Approved Sheet Sihn-baeldeth

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  1. Axronix

    Axronix Sihndork

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    Character Information

    Full Name:
    Ailduin Saelethil Taerentym-Quigwym Aumravasaar Lysanthihrendil Tahlviknostroi-Mahendirlil
    Goes By: Sihn-Saelethil "Baeldeth" Ell'Aumravasaar-Tahlvin
    Race: Avanthar (Northern Tainted)
    Age: 33
    Sex: Male
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Find out.
    Eye Color: Violet

    Core Concept


    Saelethil has a weak faith in Evsrenllir-Mullontavan, believing religion to be only something that gives a purpose, a reason to fight.
    Saelethil is a hunter of the arcane that takes on a tanky frontliner niche. He hunts the arcane because the sihndar ideology has been instilled in him down to the bone.

    Proficiency Information


    +8 Spear Combat
    +9 Sword Combat
    +12 Shielding Combat
    +15 Bola Combat (Racial Boost)
    +6 Linguistics
    +5 Perception Training
    +10 Cooking Art ( Hobby )

    29 Phys


    50/50

    Ability Information


    Sihndar Ability Kit:
    https://wiki.massivecraft.com/index.php?title=Test&oldid=35859


    Languages:
    Common (Regalia)
    Sinnayed (Regional)
    Saan (Linguistics)
    Zasta (Linguistics)


    Appearance Information

    No mutations or odd features.
    Saelethil is 6'6", weighs 300 lbs, and has crimson red hair and violet eyes.

    Life Story

    Born to two avanthar. Learned common and Saan. Sent off to the College of Sins early on, about age 9. He was trained in khoptar combat, picking up shielding along the way.
    He shortened his name, and moved to Ellatrix upon graduating, fighting fauna and demons there, picking up spear combat, and bola combat.
    He took on sihndar naming customs, learned Sinnayed, and moved back home, working to fulfill the sihndar mission there. He learned to cook.
    He moved to Regalia, going by "Baeldeth Tahlvin." He learned Zasta from an allar he was travelling with along the way.

    Learned Alchemy from Iranela di Ithania
     
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    Claimed.
     
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    Night Silver can only be crafted through Altalar Forges or through the world progression system. I'll need you to explain how your character procured a night silver sword.

    I'm also going to ask that you go back and spend some time on formatting your app. As of right now the formatting is unpleasant to follow.
     
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    Axronix Sihndork

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    All done. Changed night silver to STEEL. Plan is to gain night silver in the game.
     
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    Approved.
     
  6. Axronix

    Axronix Sihndork

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    @Arhbi
    Resubmitting now that ive roleplayed baeldeth a bit.
    Multiple changes, changed out wall climbing 3 cause its useless with dryder form, and baeldeth would have never learned it. Changed winemaking for cooking, as winemaking would not have been present during his childhood.
    He uses a khoptar. i felt it was unrealistic for him to use a greatsword, so yeah.
    changed proficiency to match khoptar. also added mutations and changed hair color and outfit
    let me know if i need to change anything.
    thanks!
     
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    Axronix Sihndork

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    Think I did this right.
    Let me know if anything needs changed, thank you!
     
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    1. Please go back and remove the underline from being on everything. It makes it unpleasant to read.
    2. Please go back and reformat your app so it looks neat.

    After you have done these two things, I'll review your points. @Axronix
     
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    Axronix Sihndork

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    shabam. Let me know if anything else needs changed, I overhauled it. Changed a lot of things.
     
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    This needs a new reviewer! Complete overhaul done after many hours of roleplay with this OC.
     
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    @Axronix Hello I have claimed this app for review, expect a response within 36 hours.
     
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    @Axronix Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    Completely overhauled.

    - New Format
    - New Backstory
    - New Magic/Proficiencies
    - New Linguistics
    - New Lording
    - Made him older as well.
     
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    @Axronix Everything seems to be in order, approved.
     
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    Whats up. Resubmitting.. sihndar update.
    New Name. New Race. New Baeldeth.
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Howdy! App looks great, very clean and easy to skim. There's just one thing that I think could be expanded on, and after that I can approve it:
    • Your core concept is a bit short at the moment. Could you elaborate on why he hunts the arcane, or what his personal philosophy is? It'd help give reason behind why he fights.
    Beyond that everything looks good! Go ahead and tag me once you've made those changes so I can review again :D
     
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