see if there are any additions or adjustments to be made, in addition to adding more information onto the end explaining what they have been up to.
    Tag me once this is done in green @HorizonCythulu
     
  10. HorizonCythulu

    HorizonCythulu The Insane

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    Because they still worked there for as long as the company existed, would it be fine to have it so they worked there for some time and then quit or do I have to void working there?
     
  11. HydraLana

    HydraLana The Very Gay Walking Talking Lore Encyclopedia Staff Member Lore3

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    You don't have to void working there, but that as your final point of the Life Story doesn't make much sense. It was just a suggestion to make that specific name of the place vaguer, since the player is no longer around on the server. Do whatever you want in the end, just, add more to the end of the LS.
     

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